Locked Girl (English fandub ver.)

[TigStripe]

I like how the recorded voice acts as if singing it warmed him up. It was really scratchy and had tuning issues in the first few bars, and the falsetto was so forced, all up until the third chorus, when it was so natural sounding. This is a great rendition of the song, and I'm glad it's been done.

[seashellsparklykitty]

Wow, you did this? Awesome!!! But why did you say the sky is blue when it's red?

[jakcloudhighwind]

y u no make more fandub?

[C0deSlasher]

Hmm... that was actually rather heartwarming.

[CombustableLemonVids]

This song embarrassed me in the middle of science...

How?

Well, I was singing it very quietly and a dude in front of my turned to his friend and was all like "Yo, dude, this chick talking to herself!!" But I heard and stoipped, and his friend looked, and then the other dudes like "Oh, maybe not O.o"

and I was like o//-//o Oh god that was embarrassing...

[ScarletDevilRage]

May I use these lyrics for a fandub? :3 They're so perfect.

[FreakofAnime2614]

Awesome Dub :)

[kinghiei08]

Nice job dude.

[VerifyinTr1gIDs]

LOL it got bastardized

[prettynekogirl1]

What are they saying at 1:43 to 1:53? but other than that i like your lyrics and your voice is nice

[lariusx14]

@prettynekogirl1 it says somethins like

"what do you think you're doing here?

-it is going to feel like a horse's kick

-i wont let patchoulli go out

and i wont lose, this is one of remiliea's orders!"

yeah somethins like that :3

[Cyanistic]

@prettynekogirl1 Dialog as taken from the Touhou Wiki:

Sakuya: ...Again? You never give up, do you?

Marisa: You shouldn't say that if you haven't been able to stop me even once.

Sakuya: Well as for me, I have orders. From this point on I won't let a single person pass!

Marisa: Alright, Then I'll get through by force as usual! Especially today I can't lose!

[Cyanistic]

The autotuned/semi-vocaloid voice is rather annoying, in my humble opinion, I think it'd sound better just using your original voice.

[TasteForDisaster]

@Cyanistic I agree

[IMMABOMBETTE]

I love how they put Love Colored Master Spark in her fight with Sakuya.

[DarkTheYoshi]

why is the newest comment about a month old?

[Jazziphile]

To all the people who say things like "__ people disliked this video because of (insult)," Keep in mind that I dislike a lot of videos that I like just so that they don't show up on my recommended feed anymore. Like/Dislike controls your recommended video feed... nothing else.

[Inukazan]

@Jazziphile It's still fun for the people who do make those comments.

[kalacs32]

1:50...Penis Daggers. The new prototype of Sakuya's perfect weapons?

[DisOrientalMusic]

Heard some Laugh Maker at :35

[poisonism1]

so awesome!

[SparklyNear]

There's 666 likes.. Welp, time to make it 667. c:

[cupninja]

what anime is this?

[Superyndaaa]

@cupninja im pretty sure Touhou isn't an anime, wasn't it a bullet-hell game or something?

[DrCorvusCorax]

@Superyndaaa Touhou is a bullet-hell game series but it exist 2 episodes as a anime but it was canceled

[BeachballOtaku]

31 people would rather stay inside and be alone.

[Potpotproduction]

Like this if you agree that those 31 people who dislike this video....

DON'T HAVE TALENT and INSECURE!

[jetkirby111]

........ DAMN

[Infantcide]

You don't have the most polished lyrics, but I like it.

[SweetofStars]

That voice is pretty sexy...

[ShokoraOto]

What is the line at 0:42?

[Yorina1Angel]

OOOh this dub is super verry good guys ^^

[ShinbitekiKiseki]

hmm dont like the song but that voice is hot xD

[xyzddaeneo]

hello o/ I like this lyrics of yours, may I sing it if you don't mind? thanks ^^

[PolytoneZebraGuy]

other than the auto tune this song's amazing =D

[AzureCROSSword]

where did you get that voice? ಠ_ಠ

[FlandreScarletTH6]

I..i... this sounds like its autotuned... a little.. especially on 1:18

[ZestyandAngel]

I liked the part from 0:00 to 3:53 the best.

[MilesDaFoo616]

Your voice is so awesome it gives you super strength

[xXMMSHXx]

your voice is freaking awesome XD u should be a singer XD

[ScarletCrimsonWater]

what? she isn't alone Remillia is her friend which is the reason why she lives in the scarlet devil mansion.

[AzureCROSSword]

no need to open your door Patch....... cuz Marisa already blast it with her Final Spark...

[123456789amara]

You did really well! :D

Good job~

[Sinagrom]

This is by far the best fandub I have ever heard. Care to do more of them?

[scatergirl800]

what the heck r they saying at 1:43 - 1:52

[Jazziphile]

@scatergirl800 Something along the lines of:

"You again?"

"I'll get her, why do you want to stop me?"

"We have our orders, you're a trespasser."

or,something.

[Mespritroth]

@scatergirl800 " I hit the bullseye last night, with perfect aim I cannot miss."

"OH REALLY? Well I did yo mama last night, yo."

"So what... I'm still gonna beat you.... CRAZY MOFO KNIFE ATTACK!!!"

This is an innacurate translation, and is completey made up off the top of my head. Someone already told you what it roughly said.

[Jazziphile]

@Mespritroth LOL

[Mespritroth]

@Jazziphile DAT MARISA FAEC.

[kaikanphase]

"Have you ever seen the sky so blue?" But it's red XD

[gaaraloner]

@kaikanphase True, but, if she's never been outside, that is the most blue in the sky she has ever seen. lD

[sonicboomclan]

@kaikanphase lol im color blind and i can see that its red XD

[pirostyle]

@kaikanphase

shut up and cry like the rest of us over how beautiful this video is

[PrinssesPeke]

que bonito!!!

felisitaichon jajajajja xD

[GardevoirGirl]

There were some parts that were better than others, but it was brilliant over all. ^^ I love it!

[katedateangus]

Hey i'm just wondering did you audio tune your voice a bit? or is it just your own?, cuz it sounds really cool :)

[harvestguy204]

27 people got suppository'd by Reisen

[G3orge88]

WOW, que genial cantas viejo!!

[travism123456]

2:17 lol not in the "MOOD"

[findlay27]

@travism123456 Oh you.... xD

[HmmmmmLemmeThinkNo]

You did such a good job with this! I love Patchy!!! ♥ Lolz I love this upload! I /hate/ a lot of fandubs, cuz they're usually crappy. This is FANTASTIC!!!!! YAY!!!!

[ikaro342]

welllll....nice dubs, but the lyrics were a bit changed...eventough, it was a great dub!!

[234Spotman]

This guy has a good voice.

[pkthunder3]

Wow, This is pretty good!

[shadowXstra]

omg i loooove your voice o3o i normaly hate fandubs but yours are just soooo beautifulle

[DeadLollipop01]

One word; EPIC

[MimirinPro]

Wow, this is basically the only good fandub I've heard for a song! Thanks for enlightening me!

[HikariNoNanaki]

How many fandubs can I say I like? Before this, none. =D

[Lyncoris]

Wow! You're great! *O*

[UberPoofyNintendoChi]

i have a friend who sorta reminds me of Patchouli so i called her "Patchy" as a nickname.

[Bujin123456]

@UberPoofyNintendoChi you have a friend in a frilly nightgown thats sick all the time similar name to patchy purple hair ridiculous hat?

[UberPoofyNintendoChi]

@Bujin123456 actually yes. well minus the nightgown and purple hair, she changes her clothes and hasnt got any dye.

[UberPoofyNintendoChi]

@Bujin123456 actually yes. well minus the nightgown and purple hair, she changes her clothes and hasnt got any dye.

[UberPoofyNintendoChi]

@Bujin123456 actually yes, but she wears normal pajams and doesnt have the money for purple hair dye.

[56sal]

@Bujin123456

you stupid mean!!!!!

[TsurugiLover]

Really good fandub. Pobably the best one i've heard so far! :)

[Kisha55]

Oh wow when I saw the word fandub I was just like... NO! But this acualy sounds really good! :O

[HumanIceTea]

the rhymes are good, but I still prefer the japanese voice

[4znPpl]

Auto-tune

[RoughThief]

My god what a voice.....

[CrimsonVocalette]

Damn your good!!! You should go on American idol!!! (please sign up for American idol! You would be so awsome on stage espeacially since you have that voice about you that just screams smooth and beautiful!) IF music is what you want to do in life you definately have the talent for it! *rates 5/5 and subscribes* :3

[looserslam]

You could have sung it louder, but other than that, this was the best fandub of a song I've heard so far! Keep up the good work!

[dragonflychaser12]

awesome work dude! (^_^)b

I'm with the fandub skeptics here, I thought it was going to be bad (fandub+other language version= usually not good) But you man! You are the exception! The rhymes are good, and you sound like the guy who sang the original.

Continue your work, you're awesome! (^_')b

[magickchicken]

I've been wanting to compose and sing (english) lyrics to a couple of Touhou remixes I made, but always put it off, thinking they'd turn out badly.

The amazing job you did with this gives me hope for my own project. Thanks so much!

[maat1996]

When im down I listen to this...

[xXSuiseisekiXxDesu]

omg its so beautiful...i love it XD

your voice sound so good ^-^

[LightWolfBlade]

Rozen, Awesome Video, Congrats on all your good reviews. Maybe do another good vid like this.

[shinkukage09]

Not bad at all for a fandub. Could use some work on the lyrics, but you have a definately good voice for it

[NiGHTSdreamer143]

your voice is so good,it sounds like this is the actual song!

[AMULETExNEKO]

i like the japanese version better.....but this is still a good fandub!!

[Nu1ax]

Woah... I never expected this in a fan dub... You where amazing! One of the best fan dubs I ever heard... You boost my faith in them... Special when you use one my favorite touhou vids... Thanks...

[Fgafmi]

You're amazing! You're voice is better than other "singers"' voice!

[TheWingedKnight101]

WAHT? The sky isnt blue! ITS REDISH ORANGE AND U HAVE A FREAKIN AMAZING VOICE!!!!!

[starhida]

Are you certin that Cool and Create didn't sing this in english?

[AliarYamato12]

Your voice sounds great. You have feeling in your voice and it is smooth. You sound like you have practiced. ^.^

[Takeiteasymarisa]

Make more dubs! D: Your voice is awesome!

[aelitaninja]

My friend loves patchouli and she clicked on this ready to pause and leave (we hate crappy fandubs) But we heard it and we're like, >:O

[atyazlier]

Cool!! I like your voice when you're singing :D

[Lamarfin]

Wow. This is amazing.. Awesome Lyrics!

[Skayv20]

very cool voice :)

[ZeldaFreeak10]

*0*, i love it, i can't stop listening to it. Great job!!!

[RainbowFirefly]

Your voice is AMAZING!

good job dude

[Nitzah123]

Wow, This sounds amazing:)

I actually started singing with you myself!

[30raven30]

did anyone else get chills between 3:00 - 3:08

well i did

[shinkukage09]

@30raven30 I get chills through this whole song ._.

[albyfox]

Wow. Just. Just wow. Amazing. Rarely to fandubs get this good. Though, one question about the video. Marisa usually has golden eyes, so why are they purple in the vid? Can anyone answer this for me?

[Whackjood]

3:20

"Have you ever seen the sky so blue?" and then it shows a red/brown sky, wat

[Nakamaman]

hey mister is it okay if i use your lyrics ?? :D

[Panthersclaw]

the video: LOVE IT

your voice: AWESOME

RATING:  100/100

Awesome video man!

[pokemonlover20072]

I love this c: By chance, were you using Auto-tune for some of the higher notes? It just gives off that half-robotic feel when you go high. Great fandub, by the way. I love your lyrics and.... <3

[XxAlywaxX]

Dude do you have an MP3 download of this dub?! If not I demand one, this is amazing!

[Fantazism]

@XxAlywaxX Check the description :b

[XxAlywaxX]

@Fantazism Got it ^^

[starhida]

THAT IS AWSOME!!!!!!! Kicked ass dude, 100/5

[AKPhilosopher]

2:52 - "so open your door." The one she just blew apart with a spell card o_O.

[SylverMoon]

What the hell. I read "fandub" and I tough "I'm gonna have a good laugh" but it's actually pretty good! You did an awesome job!

[OtakuTanaka]

Wow... Its great that you changed the lyrics to work with english. The hikkikomori and jodan janai worried me.

[ChocoboMaster001]

Dude, that was AWESOME!!!!!

[ClRNO]

eye don't like the auto-tune you used. fail..

[cursedex]

I came to this video seeking a translation to Sakuya-Marisa dialogue, while whistanding awful english fandub... but WOW! I mean, WOW, you really got quite a voice there. Even though I couldn't find the dialogue translation, I don't feel dissapointed at all after hearing this.

[CoreySchmitt]

1:47 I love her facial expression.

[eidius1989]

awsome voice dude try for american idol

[chibigodthor]

Wonderful dub and, as many others have already said, you have quite a soothing voice.

One little piece of advice should you choose to redo the song: You might want to pay attention to how you pronounce "your" in the line "Tell me, what is your excuse today?" That was what really stood out to me in this version.

Other than that, keep up the good work! ^^

[PotterTurner7]

what is wrong with you people. You call this good.

[TheAnimedreamgirl]

i like ur vioce and this shows the what friends would do for each other

[YamiTsukiRyu]

That was awesome. :D

[FluffyTenshi]

you have a

beautiful soothing

voice :)

[Peanutpaw]

i want an mp3 for this, it's so awesome!!

[DODWriter]

1:47 Hahaha! No chance against that and on top of that the face. Ya that's boundless confidence! >:D

*Smirk*

[DizzyArt92]

Omg.. For once a fandub that's awesome made by a guy! <3

[nickey989]

Beautiful voice!!!!

[TheMetaFlare]

English!!

cool

[LightWolfBlade]

People, Word to the wise, dont lock yourself in a cold dark room just because your shy, get out and show the world your not gonna run away from the unknown, go meet people and enjoy the world while you can, for you can never know when it will simply stop being there for you. Awesome song and vid, and yea the mic is a little funky. Enjoy your lives people for as long as you can.

[sonicboomclan]

@LightWolfBlade but why locking yourself in closits is fun its esspecaly helpfull in hide and seek games but considering that in this people can FIRE THERE LAZORS (BWAAAAAAA) the closets would be a bad idea

[Frostwolf223]

One of the sweeter Touhou music videos I've seen.

Though there's something about this version I don't like. I think it might be the mic the guy used.

[DANmakuFailure]

People...

When you see that sunny day out in the middle of summer and your friend coming to ask if you hang out, you don't say 'no' no matter what. Get the hell out there and have the time of your life. That's what living is for.

[DarthHeath]

The hell why did you get a thumbs down? Oh well, let's fix that...*thumbs up*

[HigeBakudan]

i love this song!!!!!!!!!

life is out there...

go out and live...

the world don't belong to the humans only, belong to everyone who wants to live in it...

this is my own words and experience...

[SuperHurra]

No, don't leave your room.

There's nothing out here.

Stay inside.

I'm serious.

[maat1996]

@SuperHurra This comment. I love it

[ShySakura]

@SuperHurra lolzzzzzz thats funny!!!!

[DANmakuFailure]

This brings so many mixed feelings from ealirer in my life... the day you go outside in the light and out of the cold, the day I broke from the reclusiveness...

DAMN that was an awesome day to smile and for the sun to shine

[LightWolfBlade]

Rockin Video, Keep it up.

[BoRaiCho4]

Lolz, "Have you ever seen the sky so blue?" Yet the sky in the background is a purple-ish red-ish.

[darkdik]

kuba77

[3yoyo333]

I'm gonna watch this video over and over untill I remember the lyrics by heart! XD

[xLynal]

xD. I noticed his voice go bad in one part, though.

1:10 on the 'day' part. I'm just pointing it out. o-o. Overall, I liked the dub :).

[xLynal]

Geez, I'm just pointing it out. o_o.

(I knew somehow or another people would thumbs down that comment. x.x. Probably this one, as well..)

[animenaruto911]

パーフェクト！あなたは本当に優秀です！

[Skayv20]

Fantatic wery cool! ;) 5/5

[sarah1232343]

Most of the time, I HATE fandubs with the passion >:( o.O yeah a bit mean of me... ^ ^;;

But this is really amazing, when I first clicked on it, I was cringing, thinking it was gonna be horrible, but it's fantastic, this is beyond worth 5/5 :D

Great job, I'd love to hear more music from you :D keep it up

[KyuubiNoNeko]

omg wow..amaziiiing! *-*

[OperationAnime262]

That guy's voice is great

[Bohemian4ever]

This is definitely the best dub of this song. Anyone who thinks differently gets suppository'd by Reisen.

[alastor225]

It is one of the Best video I've ever seen! An d the voice! Its perfect to the melody! I like it very much!

5/5 * and Favs!

[nwzhg]

Awesomeeee!!!

It's a bit better than the original

[PrincesTomboy]

wow, this is... jsut... amazing. its suberb, not a single flaw! I applaud you! ^^

[launica0078]

cool vide its soo awesome

^_^

[dannyn132030]

Daaaaaam nice translation. And you sang it very close to the original

[Mitokura]

I think this is the first fandub I've ever liked. Lyrics are just awesome and accurate-fitting to the music and context.

[kalacs32]

Hey, that was very good!

(Anyway, is it just me, or the girls look like Satoko and Rika from Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni?)

[sarah1232343]

Yeah, Patchouli's hair (the fringe) is quite similar, Satoko's hair is alot shorter, but Marisa and Satoko are kinda boyish, I guess o.O

[Avery752]

this is mega awesome

[MajorS9]

this is great, but your voice sounds a bit processed, but yet you sound a little off here and there.... maybe I'm just deff.

[Beastfood]

I looove your low voice!

5/5, Please keep making music vids like this

[Kenjisan]

It's pretty rare that I actually like things like this but hey this was actually good! Haha. Japanese -> English song dubbing is notoriously tough, or so I believe. Would explain why 90% of them never sound that great.

[Death1121]

Wow, powerful message. Is this pointed towards the hikkikomori type of people or something?

[TouhouRabbit]

It's surprisingly good. Not enough for me to rate but it's good. he messed up on one point (the part where Marisa yells at Patches) but other than that good. :3