First Attempt at Spoken Word

[angelk002]

That was amazing! 

[ayeeJERMS]

Dante Basco?

[com1exptert]

Nice jacket Tim where'd ya get it :P

[aRjayC28]

evertime tim "just writes something" its dope. swag.

[mahdimix]

fuck the 100 people who dislike traphik

[serg10rona]

Dats a bomb ass poem

[superhot144]

u r so fine and funny and sweet

[syrusyugiyamifreak]

AWESOME!!

[NyMami90]

That was Really Good

[shatiera87]

that was good

[CharlieeDuong]

what car is that in the intro.

[TECHN9NEEXPERIENCE]

there's a wiered girl walkin by!!!!! Funny ass random shit man

[pahkyu]

@TECHN9NEEXPERIENCE hahahahaaha!

[Radkennster]

That was Really good!

[Rasengan708]

i want your jacket! what brand is that haha

[webilization]

THAT WAS TIGHT BRO

[dmj2415]

you sound somewhat like kevin hart

[mica19211]

Luv it

[mrbigv92]

Yo Tim don't you have a ps3?

[ldboss]

KILLED IT lol

[CammieGeeh]

man that was awesome dude!!

[ohheyjill]

awhj this is cute

[Lokoboy84]

dope

[kace842]

you got true talent bro keep it up and you'll get on top. your good bro.  no homo.

[Spikedskull1]

lol hes being rafael de la ghetto

[JayCeeAye408]

doode, that was great. (:

sooo cute, on the real tho.

you are so eloquent like no one woulda' expected it.

much respect, man.

[yaboichase]

this good stuff man... im good writing lyrics but i never tried spoken word...think i may give it a try after seeing this

[NooneEverReallyDiez]

I know you hate being compared to dante basco but you REALLY SOUNDED LIKE EM in the def poetry like your flow and voice yours was mad dopperrrrr wow i wanna do this your amazing tim no homo

[rob143]

he sounded more like adriel luis to me from the pice "slip of the tongue" but thats just me

[mimvaj]

awe this is too cute. :D

[KillaKham89]

love it! you already got that poet's flow going on :)

[KILLAKINLAW459]

that was great for ur first try

[somuch2Cnow]

love the vid man u rock

[BREENNTTT]

fresh prince of bel air... lmao the last name reminded me of that episode and now i see this hahaha

[mcginnie420]

did he say masterbating.?

[wiiboy555]

he put "def poetry jam" on the tags lol

[SiMpLyCoMfY]

awhhhhhhh i'll never get full..

[StArBuRsTsUcKa]

i voted for you :)

[jasmine4082510]

damn i give u props for that on it was ealy good

[PitchDarkShadow]

i voted for u!!

[drkvogel]

Nice one! Work on it, you'll be good.

[DPx111]

hahaha NICE @!!!!!!!!!

[sammyJ316]

can i get the words to your poem i luv it!

[misssoulist]

you rock my socks tim. your energy is the biz! you make people laugh&smile, that's an awesome gift.

[BaldButWigged]

i loved the end when u said you'll always get full

[bboyeion]

he said "i'll never get full."

[nybravest925]

dope rhymes

fresh ass jacket tho

[austinhunt11]

tim you have heard of ruckas song ching chang chong and if not listen to it and see if you think it is racist or funny and tell me

[sumoo0]

damn! that was good :)

[iinej]

Whoa. You were 5th place on the top 5 list, but after I voted, you went to 4th. *Feels accomplished*.

[M3XX3]

For one hour that was really good!

Just imagine if you had two hours.

[ononokootokonoko]

sick!! hahaha

[BoySoSoWonderful]

Duece, u a poet n u just let em have it...

[Contact907]

Very good!

[bathingape915]

vote fo you

[SouthLondonsREAL]

Voted my nigga, you funny

No homo

[madagascarjenkins]

Voted. So glad I didn't have to register or anything.

You should do more of that spoken word.

[DarkestWolf868]

You're going to go really far Tim! Awesome!

[SucceedingLimits]

that was cool tim, especially since u just wrote it. free car too! u did ya part for fiesta movement..

[Yamonie2008]

I liked it.

[0ladap0]

voted *_*

[NarutoUuzumaki]

WOW dat was sik

[AznSensAsians]

hey anybody know what jacket tim is wearing in this?

[SSJBrutus]

Very nice fam

[MyXboxFreak]

kool

[fweefweefilms]

TIM I LOVE YOU!!! everyone go check out fwee fwee films. its amazing!!! not really but go check it out guysss. tim... youre amazing!

[ObiWanGuacamoli]

dayam, that was good. especially when you consider that it was written only an hour before?

[Emayzin]

lol good shit.

[Chillz0227]

Tht was a hot spoken words i never thought of it tht way...this kinda gives dudes a new explination on y takin one look was ok..

[BloodNguyen88]

i voted

[MikaelaBaybee]

love... memorize and it will be boss.

[AznHops]

voted.

[LeslieMoniqueTV]

Cool that you experiencing to new things!!

[funygrl003]

"i dont like nachos.... ok i love nachos" LMFAO. i LOVEDDD it :). and i voted. and imma vote continuously everyday until it ends lol

[dancecoolest]

i voted

[fineone1987]

wat u mean thanks for the car?

[TheLiliT13]

I voted ;) I love you

[Gangstaaboy624]

haha nice!

[BrandonLTube]

that was goood

[jgmilner]

That was funny and good! :-)

[SebaStickky117]

LMFAO "Idont even like nachos.. Okay I love nachos". more spoken word poems Tim, you're really good at them!

[Nissehultan]

THIS IS GARBAGE!

[SuburbanInvasion]

dirty, good work

[Mrite09]

i like da poem

[DengKeeevvin]

@yeahitsHaleem actually, he does. he's stated in his other videos how its only for a couple of months and how he is dreading driving his old car again

[MsMichelleLisa]

does he have to give the car back?

[yeahitsHaleem]

@MsMichelleLisa haha no

[javajojambam]

that was so awesome! aww

[rsucces]

that suck is funny and sooo nice lol

[Keoisyodaddy]

FORD SUCKS!!!!!!

[XxlilcrazyxX]

would it really matter to you if it was a free car hahaha yeah ford sux but it was a free car can't complain with that

[Keoisyodaddy]

You're right in that way, but I wasn't the one that recieved the new car.

[firekreve2j]

hey rick i just did ur mum, how was it? "it was cool".. hey rick u just had gay sex how was it? "it was cool it was cool.."

[DSIMPEL777]

ever notice no matter what tim does rick is just like " its cool " lol

[HappyBunny001]

Bringin that multi-talent to the maximum!

[yada147258]

fail

[x0xmegxox]

You sound a lot like Travis from Gym Class Heroes.

Good stuff. =)

[bboyevan808]

it was cool

[paulinbin360]

why did they put Tim C. instead of Timothy C. it makes ppl scared to accidently vote the wrong person.

[qaz616qaz]

wait. did i get this right? ... no more fiesta missions :( :( ???

[MrHalomasterr117]

that was pimp haha

[longfang24]

nice

[xHeyImCamiRiverax]

sorry honey, i don't know much about spoken word . but i enjoyed your video. =]

- Cami Rivera

[number1BFMVfan]

dude that wasnt bad..made me feel great man...just voted too...voting everyday till its over

[TheBeautifulSheeple]

Tim,

You just butchered your OWN words.

[7dontyouknow7]

Not bad, it was a decent start. I am kind of looking forward to it if the guy does spoken word more often!

[donhoe01]

COOL LIKE THAT.

[capone23capone]

voted !

[JUUKKES]

this made my dayy

[djdanieljohn]

anyone know poet from oz?

[AitchSil]

Mums Da Schemer

[younghern99]

I want some country fried steak now, mmmmm, lol

[phantomphreak241]

that was good i liked that !!

[Salamau5]

lol so jealous

[johnnytastetest]

*Puts on a pair of sunglasses and grins*

[silverblackwhite]

we got a hater in the bottom

tim that was fukin funny lol

[ZeranZeran]

Someone's jealous =P.

[AslanEatsLions]

u aint a thug? xD ahahah, well ur jealous that is.

[Saviiiiiiiii]

actually he DID write it just before...if you watched his vlogs you would know, but since you're a hater you probably don't watch them...don't comment when you don't know what you're talking about :)

[Sangfroidation]

That was pretty good bro considering you'd written it within an hour of presenting. it was good shit, and still decent with the mess ups.

[istealpants]

lol dude that was really adorable =]

[Rufavenger408]

hah that shit was pretty dopee for your first time. keep it up -

[CallMeCharlie11]

I enjoyed it!

[marvin1FM]

dej jam poetry

[binary56]

hey tim i know u probly already told us but i missed it u are always saying u have to go to school what are you studying ? whats ur major just curious

[IM1337iPwn]

you rhyme some really good shit brother... like, most australian hip hop i listen to, they rhyme similar words and say similar stuff.. But you seem to rhyme words I don't usually hear, but you rhyme in sophisticated way, that creates a huge originality. Really intelligent man.. Do more spoken words, dope and funny :).

[sakeena17]

that was hot...good job

[hurl771]

i am a big fan of henry rollins spoken word - went to a open mike with one of his poetry books and i just read it out loud -some people thought it was cool other people said that i should have wrote my own stuff, but it felt great -i bet you felt great- i felt great all night after i did my open mike i didnt even feel like drinking that night because doing that made me feel great - keep doing cool stuff!

[botacular]

pretty legit

[DezzyDez14]

. . Good job, I loveddd it [!] :)) ..

[zehJazz]

lol "I'd don't even like nachos...ok I do like nachos." you funny man

[YoYoBlazeShow]

i love you, that was sooo good...KING SHIT! :)

[MissSmilyFace]

that was good. xD

[DaniilBMX]

Next time, do it completely WASTED.

! hour of preparation, then 3 hours of heavy drinking, then Spoken Word.

[DAAPS07]

VOTED

[koidaboi]

i replayed 0:14-0:16. haha

[fashizzle]

3:30

lmao

[Gatman207]

absolutely no flow, ur voice is boring, overall 0 stars because there was no ladies in the vid.

[bbq06]

i'm gonna vote for you everyday!

[magzilla91]

amazing!

[xerxes465]

Spoken word. When you can't play an instrument and you don't have a good enough flow to rap.

[Cubezmusic]

you say he cant rap?

[wbrutus22]

What? Ok, um, so I guess Novelist, Poets, Fiction and Non-fiction writers, are all people who can't play an instrument and don't have a good enough flow to rap? lol Its funny how people respond to things without ever doing any research!

[xerxes465]

WHOOOOOOAAAAA there. There is a big difference between great novelists and writers, and the type of corny b.s. you hear at poetry slams.  Even the good spoken word poets aren't that great.

[wbrutus22]

I completely agree with you..you do hear a lot of B.S at slams. I'm not a slam fan, I'm a poety fan "in all forms." My reply was your "general assumption" that people write Spoken-Word because they have no other talent. "Poetry" is an oral art form. It took centuries for it to be written down on papyrus. I found it ignorant that you didn't do your research on that.

Yes, there are HORRIBLE Spoken-word artist out there just like musicians of different genres of music.

[luethboy]

not true, spoken word is more powerfull than rap because people must listen to every word. Rappers have the beat to back them up. Spoken word is way more intimidating, so don't try to pity it.

[xerxes465]

I don't pity it. You can perform spoken word all you like, but I really don't thing it has the same impact that great lyrics over a good music has.

[wbrutus22]

Saul Williams, Taylor Mali, Rives...there are so many "performance poet" seen on New Yorks broadway, working as English teachers , and definitely in Film. I'm not asking you to appreciate or like Spoken-word poetry, I'm asking you to research the best "oral poetry" then come with a valid conclusion, otherwise, a blank opinion is just that---blank.

[FlippiFlippyDolphinz]

You're soooo talented!

[roughtymez]

if you have time delaghetto, listen to the freestyle on my page, SPOKEN WORD. released it bout week ago, hope you enjoy it, help build a movement, and spread the truth, knowledge is POWER

[x0xJazzyCx0x]

wow that's was really good lol

[crankdatalize]

aww tim u did gud thanka u very much lol

[8853benjamin]

swag

[djd34dpool]

i went to the link wer do i vote? :/

[RaenaeBaby]

awe yur girlfriend is a very lucky girl to have someone like you . :] awwe that's true love . you did amazing sweety !

[backburnerart]

good stuff.ilike- ilike!

[sonnyamped74]

when are you going to fiesta move the fuck off the internet?

[flicknausi]

timothy de la whackness

[bluenmoon]

that was tight

[M1STERBRAIN]

vote for tim!

[joannavillavicencio]

i totally thought your username was masterbate. LOL. like when i was skimming through the comments. HAHAHAHA.

[michellecax3]

can you put the words for this in the sidebar? i really liked it! :]

[r0ckyr0nnie]

i bet that was for your gf

[KiLLaK4SP3R336]

nice one tim u got my vote

[FashionableN3rd24]

love it, funny and true!!!

[dang3rz0n3]

Does Tim get to keep the car after the missions?

[firebreathingape]

No...dont think so i think he said it one of his vids

[yyyy2999]

lol no

[hydro20]

what u gunna be drivin end of this month got a 2nd car ?

[bubspenis]

TEDY

[voilaleah]

Holy fucking talented. :D

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[fatpiggy888]

Everyone vote for Tim as the best Ford Fiesta agent on their site!!!

[iSkello]

That was really good

[nate51593]

so dope! i love spoken word and i was surprised at how good it came out since you were just in your library writing it.

You should do more just for shits and gigs.