u might wanna shorten them down since all u have are just pics and sometimes the text goes too fast but overall nice fanfic especially since its about the Yondaime
to tell you the truth everything was great until you added all that kung-fu panda stuff. You should have just focused it on Minato and his wife and maybe how Minato fought the Demon Fox! that would be crazy fan-made prequel thingy!
I know but in every fanfiction I've read, its starts out with the 4th sealing the fox in Naruto and both his parents dieing. I wanted to try something different. And for future reference this is an Alternate Universe fanfic. Just to let you know, but thanks for the advise.
lol you should do whatever it is that you like. I'm not naruto expert, and I've never watched a fanfic but i do know what they are. So yeah something new is always good rather then doing what the others have done.
thanks but I will include the fox demon attack that will be chapter 4 or 5. I promise the fox attack and the sealing will be in one of those chapters.
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ck101712 3 months ago
You should join fanfiction(dot)net. This will bring more fans to read.
tigerqueen007 2 years ago
no offense but both ur vids are MAD long :P
u might wanna shorten them down since all u have are just pics and sometimes the text goes too fast but overall nice fanfic especially since its about the Yondaime
thehiddentalent 3 years ago
sorry about that. I'll remember that when I do part three, but you did like it right?
ladystar2005 3 years ago
to tell you the truth everything was great until you added all that kung-fu panda stuff. You should have just focused it on Minato and his wife and maybe how Minato fought the Demon Fox! that would be crazy fan-made prequel thingy!
thehiddentalent 3 years ago
I know but in every fanfiction I've read, its starts out with the 4th sealing the fox in Naruto and both his parents dieing. I wanted to try something different. And for future reference this is an Alternate Universe fanfic. Just to let you know, but thanks for the advise.
ladystar2005 3 years ago
But I'll give it a try. I'll work on another one and do it the way you suggested. How does that sound?
ladystar2005 3 years ago
lol you should do whatever it is that you like. I'm not naruto expert, and I've never watched a fanfic but i do know what they are. So yeah something new is always good rather then doing what the others have done.
thehiddentalent 3 years ago
thanks but I will include the fox demon attack that will be chapter 4 or 5. I promise the fox attack and the sealing will be in one of those chapters.
ladystar2005 3 years ago
thank. Did you like it? Be honest please. ^_^
ladystar2005 3 years ago
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wow lol
tabi8868 3 years ago