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I am currently working on a story. Its is a zombie story, and know its not based on spectacular gore and gunfire and all of this. but it is based on the tale of an average 16 year old boy, trying to come to terms with the end of the world, and in the meantime trying to hunt down his parents. Thanks for the help David.
@figocooldude as the dude suggests, I am sure there is another character that changes. The protagonist doesn't have to change. Also, sometimes the protagonist doesn't change, but they still take on a journey and are trying to reach to goal that this guy talks about. For example, Drizzt in Salvatore's Dark Elf saga doesn't change much in the last trilogy, however, he is met with challenges that make him think about changing. He inevitably realizes that he made the right choice though.
I develop a character that is unorthodox and flawed but completely realistic. The conflict is between the main character and a conventional world. If i place a well drawn character into this situation, the story often can write itself complete with a surprise ending.
Very clear. It would seem that a good short story is to some extent a successful exercise in rhetoric: the truth of a universal theme is asserted by the vividness and aesthetics of the story. Is this on the right track?...
Another great video!
from1978 2 months ago
I wish I was that cool
OokamiKuma225 3 months ago
@OokamiKuma225
wishing is for turning frogs into princes' (smile) you took the time to look at this video so you must be headed in the right direction!
meandmyself364 2 months ago
Santa is such a good literature teacher :)
srgwarcock 6 months ago
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Pongo0625 8 months ago
I am currently working on a story. Its is a zombie story, and know its not based on spectacular gore and gunfire and all of this. but it is based on the tale of an average 16 year old boy, trying to come to terms with the end of the world, and in the meantime trying to hunt down his parents. Thanks for the help David.
DKC1011 10 months ago
HOLY SHIT I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT JUST HAPPENED AT HOME. I THINK I NEED TO PULL SUICIDE
HOHOHOHI888 1 year ago
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puppiesare2cute7 1 year ago
@puppiesare2cute7 Villan can be a protagonist or an antagonist, most commonly an antagonist but there are cases where he is a protagonist.
Meltedsnake4 1 year ago 2
@puppiesare2cute7 The antagonist.
ih8makinusernames 10 months ago
You're rather inspiring.
HannahElhan 1 year ago
Huh... this guy actually knows how to use his brain! More videos, please! This is sooo good!
trmptdreams 1 year ago 13
SO, if there is no goal, if the protagonist finishes unchanged, than what is it? Is it still a short story, or is more like prose poetry?
figocooldude 1 year ago
@figocooldude it's boring.......if there is no change and no goal than there is no point in reading or writing it.
shadow13346 1 year ago
@shadow13346 Just to state an example, doesn't Holden in Catcher in the Rye stay the same?
figocooldude 1 year ago
@figocooldude as the dude suggests, I am sure there is another character that changes. The protagonist doesn't have to change. Also, sometimes the protagonist doesn't change, but they still take on a journey and are trying to reach to goal that this guy talks about. For example, Drizzt in Salvatore's Dark Elf saga doesn't change much in the last trilogy, however, he is met with challenges that make him think about changing. He inevitably realizes that he made the right choice though.
shadow13346 1 year ago
I develop a character that is unorthodox and flawed but completely realistic. The conflict is between the main character and a conventional world. If i place a well drawn character into this situation, the story often can write itself complete with a surprise ending.
Larkinchance 2 years ago
Very clear. It would seem that a good short story is to some extent a successful exercise in rhetoric: the truth of a universal theme is asserted by the vividness and aesthetics of the story. Is this on the right track?...
zorrodebaruta 2 years ago
aaaaah i didn't think of that
alanna4858 2 years ago
I like to watch this dude in High Quality
GlobalDeen 2 years ago
i wish these videos were longer.
alanna4858 3 years ago
expert village uploads so much if the videos were any longer they would be very hard to upload.
ih8makinusernames 2 years ago