really great work! you almost had me convinced the girl was cyco but yea! nice job all of you!!! i hope i get to go to vfs and become so skillful and learn just as much!
this reminded me of the movie The Forgotten with Julianne Moore but instead of aliens doing some supernatural being it is just a woman making you look crazy and stealing your husband
Unfortunately I had to watch this on my 10 year old pc so the video is about 6 minutes behing the audio, however I loved the story. Well written, well acted, well directed. Forget the negative criticism. Yes, different aspects can always be better but you are still learing and the journey is sometimes the best part of the trip. Keep making art! What is the possibility of getting a dvd copy?
hhhh awesome horror shortfilm, really great job- the acting was PERFECT 0 and yeah i love the ending hehe the slow motion sentence :D CREEPY in A GREAT WAY!!!
I like the plot, but you didn't have any motive for why this company was doing this. Also, the music clashed with the theme. Use a little bit more suspenseful music and up-to-date with your setting.
Really well done. Captured the noir. One thing, I know the lighting was dull and shadowy in parts, though I think it should have remained that way throughout the film. The bright colours sometimes clashed with the music. Loved the transition at 9:14. 5/5
@Starpluslover yeah her motive is not explained. I don't get why she's doing it. Its one of the flaws of the film IMO. After all that we have no idea why or what she'd doing and by the end, as a viewer, I don't care much for any of the characters or the story.
None of the acting was extraordinary. The boss is a bad actor in my opinion. The woman that is the doctor was pretty bad too. Henry was probably the best out of them. Susan the second best. The music was distracting. The story reminds me of some movie that came out pretty recently. I hate to be so negative, but normally I am fascinated with your productions. This was one of your worst.
My brother did really good ;)
CityFlashLights 2 weeks ago
the actors were really good :) really interesting
iluvwatermelons 1 month ago
jeniferrrrrrrrrrrr
GSkouf93 1 year ago
that last secretary was so fine.
omnomnomandrew 1 year ago
that guy looks like soldierknowsbest
DRESTA12345678910 1 year ago
how do you feel?
i feel great.
woah he feels good nah nah nah nah nah nah nah and he knows that he should now nah nah nah nah nah nah.
transplants125 1 year ago
amazing; it will be so interesting to see what these students have accomplished after 10 years. quite obviously some talent to watch out for.
kage881 1 year ago
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kage881 1 year ago
this amaaazing! i LOVE it!
muchmaplevideoz 1 year ago
really great work! you almost had me convinced the girl was cyco but yea! nice job all of you!!! i hope i get to go to vfs and become so skillful and learn just as much!
SHoneen
Rosalea13 1 year ago
Brilliant. A little sluggish, but I stayed with it, despite the Batman music?
relentless 2 years ago
this reminded me of the movie The Forgotten with Julianne Moore but instead of aliens doing some supernatural being it is just a woman making you look crazy and stealing your husband
michelewilla 2 years ago
oh man i thought i had the story figured out but what a twist at the end. loved it!
kcaseyfrench 2 years ago
very good idea, i liked it allot, it was almost as if everyone was, in the matrix almost
because, the matrix being a computer generated life, anyone would be able to erase another, if they knew how, and knew much about them
redbloodyhands 2 years ago
Unfortunately I had to watch this on my 10 year old pc so the video is about 6 minutes behing the audio, however I loved the story. Well written, well acted, well directed. Forget the negative criticism. Yes, different aspects can always be better but you are still learing and the journey is sometimes the best part of the trip. Keep making art! What is the possibility of getting a dvd copy?
KeepOnTruckinNYC 2 years ago
Tell me how this is Cliche! This is just an awesome idea... I have never seen an other just like it.
simonpetertygesen 2 years ago
That's pretty cool--very Hitchcock-esque!
GoodSirGundam 2 years ago
the story was awesome, however i find the music really annoying and it spoilt otherwise a great short-film..
uniquexor 2 years ago
@uniquexor I agree, the music was distracting.
simply4savannah 2 years ago
I take this as a reminder that pills shouldn't let all pain go away.Some unwanted feelings are needed.
FierceRodents 2 years ago
story was great.... everything else was average or below... i presume they didn't ask for help from the film production program
abdoismx 2 years ago
uau, really really great..
bravo! 5/5!!
mita14 2 years ago
hhhh awesome horror shortfilm, really great job- the acting was PERFECT 0 and yeah i love the ending hehe the slow motion sentence :D CREEPY in A GREAT WAY!!!
Pegasolta1992 2 years ago
From a primal perspective, the wife and phsychiatrist are babes.
53531640 2 years ago
I like the plot, but you didn't have any motive for why this company was doing this. Also, the music clashed with the theme. Use a little bit more suspenseful music and up-to-date with your setting.
charmedmagic92 2 years ago 2
Music was all wrong! The drama would have made more impact without that melodramatic score. It kept pulling me out of the story.
popaddict 2 years ago
very well done, but dont like the last scene. if the film ended at 12:00 it would be much better
fillethefish 2 years ago
i think the music was a bit over-used. other than that, good job.
jaquegrey 2 years ago
Really well done. Captured the noir. One thing, I know the lighting was dull and shadowy in parts, though I think it should have remained that way throughout the film. The bright colours sometimes clashed with the music. Loved the transition at 9:14. 5/5
gusthelesswise 2 years ago
creepy
irisheyes6363 2 years ago
so they did it to increase the amount of customers?
QuitePossiblyANinja 2 years ago
I don't get the ending....
Neofire60 2 years ago
creepy buh i dont get it why did the doctor trap the guys ? i dunno ..im always bad in the main idea thing
Starpluslover 2 years ago
@Starpluslover yeah her motive is not explained. I don't get why she's doing it. Its one of the flaws of the film IMO. After all that we have no idea why or what she'd doing and by the end, as a viewer, I don't care much for any of the characters or the story.
popaddict 2 years ago
beutifuly told story Im welmed.
Not over welmed, But welmed.
picturepirate62 2 years ago
Wow. I enjoyed this. And I really liked the story line.
saruhara 2 years ago
ooohh!! creeeeepy.... poor dale... That girl who acted as susan was a great actor!
fayenesse 2 years ago
y does she have 2 be a coalburner
scrantonsux 2 years ago
THAT WAS OHHH SO GOOD!!! I had no idea that would happen!!! It was really good!!
crazedmayeshah 2 years ago
was OK
sizzle666123 2 years ago
great history, like a movie.
goranification 2 years ago
awesome !!!!
seba2122 2 years ago
Inspired by twilight zone?
fortissimoX 2 years ago
i thought it was crap but the ending wow :P
pinkpunk2k9 2 years ago
excellent! except for the last explanation
should be made into a real movie!
congratulation!
xaver54 2 years ago
None of the acting was extraordinary. The boss is a bad actor in my opinion. The woman that is the doctor was pretty bad too. Henry was probably the best out of them. Susan the second best. The music was distracting. The story reminds me of some movie that came out pretty recently. I hate to be so negative, but normally I am fascinated with your productions. This was one of your worst.
Slyth66 2 years ago
I liked it just enough to keep watching 5* because i thought the ending was ace
taylojam 2 years ago
welp i'm gonna take my meds now
rosieh93 2 years ago
meh nothing special
rookie16 2 years ago
nicely done
abdulkha 2 years ago
The music sounds like something from the 20th century..
Revel1011 2 years ago
Hey...... This is Dale has anyone seen my wife??
ToadsWarts 2 years ago
that was kinda strange..... but awsome
kleinmim106 2 years ago
awesome! first
lotsaEntertainment 2 years ago