I LOVED the bit where she cries through the song, and the beginning, the "he loved me more than anything" sounds really good as well, but the spoken text Ron says just don't fit in at all. If I were you I would get those out. And when he appears when he says something ( I couldn't hear what) doesn't fit either.. it's too bright with the rest. And her... repeated nodding looks weird too. ( 0:17 )
Besides that it looks really interesting and I'd like to see what comes of this. :D
I LOVED the bit where she cries through the song, and the beginning, the "he loved me more than anything" sounds really good as well, but the spoken text Ron says just don't fit in at all. If I were you I would get those out. And when he appears when he says something ( I couldn't hear what) doesn't fit either.. it's too bright with the rest. And her... repeated nodding looks weird too. ( 0:17 )
Besides that it looks really interesting and I'd like to see what comes of this. :D
dukedevlinluvah 3 years ago
you mean the part in the mirror, right?
Anyways, thanks for the comment, glad you liked it ^^
HarryPotterGurli 3 years ago