P.s I love you A Renesmee Cullen And Jacob Black Love story Ch.1

[YazminlovesCurlyFry]

Rate: 100000000000000000 KEEP WRITTING PORVABOR (THT MEANS PLZ IN SPANISH) BUT KEEP WRITTING IM DYING FOR CHAPTER 2!!!!

[EmilymissHanson]

an 11 I loved it!

[talorlautnerissexy24]

hey look no top comments.... i can change that..... THUMBS UP IF U LIKE HIPPOS AND PENGUINS!!!

[QUEENMegs125]

how many chapters r there??? I love it!!

[macksiegirl]

ten!!!!

[JuJuGirl333]

umm just a correction. Alice cant see the werewolves in her visions. she can see humans because she ounce was one. she can see vampires because she is one.

she can see nessie because shes half and half. But, she cant see werewolves because she never was one.

[elyssalovelybamm]

@JuJuGirl333 I understand that, it's mentioned that she can't see Nessie in other chapters of my story, but you have to remember its been FOREVER since I last read the books, and also I'm not perfect. These are fanfics, meaning I like to have fun with them and change things around. C:

[cherrygirl141]

@JuJuGirl333 she cant see nessie in her visions because she is half because in breaking dawn when bella was pregant she couldnt see if bella was going to to ok

[TaylorLautnerFan477]

i really like it,and im gonna keep reading but I just wanna piont out that Alice cant see the future of the wolfs..?

I know it doesnt matter now that your already on chapter like 16...just wanted to say anyway love it(:

[MrsLutz123XX]

Love The Pic At 0:27

Amazing

[Gloria65179]

0:17 NOT HER NOT EVER I LIKE THIS BUT NO WAY IN HELL THAT LITTLE GIRL IS PLAYING RENESMEE

[elyssalovelybamm]

@Gloria65179 Dude, calm down. I made this video a LONG time ago. They won't even have a Renesmee that old in the movie. I was just using pictures in reference of my story, Calm down.

[Gloria65179]

@elyssalovelybamm I kno!! I like the story lol i just dont like the little girl lol BUT EPIC STORY(:

[AwesomeTheCoolLol]

I LOVE THIS SONG! cuold you tell me what it is?

[elyssalovelybamm]

@AwesomeTheCoolLol Strong - Jordan Taylor

[AwesomeTheCoolLol]

i loved it wheeee!!!!! :)

[sasukesama007]

awsoooome !!

<3<3

GREAAAAAT STORY WOULD GIVE YOU THOUSEND OUT OF FIVE xD!

THE BEST !

Cheer up !!

can't wait for the next one xD

[M0nkey272]

10 ! deff, i loved it ! just remember, alice cant see jacob.(:

i cant wait for the auditions for breaking dawn 2 to come out ! im auditioning for renesmee.(:

[M0nkey272]

10 ! deff ! just remember...alice cant see jacob. but i loved it ! you know, when breaking dawn part 2 auditions start, im auditioning for renesmee.(:

[heloisadb]

R-I-D-I-C-U-L-O

[elyssalovelybamm]

@heloisadb Ridículo? En serio? Lo que es ridículo, por favor dígame, me encantaría saberlo.

[roniengabby]

10-10-10 ♥

[ArIrIz]

aww i loved it.

[4crazygurlles]

omg it was amazing and i love everybit of it keep making them plz plz plz!!!

[CLovesTwilight]

love the picture at 0:22

[MrsCoolbeans24]

i love it ur a good writer but the beginning wasent that great

[deanddanae]

OMG I LUV IT! i like how accurate the info is!!

[SkaterGirlVids3721]

TEN TEN TEN TEN! KEEP WRITING

[elyssalovelybamm]

Thanks so much :D the 2nd one is out.

(: