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From: emilyjonasox
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  • that WAS THE BOMB i LOVE your stories!!  post soon!!!!

  • lmao thanks sooo omuchh :))

    im gladd you like iit!!! ahha

  • hey i never wanted to tell u b/c i felt lame but trust me when i say i am copletly crazy freaking out over HS. i dont know what i want to be

  • ur freakign out.

    i think itll be easy but i just wana no wtf im gona do with my life idc about the actual skool thooo

    lol but its okay to be scared i guesssss... i mean most ppl r lol

  • Ahhh LOVE IT more asapp

  • haha thankssss :))

    and i tryy to psot as often as i can but sumtyms i dont have time or im too tired lol

  • Amazing as always....im going to agree with MusicJunkie0688 and say you should work on punctuation. Other than that i love it!

    moree

    <3Lilly

  • well... is it like annoying to read the way i punctuate bc ik how to use good grammer but wen im writing fanfics im lazy so i rly dont care how thy come out like this isnt evn my best writing and i write them like 5 seconds before i post so i dont rly pay attention either..

    and i hate wen ppl male thr stories PERFECt.

    its like cant yo uslack off a lil!!!!!

    lmao

  • It annoys me when i only get a couple of comments on my stories too, but the chapter was amazing.

    Post more soon!

  • haha ik im sure everyone hates it!

    lol idk who wuld like it haha

    but its kinda stressful bc on my other account i was getting like 30 comments per ep with out asking =\

    now i get 2.

    lol except on this one but the others eps i dont lol

  • Amazing! :D

  • thankyyoouuu :))

  • your writing is really good, just wokr on your punctuations is all :D but otherwise your narative writing is incredible, great chpt too :]

  • oh if you mean like caps im just too lazt to do tht while im typing xD like if i had to hand sumthin in i ttly wuld make sure stuff like tht was perfect lol and i dont use like commas wen im writing for youtube cus i dont care.

    and i hate wen ppl make everything PERFECT for fanfics! like caps and stuff its like who the fuck caressss!!

    but thts just meee lmao

  • lol well js checkin but other than that you have a great writing structure :D

  • thanks :D

    lmao.

    i actually really slack off wen writing fanfics like if i go back and look at it im like this is my worst writing ever!

    like if i had to hand it in i would totally (Try) to makei t so much more intense lol

    and evry time i strt a new story i try to start it out good and then wen the chapters go on i ttly give up lol

  • Amazing as alwaysss :P and dude calm down! I've got course selection now also and its rly stressful and overwhelming :/ writing is a good way 2 let tht all out :P

  • wel ive already picked my classes but i wana no wat i shuld really focus on plus every1s like wats ur fav subject wat do u wana b wat field do u want to go in wats ur fav thing to do?!

    &im always thinking writintg but i RLY dnt think im tht good i mean tis not like im geting A+ on evrythng i write or ne thng! so idk if i rly am good or if i just thnk i am so wen ppl ask im always like idk

    &my mom doesnt no i write wen im on the comp so she thnks i hve no life& all i cre about is jb!

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