Moi Lolita Contest Entry

[xNightstars]

Your coloring is phenomenal <3

I don't know why everyone's complaining about big heads, since they look fine to me o3o The only thing that bothers me is that the girl on the left has... an awkward chin. But otherwise, the drawing is amazing~!

[Kenji1234Animelover]

I think its great! I think the heads are fine. People just need to stop being so critical. so what if the heads are a little big. in my opinion it looks just perfect.

[Kenji1234Animelover]

I think its great!

[shadowmuttzr0]

sometimes ur heads were too big but it looks fine here ur getting better

..... but...... her chin looks weird sorry but over all its great

[catsandrats95]

Ooooo.... Nice choice of music. :o I love Blue October. ^w^

Anyway, this is very good! Good luck... I'm sure you'll do well. :3

[princessgato380]

you're an amazing artist!

[iamzawsome]

i like your drawing style

[VanillaCocoaBunny]

obviosly you will win! the heads arent that big. and the eyes arent that small. i like your style of manga!!!!!

[volbeat1111]

@Loliloper I use a wacom intuous 3 :D.

[oshaikeuchi]

ehh i never realized you posted this x) *faves and features*

hope you dont mind ovo

[volbeat1111]

@oshaikeuchi Ahah of course not, the picture was made for you so do whatever you want with it :).

[kutangelwings]

you are so good at coloring and shading. it looks awesome. good luck :)

[animefairy3134]

lol it seems people have lost the power of reading XD oh and i wanna see the thong that inspired these adorab le outfits XP

[Starwberrupowar]

So pretty ;^;

And I lol'd at the CRITICS ARE HIGHLY DISCOURAGED. xD

[volbeat1111]

@Starwberrupowar Ahah are you loling at the fact that no one is reading it x.x;;;? lol

[jenhernandez2008]

@volbeat1111 sorry, hun, but as a fellow artist, i would say instead "no haters, helpful critiques encouraged" asking for no critics is like saying that you have no other improving, which is never the case, no matter how good you think you are. super pretentious sounding, btw.

[volbeat1111]

@jenhernandez2008 I have specified in another video as to why I ask for no critics, it is not because I feel I have no need for improvement, I actually need a lot of it, the reason why I ask for no critics is because I am extremely sensitive and bitchy and have a hard time applying the critics that people on here give me to improve my own works, mainly due to the fact that they never tell me how to improve, they just tell me what's wrong with my picture.

[magermeisje]

@volbeat1111 that's why you LEARN from what they tell you on what is wrong. is it hard to come to the conclusion that if they tell you the heads are too big for the bodies that, perhaps, you ought to learn about proportions? btw telling you to learn proportions IS telling you how to improve. you are a decent artist and at least admit to your fault about critics, but you either lack knowledge or simply disregard the basics of drawing. if you aren't serious about art or improving then ignore this.

[oshaikeuchi]

@volbeat1111 wow, there's quite the comment war going on here :O I feel bad for you.

I know what it's like to take critiques. oAo I don't particularly like them, because I don't feel like I can learn from words. oAo If I have a picture that has a wrongly-proportioned arm or something, chances are, I will probly know it. But if someone goes on about that arm, I'm not going to go back into one picture and redo the arm =A= Nor will I be applying anything into the next picture I draw because (cont)

[oshaikeuchi]

@volbeat1111 ..it's a whole different picture.

Wow, I forgot about the character limit on YT. xD;

In any case, I don't think it's wrong to not wanna take critiques. It's understandable that you wouldn't, when you've worked so hard on a piece. :x I'm all for people working and their own comfortability level and pace. :D And you have a nice style as it is so even if you work independently, you'll always improve.

[oshaikeuchi]

@volbeat1111 I will leave one more comment. :>

I actually don't understand why everyone's leaving the "big heads" comment. Sure, they're big, but... that's how big I draw my heads. I mean, it's anime. Big ass eyes and big ass heads. oAo I've never seen moe drawn humanly proportionate. xD

I think people might notice it more than others because the eyes are small compared to normal moe art, but, it still looks moe -- I think that's something to be proud of. It really defines your style, imo. :D

[AliceCullen230]

the pic is totally awesome but there's something wrong the heads. the heads are to big and not proportionate. but i still luv the pic, its awesome!!!!

[Krullemadull]

The heads are too big o.o They dont really fit the cute awesome bodies n_n'

[otamasandoicchi]

You draw heads really big all the time..

[volbeat1111]

@otamasandoicchi That's cause your eyes are too big :).

[otamasandoicchi]

@volbeat1111 Don't be a douche. I was being truthful. It's a problem you should fix because it makes your art look ridiculous. Your art itself is good, but the heads are too big.

[volbeat1111]

@otamasandoicchi I'm sorry for being a douche, I use bad humor as an outlet for being mad at people who tell me what's wrong with my pictures rather than telling me how to improve.

[razv23]

i think that their heads are too big.

[BloodyTearsofLove]

wow really good!

[Sasori1chan]

awesome. :D.