BIONICLE: The Master; Original Fan Fiction Movie! (Part 1/4)

[air13ek]

HAHAHA! This is awesome. :}

[R3taliate]

@air13ek Thanks!

[DarthZox]

Well done! For a first time stop motion this was excellent! The camera was a little jiggley at times, but nothing to discracting. The effects were great and the sounds were excellent. Although, some background music would have been nice. But all in all I think this is an awesome stop motion! Most people don't do this good on their first stop motion. I look forward to the next 2 parts.

[R3taliate]

@DarthZox Thanks for the review! Camera could have been better, something with my files skipping frames...

>:(

Personally the effects could have been better I think that I will do my best to avoid large explosions in the future.

Guilty as charged. I was in a hurry to get it out due to the fact that I will be away for two weeks, and so forgot background music. This is only my first published stop motion. I have several horrendous ones sitting in my computer. Which won't be published ever.probly

[R3taliate]

@R3taliate And also, I have decided to make four parts. Part two will be background, Part 3... you'll see :), and four will be an epic battle.

[JedimasterRonin]

Excellent work! I really enjoyed working with you on this one. The story itself is quite interesting, sound effect editing was great, and I really enjoyed the action sequences.

One bit of criticism would be that you don't seem to use a tripod, that could be really helpful for some of your shots.

The effects were some of the best I have ever seen from mspaint, great job!

All in all, I loved this one. Can't wait for the next!

[R3taliate]

@JedimasterRonin The tripod was there. It is just a crappy tripod. Also, some of my frames seem to have skipped. Otherwise, it would have been smoother.

Do not worry, part 2 will be much better in every regard.

[R3taliate]

AND YES! I do wish you to critique as much as possible, since this is my first "real" youtube film.