Rachel Thompson's Original Oratory

[AsifVidios]

The speech was too ridged with too much time spent worrying over what should have been said and the way in which to say it. It was artificial, you need to allow your speech to flow naturally also you should attempt to have a better understanding of a case you dispute. Just to quote the bible will only win favour with the people who already share your opinion. Furthermore your whole position rested upon the word /sword analogy which was a coincidence; making all further arguments a strawman...

[AsifVidios]

For information on the correct means by which to arrange a demonstrative argument please consult Aristotles book The Art of Rhetoric.

[TheElocutionist]

You move way too much. Only move at a transition in your speech. Also your performance was lacking emotion. Although these comments won't help you with this speech, being that you can't use it this year, it might help for your new speech.

[daughteroftheking526]

Wow very good stage presence, great speech. It's my first tournament tomorrow, im a freshman and a novice at oo. thanks for your performance

[Jujubee10323]

Is this from Vegas?

[rachelthompson89]

Haha! This video is ten times better than the ones we got! Thanks so much Samantha! : )

[snsanchor]

wow, a video from Nats! Thanks for uploading!