Honestly the wordplay is only semi-good, most people are only pointing it out because 1: u added lyrics and meanings and 2: everything else is shit, you have no flow, look like a fucking idiot in those clothes (not that is has anything to do with skill as an MC, but just throwing it out there), your delivery is soft at best, weak multis (when you use them), and you sound really fucking annoying trying to spit fast and you are slurring half of you words, try ghost writing it will work out better
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This is just a constant stream of lines sure some are funny but most are throw away as they lack continuity or any need to be there unless this dudes goal is to be some half ass comedy rap star with one appealing feature in the fact that he can rap fast but that without flow is still garbage. Practically everything this dude said was half funny and fully corny on top of that his vocals are louder than the beat or he had the mic in his mouth cause you can barely hear the beat over his shit vocals
@BLINkkzz that's the most retarded thing I've ever heard...your just dumb this statements pisses me off more than anything I've seen yet...sounds to white? you must be black how does rap have a color? rappers have different colors and most of the time white rappers are better so your just dumb
@Gracefulpine please check out the track Broke N Famous did for Hopsins "dont fu(n)k the beat up contest" all raw lyrics and that gritty underground that hopsin fans will love. click on the name tag below and look at the video "black eminem" by dub ace and wuzee d. if you like check out the contest and vote to help us climb to #1. thanks for your time. peace
@OmarMetalcore i know word play and going fast doesn't matter if your not staying on time and your not pronouncing ... i know I'm not the best hell my track even says so but i wouldn't have released this in this condition
if it werent for the lyrics i wouldnt have got the wordplay but i think a lot of people didn't like it because of your flow and just the way it sounds.
u typed out all ur words in ur video but u only said like one word in the actual sentence? ur deliverys all off man lmfaooo... and turn ur hat round the right way please
id say good job on the lyrics but your delivery ruined them, not hating, just some constructive criticism. dont try to rap faster than you can keep up with, your words end up slurring and fucking up the song
Hey, Clever lines man, im not sure your style is what the contest is lookin for but you obviously put good time into it. Only thing is, without subtitles, it mite be hard to understand. Props tho.
@GlobalModders please check out the track Broke N Famous did for Hopsins "dont fu(n)k the beat up contest" all raw lyrics and that gritty underground that hopsin fans will love. click on the name tag below and look at the video "black eminem" by dub ace and wuzee d. if you like check out the contest and vote to help us climb to #1. thanks for your time. peace
@Tragickcurse please check out the track Broke N Famous did for Hopsins "dont fu(n)k the beat up contest" all raw lyrics and that gritty underground that hopsin fans will love. click on the name tag below and look at the video "black eminem" by dub ace and wuzee d. if you like check out the contest and vote to help us climb to #1. thanks for your time. peace
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@Mikeyj232323 on another note; i would insta-download this if the quality wasnt such shit, and if you said everyword fully, its like your wordplay was entertaining jus the flow is a lil choppy and rushed
just cause you have a quick flow doesn't make you a good rapper. Thats what the youtube rappers need to understand
stevenrobinsonmovies 1 day ago
Great lyricism, awful awful flow, delivery, voice, and everything else.
SwiftPageProductions 3 days ago
well, at lease your cutee (:
i5TUNTH4Rd 5 days ago
0:45 eric cartman? lmao
2FreshFoSho 1 week ago
@2FreshFoSho : I dont get it lol
Mikeyj232323 1 week ago
@Mikeyj232323 lol i meant 0:50 ... you slightly sounded like cartman
2FreshFoSho 1 week ago
@2FreshFoSho : So slightly lol
Mikeyj232323 1 week ago
Zoinks!
cstober 2 weeks ago
Your lyrics and wordplay is sooo dope, just need a flow adjustment, good work
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KintuNomo 2 weeks ago
Shagggyyy :DD
Liked it sorta, if you go slower you would be easier to understand..you can stay on beat if you wanted to..but that speed rapping shit messes you up.
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slurztheproblemchild 3 weeks ago
Honestly the wordplay is only semi-good, most people are only pointing it out because 1: u added lyrics and meanings and 2: everything else is shit, you have no flow, look like a fucking idiot in those clothes (not that is has anything to do with skill as an MC, but just throwing it out there), your delivery is soft at best, weak multis (when you use them), and you sound really fucking annoying trying to spit fast and you are slurring half of you words, try ghost writing it will work out better
420ftw1 3 weeks ago
travelling @ 1:58
dope word play up to 2:40
ItMightBeAChicken 3 weeks ago 2
Terrible. Worst music video ever.
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KidRealMusic 3 weeks ago
slow down sounds like shit
MrNiceWax 3 weeks ago
this is still my favorite. look im a dog, woof woof bark
MrTealio09 3 weeks ago
i have that neff sweatshirt lol
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8Jbake8productions 3 weeks ago
it woulda been mad nasty if u knew how to fuckin flow
TJaySuicidesChild 4 weeks ago
you got lyrics homie, but your trying to force too many syllables into some bars.(on first beat) other then that i liked it. checkmine out
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GRIMEYMASTERS 1 month ago
lyrics: great. flow:none.
clickeduptexas 1 month ago
This is just a constant stream of lines sure some are funny but most are throw away as they lack continuity or any need to be there unless this dudes goal is to be some half ass comedy rap star with one appealing feature in the fact that he can rap fast but that without flow is still garbage. Practically everything this dude said was half funny and fully corny on top of that his vocals are louder than the beat or he had the mic in his mouth cause you can barely hear the beat over his shit vocals
maniac90sm 1 month ago
hahaaaaa
lingo508 1 month ago
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ThumbsUpEntmnt 1 month ago
yo braah u got some skills bro keep it up dont let haters bring you down
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ToneakaStr8UpG 1 month ago
gots to much skill but sounds to white\
BLINkkzz 1 month ago
@BLINkkzz that's the most retarded thing I've ever heard...your just dumb this statements pisses me off more than anything I've seen yet...sounds to white? you must be black how does rap have a color? rappers have different colors and most of the time white rappers are better so your just dumb
TheKlownfish420 1 month ago
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zainq786 1 month ago
Terrible lol
emandicp 1 month ago
lol forced multys, no style, sorry but i laughed all the way through this
primus10001 1 month ago
@primus10001 ur supposed to it's meant to be a joke
TheKlownfish420 1 month ago
PDflow lookin ass
UnholyAngel76 1 month ago
Who else thought this was a joke at first? lmao hes actually good
DjKnightSky23 1 month ago
try REAL GOOD KIDS - Teddy Bear (Dont Funk Up Contest) HMM?
musicJustus 1 month ago
Amazing word play... But the flow's awkward as well as the delivery and voice. Slow down and speak more clearly. Intense fucking word play.
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TheWickedShitCom 1 month ago
Ha this is cute :)
TazLynnify 1 month ago
good lyrics, but u remind me of weird al
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PNCGOMEZ 1 month ago
Is Scooby-Doo submitting an entry too?
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dpaosd 1 month ago
this is the perfect example of how you shouldnt attempt to rap fast if you cant
JporterMT 1 month ago
ok.. u have the lines.... now work on the delivery
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KintuNomo 1 month ago
good wordplay gotta work on staying on beat tho
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KintuNomo 1 month ago
Ok that was sick... but what the fuck is up with the hat? You look like a queer..
roloson101 1 month ago
lyrics are dope, delivery is sporadic,
AtomskHipHop 1 month ago
you were so off beat lol
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ViceThaSavage 1 month ago
When are this kids gonna understand that fast doesn't necessarily mean good.
OmarMetalcore 1 month ago
@OmarMetalcore i know word play and going fast doesn't matter if your not staying on time and your not pronouncing ... i know I'm not the best hell my track even says so but i wouldn't have released this in this condition
ninety9one 1 month ago
if it werent for the lyrics i wouldnt have got the wordplay but i think a lot of people didn't like it because of your flow and just the way it sounds.
SL4VE0WNER1904619 1 month ago
man you suck. you a joke
TheNikepro19 1 month ago
u typed out all ur words in ur video but u only said like one word in the actual sentence? ur deliverys all off man lmfaooo... and turn ur hat round the right way please
iRRichiee 1 month ago
id say good job on the lyrics but your delivery ruined them, not hating, just some constructive criticism. dont try to rap faster than you can keep up with, your words end up slurring and fucking up the song
verbaltag 1 month ago
FINALLY a entry that's not about killing and saying there harder then everyone else.
ZackOnCrackk 1 month ago
@ZackOnCrackk mine not about that though i do metaphorically kill lil wayne so mmm
ninety9one 1 month ago
lol dis was hilarious but not in a good way
primus10001 1 month ago
I don't think allow phoney wiggers on 106 & Park.
rmordica 1 month ago
Thats dope dude !! and you'll get better keep it crackin
stompin74 1 month ago
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Eberrios215 1 month ago
haha amazing (:
fisher444100 1 month ago
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KNUKLES54X 1 month ago
Hey, Clever lines man, im not sure your style is what the contest is lookin for but you obviously put good time into it. Only thing is, without subtitles, it mite be hard to understand. Props tho.
joshalvster 1 month ago
thats was pretty funny lol check mine out too!
KhidFlo 1 month ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA
AngryMan410 1 month ago
sick friggen word play
Tragickcurse 1 month ago 3
@Tragickcurse : Thank you man, I feel like only a few people get some of my lines.
Mikeyj232323 1 month ago 2
@Mikeyj232323 if you think you are ill enough then go prove your skills in KOTD battle league or grind time now league
GlobalModders 4 weeks ago
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dougieham8 4 weeks ago
fight me
VHfan458 1 month ago
@VHfan458 u mad D: ??
turboz8826 1 month ago
And my "And my *tight Jeans fit it*?..Gay.
RebornHipHopIc0n 1 month ago
@RebornHipHopIc0n : *Jeans fitted . It was a clever line, "Hat snapped back but my tight jeans fitted". With that said, I don't have tight jeans lol
Mikeyj232323 1 month ago
@Mikeyj232323 Oh..i just think tight Clothes are for Gays but anyway i like the 2nd part more..i wish you a good luck.
RebornHipHopIc0n 1 month ago
@RebornHipHopIc0n nah bro your just to dumb to catch on metaphors because hats are fitted not jeans...it's backwards for humor
TheKlownfish420 1 month ago
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dougieham8 4 weeks ago
white boy got skills
dj33431 1 month ago
@dj33431 : Thanks man
Mikeyj232323 1 month ago
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dougieham8 4 weeks ago
sikk lyrics and flow but i just dont no ifi like how u present urself but it was good
evan41795 1 month ago
Tits perkier than call of duty lol
TheGrimDemize 1 month ago
haha good shit
ckchardin 1 month ago
this dope check my entry out!
pxarm 1 month ago
12 dislikes? are those from all of yelawolf's fans??
gold0882 1 month ago 2
if you don't win Hopsin don't know talent
F33lherslipping 1 month ago
@F33lherslipping your a dumbass there are so many better MC's than this dude
MillzzyyProductions1 1 month ago
bring the heat line was nastyyyyy
NOSOPA3 1 month ago
he's gonna win this shit. hands down
NOSOPA1 1 month ago
good stuff my dude, and i'm shooter mcgavin, i know good stuff.
ShooterMcgavinRap 1 month ago
Go check out passionate MC. This guys good, but Passionate...
z0mbicidaI 1 month ago
why y tryin to be yelawolf
baller1234life 1 month ago
@baller1234life : Dude no way I sound like Yelawolf lol I'm way more laid back and don't rap about what he does. Different styles.
Mikeyj232323 1 month ago
@Mikeyj232323 on another note; i would insta-download this if the quality wasnt such shit, and if you said everyword fully, its like your wordplay was entertaining jus the flow is a lil choppy and rushed
Exeek 1 month ago
@baller1234life trying to be yelawolf? why you tryin to be a faggot?
DrGreenMusic 1 month ago
Wow I'm surprised that was good haha Thumbs up if you were surprised.
HatefulIgnorance 1 month ago
"I'll be on 106th & Park you can B.E.T on it" and "All these rappers optometrists only carin about the I (eye)" Were amazing lines, stay on it kid!
ThePowerfulSecret 1 month ago
This is the best i've seen so far, NICE
shaqdaddymirza 1 month ago
Really good, it's just that you need to keep on beat. Maybe it's just the way you synched the beat and voice.
geekstar9 1 month ago
this is funny && actually good !!!
DelilahxDuncan 1 month ago
keep grindin homie!!
Bdice3 1 month ago
why the fuck you sound like Yelawolf?
camron77777 1 month ago
hahahaha
ta719208 1 month ago
dude. this is sick and fucking hilariously funny
SageIacovone 1 month ago
nicely done. good luck man.
Son0fAbraham719 1 month ago
Sick !
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