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  • just cause you have a quick flow doesn't make you a good rapper. Thats what the youtube rappers need to understand

  • Great lyricism, awful awful flow, delivery, voice, and everything else.

  • well, at lease your cutee (:

  • 0:45 eric cartman? lmao

  • @2FreshFoSho : I dont get it lol

  • @Mikeyj232323 lol i meant 0:50 ... you slightly sounded like cartman

  • @2FreshFoSho : So slightly lol

  • Zoinks!

  • Your lyrics and wordplay is sooo dope, just need a flow adjustment, good work

  • Shagggyyy :DD

    Liked it sorta, if you go slower you would be easier to understand..you can stay on beat if you wanted to..but that speed rapping shit messes you up.

  • Honestly the wordplay is only semi-good, most people are only pointing it out because 1: u added lyrics and meanings and 2: everything else is shit, you have no flow, look like a fucking idiot in those clothes (not that is has anything to do with skill as an MC, but just throwing it out there), your delivery is soft at best, weak multis (when you use them), and you sound really fucking annoying trying to spit fast and you are slurring half of you words, try ghost writing it will work out better

  • travelling @ 1:58

    dope word play up to 2:40

  • Terrible. Worst music video ever.

  • slow down sounds like shit

  • this is still my favorite. look im a dog, woof woof bark

  • i have that neff sweatshirt lol

  • it woulda been mad nasty if u knew how to fuckin flow

  • you got lyrics homie, but your trying to force too many syllables into some bars.(on first beat) other then that i liked it. checkmine out

  • check out are entry

    

  • lyrics: great. flow:none.

  • This is just a constant stream of lines sure some are funny but most are throw away as they lack continuity or any need to be there unless this dudes goal is to be some half ass comedy rap star with one appealing feature in the fact that he can rap fast but that without flow is still garbage. Practically everything this dude said was half funny and fully corny on top of that his vocals are louder than the beat or he had the mic in his mouth cause you can barely hear the beat over his shit vocals

  • hahaaaaa

  • yo braah u got some skills bro keep it up dont let haters bring you down

  • where is Scooby

  • gots to much skill but sounds to white\

  • @BLINkkzz that's the most retarded thing I've ever heard...your just dumb this statements pisses me off more than anything I've seen yet...sounds to white? you must be black how does rap have a color? rappers have different colors and most of the time white rappers are better so your just dumb

  • GOOD ON THE WORDS MAYN you should checkk my entry out homie !

  • Terrible lol

  • lol forced multys, no style, sorry but i laughed all the way through this

    

  • @primus10001 ur supposed to it's meant to be a joke

  • PDflow lookin ass

  • Who else thought this was a joke at first? lmao hes actually good

  • try REAL GOOD KIDS - Teddy Bear (Dont Funk Up Contest) HMM?

  • Amazing word play... But the flow's awkward as well as the delivery and voice. Slow down and speak more clearly. Intense fucking word play.

  • Ha this is cute :)

  • good lyrics, but u remind me of weird al

  • Is Scooby-Doo submitting an entry too?

  • IM GONNA WIN THE CONTEST CHECK OUT MY VIDEO!!

  • check out my entry when u get a chance

  • this is the perfect example of how you shouldnt attempt to rap fast if you cant

  • ok.. u have the lines.... now work on the delivery

  • good wordplay gotta work on staying on beat tho

  • My Entry is Doper than this & it only has 160 views. Please support actual talent and check it out. /watch?v=7VNXZilVTrM

  • Ok that was sick... but what the fuck is up with the hat? You look like a queer..

  • lyrics are dope, delivery is sporadic,

  • you were so off beat lol

  • When are this kids gonna understand that fast doesn't necessarily mean good.

  • @OmarMetalcore i know word play and going fast doesn't matter if your not staying on time and your not pronouncing ... i know I'm not the best hell my track even says so but i wouldn't have released this in this condition

  • if it werent for the lyrics i wouldnt have got the wordplay but i think a lot of people didn't like it because of your flow and just the way it sounds.

  • man you suck. you a joke

  • u typed out all ur words in ur video but u only said like one word in the actual sentence? ur deliverys all off man lmfaooo... and turn ur hat round the right way please 

  • id say good job on the lyrics but your delivery ruined them, not hating, just some constructive criticism. dont try to rap faster than you can keep up with, your words end up slurring and fucking up the song

  • FINALLY a entry that's not about killing and saying there harder then everyone else.

  • @ZackOnCrackk mine not about that though i do metaphorically kill lil wayne so mmm

  • lol dis was hilarious but not in a good way

  • I don't think allow phoney wiggers on 106 & Park.

  • Thats dope dude !! and you'll get better keep it crackin

  • please everyone check out my entry

  • haha  amazing (:

  • nice check out my entry

  • Hey, Clever lines man, im not sure your style is what the contest is lookin for but you obviously put good time into it. Only thing is, without subtitles, it mite be hard to understand. Props tho.

  • thats was pretty funny lol check mine out too!

  • HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA

  • sick friggen word play

  • @Tragickcurse : Thank you man, I feel like only a few people get some of my lines.

  • @Mikeyj232323 if you think you are ill enough then go prove your skills in KOTD battle league or grind time now league

  • fight me

  • @VHfan458 u mad D: ??

    

  • And my "And my *tight Jeans fit it*?..Gay.

  • @RebornHipHopIc0n : *Jeans fitted . It was a clever line, "Hat snapped back but my tight jeans fitted". With that said, I don't have tight jeans lol

  • @Mikeyj232323 Oh..i just think tight Clothes are for Gays but anyway i like the 2nd part more..i wish you a good luck.

  • @RebornHipHopIc0n nah bro your just to dumb to catch on metaphors because hats are fitted not jeans...it's backwards for humor

  • white boy got skills

  • @dj33431 : Thanks man

  • @Mikeyj232323

    SUPERR SIKEEE !!!! 

  • sikk lyrics and flow but i just dont no ifi like how u present urself but it was good

  • Tits perkier than call of duty lol

  • haha good shit

  • this dope check my entry out!

  • 12 dislikes? are those from all of yelawolf's fans??

  • if you don't win Hopsin don't know talent

  • @F33lherslipping your a dumbass there are so many better MC's than this dude

  • bring the heat line was nastyyyyy

  • he's gonna win this shit. hands down

  • good stuff my dude, and i'm shooter mcgavin, i know good stuff.

  • Go check out passionate MC. This guys good, but Passionate...

  • why y tryin to be yelawolf

  • @baller1234life : Dude no way I sound like Yelawolf lol I'm way more laid back and don't rap about what he does. Different styles.

  • @Mikeyj232323 on another note; i would insta-download this if the quality wasnt such shit, and if you said everyword fully, its like your wordplay was entertaining jus the flow is a lil choppy and rushed

  • @baller1234life trying to be yelawolf? why you tryin to be a faggot?

  • Wow I'm surprised that was good haha Thumbs up if you were surprised.

  • "I'll be on 106th & Park you can B.E.T on it" and "All these rappers optometrists only carin about the I (eye)" Were amazing lines, stay on it kid!

  • This is the best i've seen so far, NICE

  • Really good, it's just that you need to keep on beat. Maybe it's just the way you synched the beat and voice.

  • this is funny && actually good !!!

  • keep grindin homie!!

  • why the fuck you sound like Yelawolf?

  • hahahaha

  • dude. this is sick and fucking hilariously funny

  • nicely done. good luck man.

  • Sick !

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