My first response was lost. Maybe it's out there. First I clicked reply, but it really said replay-- so I had to watch the damn thing again. You have an amazing way of weaving, combining and layering your words, and the pause is often the polarizing force, that holds it at a distance, but holds it together just the same, all layered in design like an internalized collage. Your voice floats, unsteady at times, but always comforting, a gentle pain. Enjoyed both poems-- Alan
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PoetryETrain 3 months ago
My first response was lost. Maybe it's out there. First I clicked reply, but it really said replay-- so I had to watch the damn thing again. You have an amazing way of weaving, combining and layering your words, and the pause is often the polarizing force, that holds it at a distance, but holds it together just the same, all layered in design like an internalized collage. Your voice floats, unsteady at times, but always comforting, a gentle pain. Enjoyed both poems-- Alan
JamesStewartLittle 1 year ago
@JamesStewartLittle Thanks, Alan! I plan to do more short films like this with some of my poems in the future. Glad you liked these!
CollinKelleyPoetry 1 year ago
very nice!
brokenkites 1 year ago
you did an absolutely fantastic job Collin!!!! - jessie
charlottepoet 1 year ago