Not bad, although I think you can improve on stylising the shots in between and needs colour correction. Plan it. Avoid back shots. Could've also shot him outdoors in some wide shots in the green and more CUs on his expressions. I feel there is too much text and maybe you could have gotten him to talk a little, if he could and throw in a bit of upsound. The grammar is wrong but then I'm a writer! LOL! Can definitely improve. Use Panasonic cam next time with fisheye and more silhouette shots.
Beautiful
kenpocentaur 4 years ago
Not bad, although I think you can improve on stylising the shots in between and needs colour correction. Plan it. Avoid back shots. Could've also shot him outdoors in some wide shots in the green and more CUs on his expressions. I feel there is too much text and maybe you could have gotten him to talk a little, if he could and throw in a bit of upsound. The grammar is wrong but then I'm a writer! LOL! Can definitely improve. Use Panasonic cam next time with fisheye and more silhouette shots.
jellyfarm 4 years ago