Ok then (: just let me know if you decide you want to and have some free time on your hands (: love your vids btw and the writing tutorials are really helpful :P
Tprinces thought it was fair. And so do I. She asked for a review, after all, and I pointed out all the negative points so she can improve on them. And a C is good.
thanks a lot for the review ^^ yeah, Aubrey does fall asleep a lot >.>
as for the short chapters like in Russia - like the hotel - a lot of what i write has purpose for symbolisim. the hotel for one. it symbolizes the two being out of place in a world of light.
Circus of Death!
;)P
French is awsome
RurouniZakruo 1 year ago
@RurouniZakruo That's what I thought at first, but apparently, it's a mixture of languages and actually means Circus of Evil.
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
@WriterfromNowhere oh ok...sigh Cruse my lack of understanding for laungaues!
RurouniZakruo 1 year ago
@RurouniZakruo lol! Don't worry! It's like I said, I didn't know the actual meaning when I first heard it. :P
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
Oh you silly English and your "crisps". XD
I keed I keed.
I agree with the ebook thing. Paper = BEAUTIFUL
You met Shan? JELUSSSSSSSSSSS. I need to catch up on Demonata...
And I'll throw out a good luck to Tprinces! All us writers will keep on trying... Even though editors and critics wound us so.
superskh 1 year ago
Haha alright. So far I have written 69 pages of A4 in size 12 arial... The series goes: Cheating Death, Blood Drained, Time Jump. :)
XKieronTV 1 year ago
Ok great ;) I warn you... It is kinda rubbish... OH! And in first person present tense :/
XKieronTV 1 year ago
That's ok, I'll tell u honesty if it's rubbish or good. :P
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
Great. Do I send it via email or what when I've finished?
XKieronTV 1 year ago
Just PM me when you have finished, then I'll give you an email. ;)
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
Oh right cool! I'll try to get my first draft finished soon then. My book is called "Cheating Death" from my first series of books.
You should keep reviewing unpublished books, I think it's great because the writers get some very honest feedback!
Speak soon.
XKieronTV 1 year ago
Sounds intresting! I look forward to it. :)
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
Ok then (: just let me know if you decide you want to and have some free time on your hands (: love your vids btw and the writing tutorials are really helpful :P
XKieronTV 1 year ago
Thnx very much! :)
Oh, and I've just signed off the thing which was keeping me busy, so I should be able to do it now! :D It was business coursework. Grr!
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
When I have finished my first draft if my book would you read and review it for me?
XKieronTV 1 year ago
Not at the moment, I'm afraid. I'm a little too busy. :(
WriterfromNowhere 1 year ago
a C...thts all
toxicgum57 2 years ago
Tprinces thought it was fair. And so do I. She asked for a review, after all, and I pointed out all the negative points so she can improve on them. And a C is good.
WriterfromNowhere 2 years ago
oh, and as for the page length -
when i submitted a quirey letter to a publishing company, they asked for the length double space, which turns out to be around 300 or so.
Tprinces 2 years ago
Oh, I see!
D'oh! Forgot about the whole double space thingamagig. I mean, my book is all double-spaced. LOL!
WriterfromNowhere 2 years ago
lol quite all right, quite all right ^.^
Tprinces 2 years ago
OMG U GAV ME A C?!
lol joking. just joking.
thanks a lot for the review ^^ yeah, Aubrey does fall asleep a lot >.>
as for the short chapters like in Russia - like the hotel - a lot of what i write has purpose for symbolisim. the hotel for one. it symbolizes the two being out of place in a world of light.
oh, and sorry i got your money wrong XD
Tprinces 2 years ago
LOL!
ur welcome.
and I didn't realise that!
And no worries. XP
WriterfromNowhere 2 years ago
is ok :3 just know that there is a method to my madness!
Tprinces 2 years ago
SWEET, A PERSONAL DEMONS REVIEW!
Kevinisprime 2 years ago