Pain Is Weakness

[Minwu325]

PAIN IS SIMPLY WEAKNESS LEAVING THE BODY

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[avisualfeel]

Wow! Perfectly delivered with music sound trk. However it is an emotional & disturbing account that can be felt!

[hj351]

Wow. faved and subscribed.

[nezahualcoyotl85]

pain is not weakness how we deal with that pain is what defines our strength!!

[VisionGhostPoet]

So glad this is still up, u pierce through the screen to the actually of soul and emotion with this piece. U wield incredible delivery and power on the straight roles!

[writteninword]

Thank you ever so much, sir!!!

[rodanosamehr]

Well done although the music detracts rather than adds to the piece--just a thought

[samdougken]

Excellent delivery, excellent words.

I refused to cry, so I laughed.

Beautiful piece.  You have earned a subscriber.

[BigPrairieDude]

The power of your poem left me shaking. You have such a simple way of building an image with words that adds to the intensity of your poem.

[tjkoz22]

Very powerful piece.

5* and fav

I saw your comments on one of Lo's (tinyspectacle)vid's

I have subbed your channel, too.

Tom

[Lycan7lover]

Thanks for the vid!

[TheFlawedPoet]

Nice presentation. You should do more spoken word you're a natural!

[Tiredofcrap]

I belief

I fought myself to not let go tears refused to , so I gave up

[visionghost]

Watched this again just there and this just stopped my heart. Anything more and you could stop time.

[MorganAnsons]

thank you David, for the share,

Excellent work, W.I.W..

[rawvocal90]

interesting....

very interesting poem. i like.

[ooglebydoogleby]

i dont know weather its ok. your laughter echos out through the hollowness of your pain. he might say relax but to who does he speak. to the hope of a gentler love or the corpse of your asperations for devotion. you certainly are alive and worthy of an interested ear. keen inteligence bound must seek for the turn of the weave it often lies within. (peice to you sory bout my spelling)

[PrettyPoeRoses]

i needed this for today

goOd ish

[goshajazz]

amazing poem really amazing subscribing

[writteninword]

Thank you so much!! :)

[tinySpectacle]

Your reading of this is very good. Excellent writing, too.

[karinutza33]

I like the way you wrote this poem!

[ezseeker]

This is splendid. I just don't know how you could have said it in a more convincing manner. Great.

Easy

[writteninword]

I appreciate it greatly ;)

[catspit1170]

Very cool recital. Emotional. Powerful!

[writteninword]

Thank you so much!

[catspit1170]

You are very welcome. I look forward to more...

[lioninchains]

Anyone who's man enough to break the seal on the marriage covenant, should be man enough to fulfill it. I only regret there are so few real men left in the world. For the sake of carnal pleasure they will destroy a sacred trust. You should have cried and told him that now "we are one!" The statement pain is weakness leaving the body, was written by a brilliant lunatic by the name of Nitchie. He was one of Hitlers role models. You are still a beautiful young lady, seek the light for healing.

[newkirk915]

deeply dark

[tastetherainbow89]

this is brilliant..very powerful and i bet lots of people can relate with this.

[bizzarkreations]

Interesting My dear ,

[Kabuki0009]

A great piece this love it^.^ *****stars;)

[liketelevisionsnow]

that's a damn fine piece of writing...

[writteninword]

Well thank you! I hope I can make another damn fine piece of writing. Time will tell, eh?

[colamoonpig]

Brilliant work !

5 Stars *****

Hans :o)

[writteninword]

5 stars?! Great! Thanks, Hans!!

[NewWarriorMan]

kewl.

[happy2oblige]

Great! fab! sad! bad! neat!

[writteninword]

awesome! splendid! horrid! terrible! funky! yes!

[ILovesMcr]

woah, such a brilliant poem, *5 stars* extreemly well thought over

[AshleyMarlene]

A reality for many lonely, desparate women.

Acolades of a animal, not a man.

KUDOS

.~♥•´(¯`♥´¯)`•♥•´(((HUGS)))`•♥­•´

..~♥ღ`*.¸.*´ღ♥.Ashley Marlene~

[writteninword]

Lonely, desperate, yes. I think you understand this well.

[paddycake5201]

that was so very good.

[writteninword]

aw, thanky

[MrDaMan]

Honesty is often like a car crash you can't tear your eyes from. So very real and can't be ignored. Well done, well done. 5 stars.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Yea! Gen does poetry for real! 5* fav - now do more or answer to my rabbit!

[writteninword]

:D

I will try. I like this whole "poetry" thing. Don't tell Mone if I'm slacking; I'll wet my pants if she gets pissed.

[hoffmann9471]

Very toaching and great poem. It´s a pitty how often it´s the truth ....

Many stars

[marycigarettes]

that would more than likely delight him.

[marycigarettes]

oh that was great!!!

and i envy you..he sounds delicious..though you maybe disagree...tell him to contact me...i'm his man....and i love prison sex by tool....

take care sweet thing.....that was beautifully put over.

[writteninword]

Well thank you kindly! He was delicious at the time, though now thats its been some years I might have a thing or two to teach him ;)

[rowsdowersavesus]

That was moving, deep, sad. Wow.

[writteninword]

Thanks for watching and thanks for sending it out to others.

[rowsdowersavesus]

No problem. It deserved it.