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  • I love this story, but I always imagined it would be spoken with a tone of adoration. That would be creepier I feel

  • one of the most amazing stories ive ever heard. not so much as a creepypasta. more as a good story

  • Impossible he cant do this with every kid

  • ..pedo

  • Oh noes! I'm gonna get ate!

  • Awwwwww <3

  • Creepy thing in the background to the right 0:49 kinda looks like a kid

  • @owl368 that is a kid.

  • MFW at the end: :RaisinFace:

  • Use the snowflake button XD

  • i am aroused

  • Wow.... I feel strangely better about life...... O.o

  • And I'll be all like "Y U curbcheck me?!?"

  • I don't know why, but I kind of feel bad for this...thing, that is supposedly following me.

  • This was, in my opinion, what I consider a "beautiful pasta", a creepypasta that is well written, original, and so emotionally moving it's haunting.

  • This is THE coolest creepypasta. :3

  • /watch?v=soWPkQ8HfX4

    Shamelessly advertising another version of this pasta.

    Hope you don't mind.

  • your voice sounds like the wesker's voice.....

    OH NO WESKER SEE ME ALL THE TIME ::: :O

  • xDxD Man! Man In My Room!

  • This is one of my favorite pastas. So tasty.

  • He's been watching me since i was born? Wow, what a pedophile.

  • thats a fucked up guardian angel lol.

  • BUT IF HE WAZ LUKIN DAON AT ME. THEN HOO WAS FONE?!

  • I was thinking angel of death before it said it was the guardian, but it's a strange comfort, actually. He may have a horrible looking body, but he's only doing his job.

  • @CarbonDomainRecords I like how it ended a lot. but I pictured the mangled face and it still freaks me out.

  • @CarbonDomainRecords I agree, I pictured him in my head and I definitely shivered. Thats why I get so scared of things like this. I actually picture in my head whats being described to me. The twist at the end was really cool though.

  • Rooooosebud....

    Yes...Rosebud Frozen Peas....

  • so... who is this? god? did you carry me during the hard times in my life?

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  • "with my collapsed jaw hanging to my chest"

    ...

    Mr. Face?

  • @dovepaw0228

    SWEET JESUS! XD

    Now i will have even more troubles sleeping.

  • And i will always hate the way you fsrt when you're asleep... -_____-

  • cool, i want a guardian like that to hang out with

  • Hah. The only thing "creepy" is the dude's voice. But I mean, he's no worse than a hardcore lifer in prison. The guy just wanted to let who ever know he's always there. :)

  • I think it's rather sweet really. The guy just wants to be noticed and to be hugged.

  • @SukaNekoto and explode when he gets hugged

  • O.O I'm not sure... if I should be happy for the angel... or terrified... I... Our guardian angels... are the mirror image of how we'll DIE?!

  • You have caught me in th restroom masturbating seeing my crooked penis.Pareents coming down to your scream "man, man masturbating here."

  • Indeed, but who was phone?

  • i really love this story, i wish i had an guardian angel like that

  • Zdislav Beskinski.

  • OK I JUST SHIT OUT A BRICK

  • at least he had the curtiousy to wait on the other side of the bathroom door.. >.>

  • Who was the father? Darth Vader? I didn't know Luke was abandoned.

  • WTF DID I JUST WATCH?!

  • an error occured please try again later....

  • Sleep is to mainstream...

  • That aside, I like this story. I always wonder if I really have a guardian angel.

  • So if you commit suicide in the future, would you be able to see your 'guardian angel'? Would it be your reflection in the mirror, showing you scars you don't remember getting, in fact, scars you don't have at all..?

  • This is true, when i was 2 i fell down a set of 32 stairs in a walker, and instead of flipping over and dying, i slid down them. This story is true.

  • WHO WAS PHONE

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  • THEN WHO WAS GOD?!?!?wait,WTF...

  • what a pedophile

  • @Tacosrokursox i was thinking the same thing 

  • THEN WHO WAS STALKER?

  • Hm. The audio is too scratchy.

  • i rember reading this on the creepypasta forms o: it was really sweet >u< i'm suprised the fangirls didn't go all yaoi over it yet .n.

  • Thanks Mr.Corpse! You are one badass protector; although you should stop watching me get dressed.

  • If he weren't obviously deformed and ugly and stalking them, it would be so sweet!

  • Didn't expect it to be an Angel.

  • I didn't go to preschool. Your argument is invalid.

  • Misery loves company. Evelynn and Mordekaiser from League of Legends say that when their walking.

  • if you liked this one go to the creepypasta wiki and read the story entitled "Love." Seriously, do it.

  • But who was phone!!!

  • I SWING MY JAW BACK AND FOURTH

  • Not much a of guardian. More of a stalker. O.O

  • "Touching your face with my knotted fingers as you sleep"

    um...yeah please don't do that.

  • o_0 

  • Loneliness is your constant companion. 

  • LOOK BEHIND YOU...

  • And I'm watchin your mom....

  • I got bred from 0:03 so I went and counted my fingers

  • @Atlas556 I DON'T HAVE ANY FINGERS, IM TYPING WITH MY NOSE.

    YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID.

  • so the boogeyman (guardian angel) looks like what you're gonna look like when you die?

  • not really the video to be eating ice cream to..

  • This is hot

  • Awww that's so nice of you (:

    Hey, next time I get drunk as fuck would you take me home? I really hate to be dragged by my friends

  • Wow. This actually makes me slightly afraid of the boogeyman

  • tl;dr

  • A badass protecting me like that, awesome. I'd rather be left alone while masturbating though.

  • LOLOL

  • It's my imaginary friend Ouo

  • Cute.

  • JENNY JUST WATCH IT. SEE? I'M HERE IN THE COMMENTS TO KEEP YOU COMPANY.

  • Thanks for watching over me, rotting corpse. Although I'd appreciate it if you would stop watching me in the shower.

  • So, my guardian angel is a guy...who waits on the other side of the shower curtain for me to get out? Uhhhhh.... Hope he don't watch me get Dressed...O_O

  • MR. FACE, IT'S YOU! <3

  • I really find this beautiful, and not creepy. It makes me feel a little safe. Just a little.

  • @xxInvisibleMoon Really? It's creepy.  A rotting corpse invisible to everyone but you. Watching... watching. Haunting you not as a guardian, more of a grim reaper waiting to throw you down into Hell, or bring you up into Heaven.

  • @Headcrabman99 what if your athiest what does he do then?

  • @shadofdaknight44 He eats you.

  • Wait, if he's the guardian angel... then... WHO WAS PHONE?

  • The description of the guy reminds me of the guys from amnesia

  • This was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I love it.

  • IT TURNS OUT IT'S MAN!

  • Sounds like the story I made up when this girl has a guardian demon. Great story! :)

  • cool story, bro.

  • And iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii­iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii­iieeeeeiiiiiii will always love yooooooooooooooooooooooooooouu­uuuuuuuuuuu

  • @lordpatthethird and i know somewhere

    deep down in my heart....

    ....

    i still love u :c

    NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAA explosion*

  • @lordpatthethird And iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii­iiiiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiiiiiiiiiiii­igiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii­iiiiiii will always tickle everyoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeeeeeee tickle

  • You could've turn this into the most effective screamer ever, but you did not. I Like your style, great story.

  • Not creepy... but beautiful in a very macarbe way. Thank you xx

  • @Kierathehedgehog9: No, I mean I always check behind the shower curtain before using the bathroom.

  • You aren't on the other side of the shower curtain, I always check there when I take a dump.

  • @Morpheus6393 You take dumps in the shower?

  • It's kinda sweet actually.

  • Absolutely beautiful

  • PEDOPHILE VOICE PEDOPHILE VOICE PEDOPHILE VOICE!

  • that's an interesting position on life ... to say that in some parallel universe kind of pose, that as soon as we are born our soul knows what's to come and is somehow detached from our bodys current state of 'living' forever watching and waiting for that end to actually come to fore-wish-en. Though, whatever your beliefs, it could also be your past coming up ...reminding you of past events...

  • we all have an angel on our soul and a demon too...its the equilibrium, and the people must find that. God doesnt changes your life beacuse of that, you have to find your way. Lets get tha story straight, only the strongers survives

  • Aww,

    How disturbing and sweet ~invisibly hugs my guardian angel~

    XD

  • is it strange that I find this both creepy, but almost relaxing, or comforting?

  • Quick question. What is that audio in the background? It sounds like radio signals

  • Wow, my guardian angel is kind of an asshole....

  • yep, thats settled. i'm not sleeping for the next month

  • @TheAwesomekman how has the

    1 month without sleep been?

  • i loved it, very beautiful and amazing. i am going to look around for said angel, see if i know what ima look like when i die.

  • ...This shouldn't be arousing.

  • I read this the other day and I thought it was extremely beautiful. I love how they twisted the concept of guardian angels.

  • this is beautiful.

  • Awesome, creepy, strangely sad, almost...and yet I can't shake the feeling I've heard that voice before. Kind of sounds like the voice reading "A real breakup letter from a real person".

  • *sighs*you are all clearly missing the point. this is a guardian angel, not a demon or a ghost. the fact that it's a rotting, mutilated corpse is intended to juxtapose the guardian aspect of it.

  • Eh, who needs sleep anyway.

  • Oh don't worry. I don't need sleep tonight! I didn't need it the first night I read this story either.... Didn't need to know some ghost was following me my entire life... Thanks anyways

  • ._. it's ok,i wasn't planning on sleeping tonight anyway...

  • The being is his/her own spirit.

  • O_O.....So that explains the headless ghost in my closet....

    Wow though....this was just Powerful. So strong creepy and touching.

  • So I put on the audio right in the beginning with my earbuds in...and I thought it was kind of funny. Then I thought I'd be really cool and turn off the light behind me. It was nothing but the glow of the computer screen, and although I had my eyes closed, I could still sense the light from behind my eyelids. So I reached forward and, still playing the video, turned off the monitor. And then the voice became something else; it became what I always knew was hiding in the dark. I Lasted 2 seconds.

  • hmm...that would be creepy if it didnt seem like a twisted sort of love story

  • @MuzicLova26 That's what I thought as well. I amost cried. X3

  • Disturbing

    The first part brings to mind some sort of perverted ghost that never ages.

  • Awwww

  • No wonder I sometimes shoot my load off when I sleep!

  • its a very creepy vid and the sound is freaky

  • That's really fuckin disturbing.

  • Haha, I always loved this story, good to here an audio version.

  • I kinda feel bad for the dead guy. :C

  • awwww <3333

  • I cried when I read this while I listened to “your Guardian Angel” by the Red Jumpsuit Apparatus…

  • I think the angel is all mangled because he was a smoker and died in a car accident.

  • why does he sound like hes been doing crack

    I hope my guardian angel dosent do crack xD

  • Where'd you get the music in the background?

  • Okay, so my guardian angel will look like how I do when I die...

    BUT WHO WAS PHONE?

  • Eeyah. No, nope, no way, forget this, just no.

  • Aww. ;u; I'm probably getting the wrong impression from this video. But while it was scary and dark, it was... ... Really sweet for some reason. I don't know why, but it was really cute and sweet and fdgwng. -has nightmare fuel diabeetus thanks :|- I'm not insulting the creepypasta by saying it's cute, it is definitely terrifying in its own right. But the way the "Boogeyman" always wants to be near you and such, it's practically diabeetus worthy. Maybe I've watched too many "yandere" animes.

  • Am I the only one that thinks Mr. Welldone is a pretentious douche?

  • I used to love this video, the voice, the story, the atmosphere...But not that I pay more attention to the story, it just creeps me the fuck out. But it's still my favorite pasta.

  • This is genius man! Your videos are amazing, totally worth subscribing too!

  • Let me guess, you want me to return the slab?

    WHATS YOUR OFFER

  • holy SHIT! There's an angel perv watching me masturbate and touching me while I sleep! FFUUUUUUUUU-

  • So if you were there always.

    Did you see me masturbate?

  • @TheMegaGmoder Was probably fapping to the same video you were watching that night.

  • My mum doesn't have a car

  • JEAN LUC PICARD!!!!!!!

  • THEN WHO WAS CAR!!!?!1

  • i dun get it. someone care to explain?

  • Today aint ya day pancake's /:

  • ummm ok

  • I didn't find this scary, actually.

    Well, just a bit. Like a really twisted mentality's version of affection. Really messed up, but not... evil, or vile.

    Still creepy as hell, though. Great vid of a great Pasta!

  • Loved dis because it was crazy

  • I think I just completely had a heart attack. I've read this so many times and it scares the living daylights outa me D; I can never listen to ANYTHING with Guardian Angel in it now. Now its come to life! D;

  • creative and well told

  • wow

  • Where's the scary stuff??? This was lame if you tried to scare med :P But I'll admit it was a good story what so ever :)

  • this scared me for a week straight

  • My favorite creepypasta. Thanks so much for making something like this <3

  • 3:46 BOOBS!!