@9parsa9 Okay you can criticize him for how long you want. But first, make sure you do better animations than him, so if you don't mind, go look at some tutorials and learn to animate. When you get better than him go away and criticize him whenever you want. But until then, go make better animations than him. ... And as for the animation, was pretty smooth but choppy, uneased and unrealistic. A tip: NEVER EVER use coloured backgrounds, as the onion-skin will now show. It will get harder to anim.
quite good, you should improve the walking to make it more fluid, of course i cant complain i started pivot yesterday, its just my expectator advice =D
u should add more heros and get rid of gay yellow tree guy.and make it wen blue freezes they go ice like.and make the blak orbs bigger.and make the gray guy more self explanotorey.
I Think that was good. I like all your other bending Pivots more. The only thing I can really say that you can improve on is adding music? Anyway, great animation as always.
P.S - Check out my animations please! (I only joined youtube 2 days ago, and only have 2 animations uploaded, but please look at them anyway.)
hey man pretty good you could use less frames and nuse more distinctive sticks so i know whos who in the future but keep it up i think you could do a good war like pivot so try it out
well darklord first of all use less frames its way to slow then you might wanna add some blood if thats possible ill check out more of your pivots and comment -miniman p.s i makin a video right now!
alright... but this dosent tell me what i cn improve on... if you are going to critizize which i dont mind at all, i ould perfer it to be specific things on which i should improve on not that you could do better
This is really good
TVtubefilmz 2 weeks ago
You have the right stuff but use super heros people know of next time and don't make it so random
2ckiller 6 months ago
NICE JOB!
Erin101Green 11 months ago
it wos mint
junior41997 1 year ago
5/5 but you need more training :D but kinda good ;:D
Masterpropivot 1 year ago
you should add ice, fire, energy balls, force fields and invisibility
cofloabi 1 year ago
good
Ramraidz 1 year ago
worst animation EVER
9parsa9 1 year ago
@9parsa9 Okay you can criticize him for how long you want. But first, make sure you do better animations than him, so if you don't mind, go look at some tutorials and learn to animate. When you get better than him go away and criticize him whenever you want. But until then, go make better animations than him. ... And as for the animation, was pretty smooth but choppy, uneased and unrealistic. A tip: NEVER EVER use coloured backgrounds, as the onion-skin will now show. It will get harder to anim.
sharp9939 1 year ago
This Sucks Dude.
Worst Animation EVER
9parsa9 1 year ago
Check out my super hero fight PLease!! and comment
kokteilikook 1 year ago
:O Fantastic
JoshEmm98 2 years ago
quite good, you should improve the walking to make it more fluid, of course i cant complain i started pivot yesterday, its just my expectator advice =D
yamxa996 2 years ago
i made 1 of these CHECK IT OUT at my channel
MegaCaitlin 2 years ago
have you seen dragon ball?
if yes,try to make animations with z team.
you're a great animator
GabrielBriefs 2 years ago
That was good animation.
But you should add sound effects
Imjetta7 2 years ago
not bad man... liked the lightning guy..
could use more props...
If you're looking for ideas, go to my channel...
-codemaster265
codemaster265 2 years ago
u should add more heros and get rid of gay yellow tree guy.and make it wen blue freezes they go ice like.and make the blak orbs bigger.and make the gray guy more self explanotorey.
arcticshade1 2 years ago
yawn.......HUH!HUH? did someonesaysomin'?
horselubber12 2 years ago
5/5 Loved it can you watch my Harry potter one and tell me what you think???
I'm Nooooby
rate and comment?
ItsSnottyBee 2 years ago
cool, nice pivot
TheDragonator1000 3 years ago
Sweet, you should enter my Collab, I posted a Video Comment
Mishibie 3 years ago
i think its cool, but i think u could speed it up a bit
amvis95 3 years ago
lol
omyleerboy 3 years ago
well. you could make it suck less that's a start. and also make it less choppy. and maybe name the heros
MortalitasMessor 3 years ago
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nice check out my marvel mayhem pivot
P1V0TDude 3 years ago
try to make it a little neater and take ur time. Make a fantastic 4 against wolverine
nemesisprime72 3 years ago
NICE NICE NICE,
how long did that take?
TheHillzy 3 years ago
fucking niuce make some more and send em to me plz 100/5
raza838 3 years ago
i thought it was awesome! can someone plz help me with my pivot animations? mine completely suck compared to everyone else's
Nomejoda12 3 years ago
I Think that was good. I like all your other bending Pivots more. The only thing I can really say that you can improve on is adding music? Anyway, great animation as always.
P.S - Check out my animations please! (I only joined youtube 2 days ago, and only have 2 animations uploaded, but please look at them anyway.)
-AvatarForever96
AvatarForever96 3 years ago
hey man pretty good you could use less frames and nuse more distinctive sticks so i know whos who in the future but keep it up i think you could do a good war like pivot so try it out
gangstaboo2724 3 years ago
It needs music and you could improve on the walking by moving the legs
joplingmoviez 3 years ago
your affects are awsome though
fatfrogproduction 3 years ago
well darklord first of all use less frames its way to slow then you might wanna add some blood if thats possible ill check out more of your pivots and comment -miniman p.s i makin a video right now!
fatfrogproduction 3 years ago
well.....this could be a lot better i can help you -miniman ps fatfrog is the production im making
fatfrogproduction 3 years ago
alright... but this dosent tell me what i cn improve on... if you are going to critizize which i dont mind at all, i ould perfer it to be specific things on which i should improve on not that you could do better
darklord5474 3 years ago
Good job! :D Maybe next time you can add special affect noises or music?
Shmougie 3 years ago