@RainHasFallen thank you so much for the constructive criticism, i think it will help a lot in future videos! ive noticed your comments on my other videos and thank you :)
2:02 you said "shouldn've." Have a friend just check over what you've typed
Not words written across-a-screen-subtitles, but actual-what-WMM-considers-subtitles. Make sure her/his (xD!) make-up doesn't clash with their foundation.
Remember to use those cheats, check grammar and spelling and make subtitles so people can read easily. I love how it says Dec. 20th when its 6 in the morning where I live.
All my grammar and spelling is correct, I checked several times before uploading. I do have subtitles. They are easily visible if you watch in HQ. Thank-you for the advice, though.
@PopPrincess110 I understand. Nice talking to you
RainHasFallen 2 years ago
@RainHasFallen thank you so much for the constructive criticism, i think it will help a lot in future videos! ive noticed your comments on my other videos and thank you :)
PopPrincess110 2 years ago
A second pair of eyes help....
RainHasFallen 2 years ago
Yeah, but no one uses it. Is she Goth/Emo? If so, make her wear eyeshadow/eyeliner and none or black/dark red lipstick.
RainHasFallen 2 years ago
No, I was being sarcastic xD
2:02 you said "shouldn've." Have a friend just check over what you've typed
Not words written across-a-screen-subtitles, but actual-what-WMM-considers-subtitles. Make sure her/his (xD!) make-up doesn't clash with their foundation.
RainHasFallen 2 years ago
Remember to use those cheats, check grammar and spelling and make subtitles so people can read easily. I love how it says Dec. 20th when its 6 in the morning where I live.
RainHasFallen 2 years ago
All my grammar and spelling is correct, I checked several times before uploading. I do have subtitles. They are easily visible if you watch in HQ. Thank-you for the advice, though.
PopPrincess110 2 years ago