You're obviously smart (well read and articulate). If I could give you any advice I'd say:
1) contrast your jokes by dum'ing down your punch lines a little, this way people have to do less thinking to get it. (again you're smart so you've got to slow it down for your audience.
2) Act out a little more (facial expressions, body movement, etc.)
3) Practice your material on all types of people (young old, black white, smart stupid, silly serious)
He had okay material. But his delivery definitely needs work. He used very little emotion and had a kind of fakeness and lack of confidence about him. Stuttering in comedy is a no no.
I'm from Belize I just realized how awesome our country is
shadowprotector99 10 months ago
i liked the "geography" joke but the timing was off and i think thats why it wasnt well recieved....timing is everything
fakeass 1 year ago
You're obviously smart (well read and articulate). If I could give you any advice I'd say:
1) contrast your jokes by dum'ing down your punch lines a little, this way people have to do less thinking to get it. (again you're smart so you've got to slow it down for your audience.
2) Act out a little more (facial expressions, body movement, etc.)
3) Practice your material on all types of people (young old, black white, smart stupid, silly serious)
Be encouraged, it takes real guts to do this.
arenetv 1 year ago
too bad this dikhead doesnt know a thing about belize....
not off the coast of mexico.....no free cable tv...
oh and give up the standup ....be a dumb plumber's helper
dont come back here....
SPmQQse 1 year ago
fantastic timing
mcmanusdown 2 years ago 2
Yeah dude it was good. (: Just loosten up a bit. :) Let the joke tell itself. :)
CookieDoughConundrum 2 years ago 2
pretty good man :) relax a little and work on the delivery of the jokes. other then that good job :D
DarkFire1100 2 years ago 2
Thanks a lot for the comment, I've been working on improving my routine and performance lately so I think I'm getting a little better.
FrankNinja 2 years ago
heh
i liked it if that counts for shit
MagWolf11 2 years ago 2
Glad you liked it and had a good laugh
FrankNinja 2 years ago
i think he's very good. "no sci-fi at emerson? what kind of liberal arts school is this?" haha. lmao. good job man. keep it up
DanCHorgan 2 years ago 2
Thank you very much for your compliments and support.
FrankNinja 2 years ago
Not good
maxwellthedog 2 years ago
He had okay material. But his delivery definitely needs work. He used very little emotion and had a kind of fakeness and lack of confidence about him. Stuttering in comedy is a no no.
calebstephens007 2 years ago
ohhh kkkkk
gawjuss187 2 years ago
I'll take that as a compliment, hope you enjoyed.
FrankNinja 2 years ago
You roofed it! Free cable nice!
roofification 2 years ago
Thank you! Agreed on the free cable.
FrankNinja 2 years ago
Build your jokes in threes.
Mount your camera.
Brainstrain 3 years ago
Well, there was only a three minute limit so it was a bit hard to organize. And I don't have a tripod for my camera so I just had a friend hold it.
Still, thank you for your comments and advice.
FrankNinja 3 years ago