Just some thoughts on this song, at :21 the higher melody guitar part, Id say if you held off on that until one of the ending verses it would give the song a much better flow and "climax", if you will. Also I think some backing vocals later on in the song would be awesome. Good drum pattern but i wouldn't dive right into that, start with something more simple and build up to that. Great job though, keep it up.
Just some thoughts on this song, at :21 the higher melody guitar part, Id say if you held off on that until one of the ending verses it would give the song a much better flow and "climax", if you will. Also I think some backing vocals later on in the song would be awesome. Good drum pattern but i wouldn't dive right into that, start with something more simple and build up to that. Great job though, keep it up.
xNavarone 10 months ago
:P idk what happened to the drums for the first part. i re-do it someday.
OUCHYMAMAproductions 11 months ago