Dance with a Vampire: [1x1]

[bornthiswayx3]

ah, this is the good 'ol youtube days. I remember all of your old stories on here. I've been watching/reading your fanfics for two years now :)

[VaNloveugreece]

what's the first first song?_:)

[OMFGitsLINDZ]

you know what this reminds me of ? the book Evermore. its like a series, lol. Did you base this story off of that? Because the storyline sounds similar.

[devilmabob]

i love this series it the second or thried time i have watched it nd u would like to know the name of the song tthat plays in the benginning credits if you could tell me the name i would be very greatful

[iceskatting]

so cool but is like the book of evermore but except it is with a immortal not a vampire

[SelenaxSnuggle]

aww i wanted to make a series like this.. lmao but u took the title i wanted.. haha but good series :)

[ZaCsPrInCeSs87]

so love it

[TwilightTina11]

Whats the first song??

[Mileymeidol]

this is like the book evermore :P

[lassylauren]

roughly based.. lol

[Mileymeidol]

oh lol

[msattitude96]

@Mileymeidol i love that book. i wanna get the second one. havent yet though :/

[bluebloodblaise]

this reminds me of a book called evermore.. love it by the way

[Maddie08209]

yay, coolio. wanna have such a good looking stranger in class as well :D

[hypergirlhyper]

Why the heck did you use high school musical

[lassylauren]

why not?

[elizabeth01235]

evermore...

i know someone in rp with that name.

ahaha.

[NileyForeverX]

Whats the begining song? Like in the opening credits/intro

[ZanessaHeart778]

Unbeautiful

-Lesley Roy

-SawBaby

[liveyourlife1128]

whats the song in the opening credits?

[ZanessaHeart778]

Unbeautiful

-Lesley Roy

-SawBaby

[Chickofmanywonders]

whts the very last song

[heysammiex3]

i love your series<333

mines deff not as good as yours, basically because no one watches mine. (:

<33

[RoqinDork]

sry, again! but wut is the name of the song at the very end??? lolz sry

[RoqinDork]

and.... yall said u got inspired by a book named evermore, wuts the author of teh book??

[RoqinDork]

i luv this story or w.e but i wus wondering wuts the name of the song at the beginning like at around 1:14 ???

[kylesmomisabitch221]

Its hurry up and save me by tiffany giardina

[spooky5566]

there is a book name evermore and she wears the same cloths wow

[iluvjewellery101]

Hey my name is Elise and one of your characters ames is Elise! Thats so cool!

[jump5freak90]

reallyyy great! :) i can't wait to read the next one! i'm hoping this will get me inspired to read "Twilight" (i think i'm the only girl on the planet that hasn't read it yet..haha).

[catharine56]

like twilight kind of

[Countrygirlsrox]

LOL! i LOVE how u put the book "Evermore" together! lol. I cant wait for Blue Moon to come out Great series, Im watching them all right now for the first time

[iAnaisam]

wow this sounds like this book called evermore.

but she doesnt dance

weird

[lassylauren]

i was inspired to write this from the book evermore.

[hottgirl1994]

i totally loved! it! so intense lol ♥

[TwilightHeart2]

soooo good!!!!!!! EEP

[XxLeXixX1992]

great ep love it your anamazing writer

[lextasy227]

song at the end freaked me out a lil.O\/ERALL fantastic!first episode

[nalla1904]

the intro song is "unbeautiful" by lesley roy

[xXxZanessa13xXx]

awesome!

xx

[MissVanessaHudgens33]

Does anyone know the intro song?

[loutje555]

loved it

[xovampirehottiexo]

DRUMMER

[xovampirehottiexo]

i met tiff giaridina she performed at my school christ the king her drama is HOTT!!!

[xoxzanessaxox22]

does anyone know the song for the opening credits?

[JenniferSoccerGirl]

Tiffany Giardina - Hurry Up & Save Me

[94sharpay94]

my 2 name is Elise xp

[xozanessa411xo]

so damn good

love it

[OhMyZacharyEfron]

Love it!

[jashleyforever05]

omg!!! loved it!!!! seriously lol

[musicalgirl18]

aw, she so likes him. :p

i love this story already.

you started it out really well.

<3

[Lexers002]

what is the name of the song in the opening credits?

[floridaluver08]

also like CourtxFLO i thought it said please have a s*it....lmao, BTW, i luvvvv this vi

d!

[batzmary]

so damn cool and wow lol ^__^

[oliviahaalck15]

it's really awesome!! and the dance clips between fit so perfectly with your video... that i just can adore it even more... keep up!;)

[murisons]

I love it

[jowettey]

omg! i love it

[ZanessaloveinHeaven]

loved it!

[bellflowerchick]

i love it i love your series

[ohHix3you]

i loved it[:

[CourtxFLO]

omg! Lol, I almost had a hardattack!

at 4:22 where the teachers talking, I thought she said "please have a shit" then I bursted out laughing,

that was, until I saw what it actually said, then I laughed some more,

man Im dumb =p

[princessuhoo]

luved it x.

[XgoodnbrokenX]

OMG totaly awsome =]

i love the name evermore so creative <3

[Sellena132]

omg

you are soooo awsome!!!!!

[L4UR3NX0]

DUDE! this is AMAZING<3

[chickaluc]

Omg!!!!

I love this :D

Awesome job LO <33

xoxo

[CutieCocoMomo]

love it!!!

amazing!!!

next one pls!!!

[xoellabella101ox]

OMG! so good! please hurry!

[Dolphingirl1541]

oh my gosh its amazing nice job

♥

[HollywoodTuva]

Loved it!

Hurry up with the next one!!!

[farrockcutie14]

Love it

[zanessagirl4life]

I loved it!

[glamrosie]

goooddd (:

[IceWolf882]

Amazing! just amazing! love it!

[Naimahbbz]

Lauren tht was ace u are so good at stuff like this cant wait for your nect one, I think you should get over 200 comments with a story like tht

Tehe

[LaurenElise93]

wow, that was really good.

i really like the mysterious characters and can't wait to see how it turns out. :]

[PerfectxSweetheartx]

AMAZING! (:

[ramy200]

AMAZING!!!!!!!! i think this is going to be my favourite story because i'm a dancer too. I totally love dancing and i don't think i can live without music and dance! AMAZING EPISODE!

[WeLoveJbHm]

amazing i hate it that this cant be like a 30 minute ep lol

[lc4lif3vid3o]

OMG !!!

LOVED IT !!!!

Please upload the next eppy soon =D

[zanessarocks4e2g]

awsome!!!!

[vvrgzmn]

omg! i freaking loved it!! amazing!! that was way awesome!!! i need more!!!!

please!!!

[Anettemoreau]

OMG! Amazing! I love it!

[liveinlovex33]

Amazing!! it was awsome

It seemed really real

and i like the music you chose

[zaclover1993]

OMG!

I loved it so much!

Can't wait for the next episode x3

[TwiiinsStars]

loved it^^ can´t wait for the nxt one ;-)...

[efronheartshudgens]

FUCKKKKKKK! AMAZINGGGGG!

Damn laurennnn! Your getting better and betterrrrr! And your first ever story on youtube was just simply amazing! And still your getting betterrrrrr! Its crazyy! Awesomeeeeeee! x

[PinkMuffinNo1]

awesome!!!

i loved it :)

[luckyduckykitkat12]

woah i cant wait for the next that was sssoooo good you should wirte like real books lol

[honeylein93]

...damn girl!! your series are getting better and better!!

you are amaziiiing!!

[haydenpanettiere14]

that was awesome.great story :)

can't wait for the next one :)

[googlefriend111]

loved it

[maazanessa]

Oh god, I'm so inlove with that new series of yours... I can't wait for the next episode. I'm sure it's gonna be sooo good... I'm already addicted :)

XoXo MZ

[ChurkyBird3]

amazing! I luv all ur stories but this is by far the best i've read so far :]

And I'm sure there's better to come :]

xx

[troyellaloveu]

LOVE IT huni!!

it's was so cool!

5 stars!

[totallyinsane47]

i loveddd ittt

[VanessaCrazyFan]

OMG, your stories get better and better (if that's even possible). I love that story, it's gonna be amazing!!! =]

[xOcaoimheOx]

Wow.. that was amazing. (:

[pwettypwincessx]

Danm Girl

Yuu To Know How To Write A Good Story

Love It

Ah-maziin Aswell x

Cant Wait Till The Next One!! xox

[xXxZanessa13xXx]

it was so awsome girl!

xx

[aZANESSAlife]

ddat wuzz awsum

luvd it

gr8 eps

wana wtch anuvr lol

keep it up

luvn it

xxXxx

[highschoolm4ever]

OMG AMAZING!

[BitchsterXD]

daym seriously girl your good at this shit!!

i looovvvveee iiiiiitttttt!!

x]]

[devilmabob]

omg i loved it its now one of a favorites from all your story great job cant wait for the next one

[MintxChocolatexCandy]

OMG I SOOO LOVE THIS SERIES

if only directors watch this and make it into a movie..!!! :]

Can't wait 'til the next one ;]

[zanessarulez4eva]

elise acts like such a bitch !

[kelram101]

EPIC EPIC EPIC.

your pilots always lure you into a series.

this one definetely did.

i LOVEEEEEEEE it

[Miiiah81]

Oh my god great epi, can´t wait til next one!!!

[randomdayslolx]

oh my god! how on earth do you always, and i mean ALWAYS start your series with such amazing pilots? Mine always turn out horribly! how do you do it? and somehow manage to give it an eclipse feel?

[PiNKL0VER123]

omggg this series seems like it will be awesome so far I loved the first episode

:]

[vintagewannabe94]

this is the third time i've watched this and it 8:17am where i live and i haven't slept all night. lol

i live in england

[NessquickGlamour]

Freaking Amazing !

[livelovelife96]

woah.

i wish i could write aswell as you do!!!

Damn your good at this.

[Nessa1Fan]

More pweae i love it so much

[Storymakerxoxo]

whats the song in the beginning emmm....by the starring please tell me

[gabbybabyV]

that's cool, your story often has main female character is a girl seem not care about something that's not her bussiness. I like this

[juicyrockstar12]

ccuuuttee

i love how when they touched it was bam!

[JonasBrotherLuvaxx]

OMG this story looks good!!! I really like the way you have set the story out and the way you make all your credits for stories are amaxing i would never be able ot do that. I really can't wait for the next ep.

Hugs, Katy

[horsegal55]

loved it!

[Bec1234God5678]

Lauren , this brilliant.

you writing talent astounds me & love this story already.

well done. :D

[ashleyfan4eva]

wow...

you are a flawless writer!! i am super stoked for new episodes!! i want your imagionation.....you should write proffesionally.

[kaybaby1127]

damn i swear you qet better every day

[Presentingbonita]

great eppy! Good start can't wait for the next one!

[ZanessaIsInLove]

ahhhhhhh i already loved it

[123cmh]

awesomeee :]

[HsmZanessaFansite]

I love this series already..

can't wait for the next episode..

[xomiszloverxo]

OMGOSH!

This was so freaking good!

I loved it!!

I want some more!

[lovezaccharmed11]

loved it!!! there are absolutely no words to describe it. Everyone is right, you are a great writer. I hope u do end up being a writer someday cuz ur so good at what you do! i cant wait for the next one nd i relly want the next episode for strengthening wounds. Luv ya

[classycloe]

ohmg i totally heart this series can't wait for more and love the character ever never heard that name in my life but i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like the idea of this story it just different but good different U know lauren u really are a good writer.... ur very creative love ur brain lol

[SelenaJonas22]

l.o.v.e this i love Twilight and Zanessa so this "Show" is right for me:) and i LOOOOVE -love- storys!!! AHH

[NaniGurl4Lyf]

ohh i loved it  :)

her name kinda reminds me of the show everwood :P lol

[XoXoGinnyoXoX]

i loved the music it was perfect for a beginning ep.! The name is soo cute i loed that too..well i pretty much loved everything about it hope you keep making these vids! looovvvveeedd ittt!! =)!

[hsm3fan13]

that was really cool!!

cant wait 4 the next 1 :D

[zanessa14lover]

whoa. this was amazingly written. i love all the music you have in this. i also like the name evermore. i can tell why you changed it. i love how there's twilight-y stuff in this, not just the writing. like the end credits song. that's the song from the trailer. i really enjoy this series already.

[bojelly12]

loved it!!! i cant wait till the next one!!! whay is the ending credit song??

[vintagewannabe94]

I love every video you make. I also the fact that whenever I watch a vid of yours you intoduce me to new music.

[zanessaloverss123]

okk 2 wordss!!!LOVE ITT!!!!!!!!!!!!!N LIKE EVERY ZANESSA AND TWILIGHT FANSS LOL

OK LOVE IT! LOVE IT! AWSOME JOBB!WOW

[manderz2007]

That was great! I've read many comments that say your a GREAT writer, and those people are right! That was really good! Keep it up!

[TherealPBJ]

OMG!!THIS IS AMAZING!!!

[xhsmisthebestx]

Amazing:)

[jwebb2222]

i luv it wen u make up new name LO

i luv de name evermore really pretty

[Hoilster24]

This was really good..

I love the name Evermore, very very unique.

Listening to the music just fitted into the video.

What was the last song for the end credits? That song was interesting to mee.

[splitster7]

I really like the idea of this story. I love to dance as well, and there aren't that many dance series out there. I like the name Evermore, btw.

[tinabelle98]

GREAT. Evermore is a very unique name, i like it. I love Ever's character becuz she loves dancing like me and her attitude is interesting.

[autumnb822]

i LOVE the name Evermore!!! its soooo perfect!! cant wait for next ep!!

[SingingLuv2]

Evermore is such a pretty name ♥

ilove it!

Alexander seems so sweet; and i love how evermore is so timid and doesn't want to get involved w/ him ahah :P

do u think u could change the font? this one is a bit hard to read.

& what program did u use to make the openning credits? if it's wmm, im very impressed!

[zanessa4lyfe2007]

amazing

what was the ending credit song?

[pokey5470]

love it

[nessafan101]

I love it!

Keep going.

That was amazing.

[fasionashley]

That was amazing I love Ever's character, and the name Evermore is a very unique name and Alexander is so the next Edward Cullen lol

[xxthaaloveestoriee]

wow, thats ahmazing!

i loove this plot! i cant

wait for the next eppy!

[missxcullenxjonas]

That was amazing! I really like Ever's character, and she has an awesome name as well =] The plot seems really interesting. I've always loved movies that have to do with dancing, so this has really grasped my attention. But then again, your stories are ALWAYS unique and interesting ♥ I thought that this was a fantastic first episode! Can't wait til the next one <3

[MYREE300]

THAT WAS AWESOME GIRL

[SiNiStRe3]

wow i love it!

[Girliciousfan44]

love it :) cant wait till the next epi :) it was so awesome :)

[iloveyouDC]

omg comment people!

this was so awesome!

[ZacVanessarock]

WOW!! I think I'll LOVE this story!! AMAZING!

[BabyGirlRulzzz]

niceee about time something different i mean in a good way of courseeeee girl .... amaaaazing just like i thought and i guess this story i'll watch for now when the first episode is good means that the rest of the story will be more than good and your first was... perfect let's hope it stays that way

[Jessi285]

omg so good you got me addicted to all this vampire stuff!!!!! keep going

[Mollie091]

I Loved it!!

This was amazing keep going!!

Can't wait for the NExt one

[kadiegharba]

luv it

[xXraiseurvoiceXx]

wow this is

wow

amazingg (:

[XxXHudgenzFanXxX]

omg so good,i wander what will happen between him and her :]

[zacnessa0108]

wow awesome!! loved it so much!!

i got so into it =P

cant wait for the next! =)

[xzanessaliveinlovex]

ouhmygod,

I reallylikedit,

aha .. edwardcullen=zac efron,

drool*

LOL, Ican't waitfor more episodes xD

you're an awesome write Lauren (:

[ZanessaChannel95]

That was awesome 4 a 1st episode.

[HSMforeverHSM]

loved it

[ZanessaAreCute]

That was amazing, i know i'm already hooked on this story. ;D

The names are gorgeous too! Evermore, beautiful name & Alexander is such a handsome name. (:

[obsessionxx2]

that was really good

and i really love the opening song. and i love how he acts so normal and he isnt trying to hide the fact that he is a vampire.

[Cindyness01]

that was amazing!!!!!! Keep going keep going. Honestly how do you do it? You are an awesome writer! I love writing too and this is brilliant! I loved how Ever is like an outsider in school and a dancer outside of it. Alex is HOT! LOL This an awesome start for an awesome story!

[zanessafan101love]

dammm girl u got skills i already love it cant wait and i cant believe she talks to her friends like that

[musicwritingfreak]

this is totally innapropiate but i really want you to update strengthening wounds... ok now that i got that out of my system... i really liked this, well, i like everything you write but.. you know what i mean :)

[lassylauren]

we can't yet because there isn't 100 comments on Noel's episode, so comment everyone!

[musicwritingfreak]

awwgh! oh well, i guess i'll live. lolz j/k.

[RaquelCravinho]

Seriously, I just LOVE it!! So, so, so much!! Amazing work!! Can't wait for more... ;)

[happyhappydays122]

I love that! It sounds like a totally normal title as far as vampire stories go but I can tell it's gonna be interesting. I just saw one little mistake in your writing. The teacher said "take a sit" when I think it should've been "take a seat"

Otherwise, fantastic episode :)