whats up people - i'm a new singer songwriter on here looking for some feedback. if you have time, please check out a few of my songs and let me know what you think.
I sing and ive got this instrumental that i cant seem to write a song to im sending this to song writers who i believe have a talent. At the end of december ill pick one of the songs. ill be recording the song and a friend will help me get further if your interested in helping me just get back to me on my profile thankyou :) and goodluck
veryyyyy good the lyrics at the bigening i thought were very strong cus we can all releate to it as feeling that feeling how about throwing in the word baby in there and yeah to make it a song that get stuck in the head :) great song !!!
absolutley amazing with a voice like that i would be very very very very concieted lol but i dont so i guess thats a good thing haha keep it up and good luck!!!!
AGAIN TALENT...i cryed LOL i never cry at songs! lol... i think i love your talent more than i love amy lees talent!....its not fair your so talented and not signed!....it was a lil rough at the end...but still great...
@rackyI your song describes what I hope she. is thinking....i havent heard from her in awhile.....she got scared of her feelings for me and retreated.
Has your dog ever starting howling while you were singing? I love how he/she sits there and just takes it all in! Perhaps you could write a song about your Dal. Call it Stripes.
wow, you're going to be big one day. and i really hope you do. you've got the talent to go out there and achieve greatness. Go For IT!! i'm already a fan and i know there's plenty more out there! i'm wishing you the best of luck in your future!
This is an amazing song..I really love it! You have such an amazing voice. I also love to sing and I'm teaching myself how to play guitar and your videos help me alot. I watched your video for I'd lie and learned how to play it by watching you...so thank you! :)
Let me just say, i listen to your stuff all the time! You have an AMAZING voice! If you ever get a recording contract..and release a CD.. i'll definitely buy it!! No doubt!
I love all of your covers and all of your originals :)
And I´m so honest to you, I almost cried when I listened to that song cause it´s my story I feel the way you describe in the song and I love a boy since I was 15 and now I´m 18 and I hope someday maybe he will ask me to be his wife...but it´s just a dream :)
i love watching all of your videos so much! that's all i watch on youtube. i love what u write and i can't wait to watch become a huge star. i was wondering what the chords were for this song b/c i would love to learn it and play along!
wow this is awesome! i can totally hear this on the radio. Especially on a country station. It just has that layout that contry songs seem to have. I have a feeling ur gonna be like...the next Taylor Swift or soemthing. lol. w/e that means.
hey baby!! that was a really great song. i really enjoy watching all ur videos! ;) anyways ur songs remind me of taylor swift. well im talkin to u right now on msn so ill just stop talking on here and talk to u on there. i love u so much
Hi, that's a great music. Your have a beautiful dog as well. I have three, shaolin, chiola and charica. I really liked your acute voice. It is perfect to style of music you sing.
Wow. I know you hear this a lot, but wow. You easily hang with the popular artists, and easily surpass most of what most people consider "popular artists"... in my opinon because your writing is honest, blunt, colorful, and deep.. as it draws the listener into the song.
so yeah, wow
keep it up! you've been blessed with this talent beyond amazing. look forward to hearing you on the radio someday (if that's one of your goals).
haha. after reading that i realized i didn't like how i used the word blunt.
in this case, blunt = straight forward, truthful.. sometimes painfully truthful, heartfelt, deep, and it causes the listener to respond emotionally.. which is every artist's goal i think.
You really out did yourself today...I love "This song" but "The REal thing" is just amazing...your voice is amazing and the guitar parts you wrote for them is just as amazing!
This is absolutely beautiful. I love the emotion you express in all your music and I think your writing is amazing. When you're singing a song it's like reading a good book and I can see and feel everything playing out before me.
beautiful song I really liked it
pinkdreamcatcher 3 months ago
really great song & voice. (: love the meaning, it's seriously relatable.
and your dog makes me think of the sublime dog!!! :D
hollyruth92 11 months ago
Could you put a link to download this song pleasE?
CheapAlternative 1 year ago
i thought ou would be horrible like all the other people who try to sing on youtube, lol, but you are really good. :), your dog is awesome to.
elijahcarna 1 year ago
wow you have such a beautiful voice! and u can play the guitar and ur dog is awesome!
kaitlinteece1 1 year ago
Great Voice.....keep it up.
starquant 1 year ago
WOW. you're soooo amazing =) love ur voice <3.
PicturesPicture 1 year ago
Nice!
helena1227 1 year ago
Nice song. Do you always sing with your dog?
JoAnnM19 2 years ago
Great job!!
shamrockfam 2 years ago
I really liked the song, you're very talented.
I'm watching your videos for more songs, keep going, you're on the right way :)
rafaelmoreir 2 years ago
russell morriss- the real thing is infinitly better than this song/effort/poor excuse for music, 0 stars
holl01 2 years ago
Bit harsh, sure it doesn't compare, and don't steal song titles. But I smell talent. Go to Fairbridge!
ScottyCollinson 2 years ago
you try and strum and sing without making any mistakes! its hard!
keep the good work up
mismatchsoldier 2 years ago
omg so good. i love it.!! your doggy is so cute too!! <3
NelsRandomStuff 2 years ago
Stunning.
Hope to hear more of your work, please let me know if you upload another video.
Best wishes,
Joey @ TC Helicon
tchelicon 2 years ago
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u all SUUUUCCCKKK. its like clone after fuckin clone JESUS ! only ur fukin decrepid pets can stand it!! this music should die for good
385181 2 years ago
Excellent!
SurpriseGuest1 2 years ago
Wow. I'm trying really hard to write songs and stuff. And you are a really big inspiration. You are a great artist. =]
iLLBExurxLOVEsuicide 3 years ago 3
the dog was bored lol
NathanCoalbine 3 years ago
love the song - really enjoyed
whats up people - i'm a new singer songwriter on here looking for some feedback. if you have time, please check out a few of my songs and let me know what you think.
thanks for your time
mcmillinhome 3 years ago
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shannonmurdoch 3 years ago
im probably going to do a cover of this song since i love it.
sour28x 3 years ago
veryyyyy good the lyrics at the bigening i thought were very strong cus we can all releate to it as feeling that feeling how about throwing in the word baby in there and yeah to make it a song that get stuck in the head :) great song !!!
ceofreddyhollywood 3 years ago
Wow, that is a truely amazing song. I love your voice! I hope you write another song soon. ;]
DJSamjamTV 3 years ago
Amazing!! I'm in love with this song and your voice.. =]
picklejar0o2 3 years ago
Excellent! Better than I could ever do. =] Keep it up.
GiVinGUpOnMe17 3 years ago
I was actually impressed with this, and Im not easily impressed lol. Cool beans :D
uncommonjustme 3 years ago
so beautiful! and I love the lyrics, everything is just so beautiful!
maynsnsa 3 years ago
vary nice, beautiful dog
Tunnalrat94 3 years ago
omg, you are so amazing.
this song is wonderful!
i write songs myself but i can never figure out music to it!
congratulations, you have a gift.
quidditchLOVErecycle 3 years ago
That dog is awesome
Rachellynn1992 3 years ago
love the song, and i LURVE the dog.
theseboots18 3 years ago
great song.!!!
and ur doggies cute:)
x-meg-x
helpplease08 3 years ago
absolutley amazing with a voice like that i would be very very very very concieted lol but i dont so i guess thats a good thing haha keep it up and good luck!!!!
RachaelandNina 3 years ago
your lyrics are really good.
everytime i write a song, it always sounds the same. yours is amazing.
groovyhotdog21 3 years ago
you are good : - ) you are a star
kineemilie95 3 years ago
Good stuff Rachel nice song (I like the dog too :0) ) Good Luck to you
AcombDave 3 years ago
wow thats awsome i hope you go far!
SeeYouAgain10 3 years ago
i dont like it ,,but just keep going :)
kloakenskansen 3 years ago
You kinda remind me of Savannah Outen. I like your voice.
lollypoplover96 3 years ago
wow girl!!!!!! i love it
bubblylove21 3 years ago
This is such a great song! I love it!
misty62493 3 years ago
very beautiful :D
Vrocks15 3 years ago
wow i want you to be famous!!!
elanparis 3 years ago
OMG that was AMAZING!!! ***** i loved it!
SoVerySophie 3 years ago
SPEECHLESS! AMAZING!
walk2it2out2girl 3 years ago
This is another one of my favorites. You are an amazing writer!!!
KimmieAnne87 3 years ago
WHOA. You are amazing! I love the song and yuor voice is awesome too!
imasmexyninja 3 years ago
you rock i bet you could make it big out their keep it up all you need is some one to discover you!
Kailiankid 3 years ago
Amzin!
Kisai10 3 years ago
how do copyright ur songs???
please mssg me and tell me!
guitarQ77 3 years ago
you know as you move, your camera focuses and refocuses? it's pretty cool. GREAT SONG!
cheesylovesong 3 years ago
tune i wish you luck
e4eug 3 years ago
AGAIN TALENT...i cryed LOL i never cry at songs! lol... i think i love your talent more than i love amy lees talent!....its not fair your so talented and not signed!....it was a lil rough at the end...but still great...
memyselfimcrazy 4 years ago
you are extrememly talented.
i love your voice.
keep it up.
xdeathxofheartx 4 years ago
omg!! This is so good i wish i had it on my ipod!!
klebekik 4 years ago
Amazing! May you send me the lyrics? I'd love to learn the song!
scj622 4 years ago
The lyrics are posted to the side. :)
rackyI 3 years ago
@rackyI your song describes what I hope she. is thinking....i havent heard from her in awhile.....she got scared of her feelings for me and retreated.
metalwayne42 1 year ago
Has your dog ever starting howling while you were singing? I love how he/she sits there and just takes it all in! Perhaps you could write a song about your Dal. Call it Stripes.
You're quite talented Rachel!!
Talsmahal 4 years ago
Thank you so much! No, she has never done that. I have actually written a song about my dog. I'll have to make a video of it soon! :)
rackyI 4 years ago
Wooo... this is amazing. I love those chords. Your voice is awesome.
Sweet acoustic, btw. I'll definitely be singing this song the rest of the day!
God bless! :D
faitheinme 4 years ago
This is amazing!! i love your dog.. and we have the same shoes!! :)
soccergal017 4 years ago
You are amazing! i have ahd a guitar since the smmer and i have yet to learn how to play. i want to write songs like yours.
xkelleyxbelleyx 4 years ago
i noticed your dog yawns in every video LOL
fuzzydreams 4 years ago
this is a great song...
and i really love your dog...
i will someday find myself a dalmatian... =)
SkiBum805 4 years ago
Oh my goshh this made me all teary eyed. Its SUCH an amazing song. and so freaking cute. absolutley beautiful.
ELociNs2 4 years ago
amazing voice!!!! i luv ur songs!! i wish i could play guitar as good as u can!!!! im still learning... but someday i hope to be as good as u!
Annie0262 4 years ago 2
u are gr8!
IzanksaHolly 4 years ago
your voice just rocks with the guitar AND the song you wrote.
...wow!
piggyy90 4 years ago
i really love it !! wow
breathinghistories 4 years ago
wow, you're going to be big one day. and i really hope you do. you've got the talent to go out there and achieve greatness. Go For IT!! i'm already a fan and i know there's plenty more out there! i'm wishing you the best of luck in your future!
kissdacook 4 years ago
wow you're gonna be the next Taylor Swift... i just know it! I look forward to hearing you on the radio! :)
RBChick17 4 years ago
ahhh your dog is my favoriteeeee
good job
coleandmiley94 4 years ago
I love your dogg
andd your voiceee
alexelizabethx333 4 years ago
hey! I love your song! how do you figure out the notes??
Aumsie 4 years ago
Well done! My dogs sit and look at me when I play guitar too. They are my biggest fans!
GuitarGooch 4 years ago
arabelle is cute =]
amazing, like always
ohmygeeitslee 4 years ago
chill bumps..
meowmeowsweetcuttie 4 years ago
Love the dog....
peacebindi 4 years ago
i would so buy a cd if u had one! you're AMAZING!!! i wish i was that good...
RBChick17 4 years ago
This song is INCREDIBLE.
wow...if you're not signed already you NEED to be.
KaylaMarie528 4 years ago 5
Definitley your best original
Cody2987 4 years ago
You are Such A Great Singer
zefronmember 4 years ago 2
Your posture is perfect,and your voice is impressing..oh and your dog gets me everytime..hes just looking at you..aha so cute! :)
keep up the good work!
MandyWants 4 years ago 2
ur an awesome songwriter! and singer!!!=]
countrygal4592 4 years ago
WOW YOU'RE AMAZING!! chords please? lol
likeadoll1 4 years ago
i'd listen to the radio more if there were more talent like you =).
malissa456 4 years ago 2
Thank you! :)
rackyI 4 years ago
I love your voice.
and I would buy your cd!!!!!!
omgggggggggggggggggg.
you are amazing.
and I have a good feeling that you will be veryveryvery successful
elizabethpollitt 4 years ago 2
ahhh i love love love it your rock !
illlRyanSheckler 4 years ago
awesome!
buckeyegurlio 4 years ago
You are very good!
fortini1977 4 years ago
amazing song! if you made a CD i would buy one.
more videos please!
<33
chancelover1221 4 years ago
This song is so beautiful. I really love it!
aldreaif 4 years ago
This is an amazing song..I really love it! You have such an amazing voice. I also love to sing and I'm teaching myself how to play guitar and your videos help me alot. I watched your video for I'd lie and learned how to play it by watching you...so thank you! :)
ilovefaithandtim 4 years ago
Awesome...I'm glad I could help. :)
rackyI 4 years ago
Beautiful song
5 stars
jacquesmees 4 years ago
ur amazing! great job, amazing work, perfect gouitar. xoxo
thatgirlAsha 4 years ago
the dog is cute!
galvenizedgumboots 4 years ago
Let me just say, i listen to your stuff all the time! You have an AMAZING voice! If you ever get a recording contract..and release a CD.. i'll definitely buy it!! No doubt!
:) God bless you!
ashk0304 4 years ago
you definitely should be famous because you are an amazing singer guitar player and writer i'm a singer and i'm learning how to play the guitar
so i can say from personal experience what an amazing singer you are
sweething4005 4 years ago
This is really good!
lindsaygal19 4 years ago
this is just such a beautiful song
buckeyegurlio 4 years ago
i dont know what it is , but i absolutly love you and your music. you have amazing talent! and i love your lyrics
janelliie 4 years ago
I love all of your covers and all of your originals :)
And I´m so honest to you, I almost cried when I listened to that song cause it´s my story I feel the way you describe in the song and I love a boy since I was 15 and now I´m 18 and I hope someday maybe he will ask me to be his wife...but it´s just a dream :)
It´s such a beautiful song :)
Yoo did so a great job :)
Ash
Ashlina 4 years ago
is this based on something real??
sovictoria 4 years ago
Somewhat, I wrote it about my boyfriend. :)
rackyI 4 years ago
This is such a great song! :)
RDugenske 4 years ago
I think that you are just amazing.. I love your voice
lithiumangel1980 4 years ago
oh my gosh thank you so much! im so excited:D
carsonmlove 4 years ago
i love watching all of your videos so much! that's all i watch on youtube. i love what u write and i can't wait to watch become a huge star. i was wondering what the chords were for this song b/c i would love to learn it and play along!
carsonmlove 4 years ago
I posted the chords to the side. :)
rackyI 4 years ago
I love it. < 33
Beautiful voice!
thatgirlAsha 4 years ago
This is one of the best songs I have heard in a long time.......and it is one of favorites!!!!!!!! u r AWESOME!!!!!
TearDropsOnMyGuitar5 4 years ago
wow this is awesome! i can totally hear this on the radio. Especially on a country station. It just has that layout that contry songs seem to have. I have a feeling ur gonna be like...the next Taylor Swift or soemthing. lol. w/e that means.
KenoCorgi 4 years ago
SOOOOOOOOOOOOo awesome....man..get a CD out so I can buy it! LOL I love the feel of your songs, the sound of your voice...keep it up!!
Charismalou 4 years ago
you're ammmaaaazzzzing. :]
justsoflyyx3 4 years ago
awesome!!! if you ever have an album, i'd buy it totally!! i love acoustic, and i love love songs!! and i love your dog!!
<3
timberlakelvr 4 years ago
oh man! You are so awesome. What an original person. [:
<3
greendayluver67 4 years ago
Very nice!
ancgerard 4 years ago
I'll be sure to let you know when I post another original! :) Thanks so much Larry!
rackyI 4 years ago
hey baby!! that was a really great song. i really enjoy watching all ur videos! ;) anyways ur songs remind me of taylor swift. well im talkin to u right now on msn so ill just stop talking on here and talk to u on there. i love u so much
funnytroyguy 4 years ago
I don't even have msn. ???
rackyI 4 years ago
Hi, that's a great music. Your have a beautiful dog as well. I have three, shaolin, chiola and charica. I really liked your acute voice. It is perfect to style of music you sing.
ritacos 4 years ago
aw, this was so good.
it kind of reminds me of taylor swift's 'mary's song', lyrics-wise; from the way it's written.
you need to get discovered though.
:)
xoobabyy1 4 years ago
wow your amazing
and i can't believe you wrote that
and it's so funny
how your dog
always just sits
there!lol......i ♥ you
hannahlouise11 4 years ago
Thank you! Yeah my dog is the coolest! :)
rackyI 4 years ago
Wow. I know you hear this a lot, but wow. You easily hang with the popular artists, and easily surpass most of what most people consider "popular artists"... in my opinon because your writing is honest, blunt, colorful, and deep.. as it draws the listener into the song.
so yeah, wow
keep it up! you've been blessed with this talent beyond amazing. look forward to hearing you on the radio someday (if that's one of your goals).
jwatson06 4 years ago
haha. after reading that i realized i didn't like how i used the word blunt.
in this case, blunt = straight forward, truthful.. sometimes painfully truthful, heartfelt, deep, and it causes the listener to respond emotionally.. which is every artist's goal i think.
jwatson06 4 years ago
Thank you so much jwatson06! :)
rackyI 4 years ago
You really out did yourself today...I love "This song" but "The REal thing" is just amazing...your voice is amazing and the guitar parts you wrote for them is just as amazing!
NicholeKelley07 4 years ago
OMG THIS IS AMAZING!!
hmmilli 4 years ago
omg i love this song it is amazing!!!
hmmilli 4 years ago
That is an awesome song. :D
blogbat 4 years ago
AWESOME! u r way too good to be undiscoverded!
ComicGirl93 4 years ago
Ok...
#1. I LOVE THE SONG... why aren't you famous and signed yet?
#2. I love Arabella just sitting there listening.
cristina1555 4 years ago
i heart it:)!!
SamKENkayGAR 4 years ago
OMG! Uh, Amazing?
Allifany06 4 years ago
Hey - totally great!
rachelleewalsh 4 years ago
amazing!!! your a great singer!
amber767 4 years ago
This is really amazing.
Keep it up. :D
Cute dalmation lol
lovinsjustapasstime 4 years ago
the songs keep getting better and better !! man..your incredible rachel !!
SINGxITxBABYYY 4 years ago
This is absolutely beautiful. I love the emotion you express in all your music and I think your writing is amazing. When you're singing a song it's like reading a good book and I can see and feel everything playing out before me.
bluepenguin0987 4 years ago
i love it, and the title of the song describes you perfectly. you are the real thing rach. :)
sliferfan 4 years ago
I love your song, beautiful voice and song
modacsflower 4 years ago
This is REALLY good. It must make Chad's heart melt.
PoeticSoul87 4 years ago
You're an amazing singer/writer I really admire you :)
gabyxxcrushedxx 4 years ago 2
wow that was amazing ... you're so talented! i can totally hear that on the radio. im jealous of you ... i wish i had your talent.
Emmagizer 4 years ago 2