Extremely impressive. You were able to extract very believable performances from your actors, something I have been trying to work on as a director. Also, you were able to completely convince us of the setting being 1940's Hawaii. Great job!
@gkingfilms Thanks so much that means a lot. I think the underlining goal is to create a world and make it believable though performance and design. Stay tuned gkingfilms i've a bunch more work coming after the holidays.
It does show how great a video producer you are when you only have around 3,300 views, but almost 800 subscribers already. Truly magnificent. Can't wait to see more.
Just to let you now that we (serious youtubers) really do appreciate quality videos like this one, I'm glad I subscribed and thank you! Looking forward to see more in the future :)
This was amazing. I almost felt intimidated by both this and your filmmaking. The music fit perfectly, and it was intense for such a serene style. I would just like to know why didn't the other friend get in trouble. Wasn't she doing it, too? Other than that, this was incredible.
This was incredible. You deserve more views. I'm trying to spread this video around as much as possible because I think you deserve a following. Keep up the great work. Proudly subbed.
Amazing job. You were able to captivate and intrigue me in such a short time. You have a talent for motion pictures. The ability to captivate an audience and make them care and feel empathy for the main character in such a short period of time is no small task. Bravo. Hope you get to make a longer version of this where we you can show us more of the story. Subscribed, Liked, and Shared
Nicely done. Very very pretty, great music, good story. I'm not sure, though, what finally convinced them she was innocent. Did I miss it? It had to have been whatever was written in the note, but we didn't get to read it.
Can't wait to see a full feature from you guys. I agree with @RelentlesslyUnending I wanted more. This is way high quality compared to most of the stuff on YouTube
It looked professional, but the story itself didn't evoke enough emotion i guess.
Nurse is at home about to relax.
Taken to government headquarters, and accused of being a spy.
Messsage proves she isn't a spy ( It would have been nice to have known what the message said)
Let free. You see? Nothing there is really touching.Try letting us get to know the character, and understand her, so we can THEN feel for her.Then show more unjust action against her, and suffering. This would bring a good vid
I admire all the hard work you put into this! It had a professional feel to it, excellent communication of emotion, and just looked great. Def got a sub from me. I noticed you were open to suggestions: the only think that really jumped out of me was that the story seemed to have taken place during the day, even though the description and opening scene suggested it was evening (night is prob harder to shoot, but that was just a nit picky thing I noticed). Great decision to not reveal the note!
Great job mi amigo, i really fill that moment when the lady was washing her hands, some how, and i thing that's what the film makers always are trying to obtain from us, god bless.
@Q8Police777 YES! I just posted a a teaser trailer of my next video which i'm hoping to release first of next year, which is a short adaptation of the book ender's game
That sir, was well done! Awesome video! I only wish you had the ability and resources to develop it into a full length feature film because I was left wanting to know so much more of the story! I'm definitely subscribing and I'll for sure be on the lookout for more videos from you! Again, wonderful short film!
@RelentlesslyUnending Thank you so much for your kind words. I too wish i could make this into a longer form video as the story is so compelling. Feel free to check out the teaser trailer i just posted for my next video and keep a look out for it.
@pigz808 Thanks for sub. I'm hoping to start releasing more videos come the first of next year on a regular basis once every two weeks. All story driven, so if you have any cool short stories you'd like to see come to life please shoot them off to me.
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spacyway 3 days ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Very good stuff man. Lighting, sound, color correction, direction
CwellFellas 5 days ago
@CwellFellas Thanks man.
jacobschwarz 5 days ago
Wow, Incredible I feel like I should be paying to watch this!
PaperatHeart 6 days ago
Nice job.
PowerDimeDaddy 6 days ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Good drama. It's hard to be found nowadays.
pchackal 1 week ago
@pchackal thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.
jacobschwarz 6 days ago
Great Job! Love it!!
jasoninoa 1 month ago
what did the note say?
ChuicyProductions 2 months ago
wow this was awesome cant wait for more videos ..
i love the drama you put in this film because you make us wait to see what was really happening awesome
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Mrjabaler96 2 months ago
Extremely impressive. You were able to extract very believable performances from your actors, something I have been trying to work on as a director. Also, you were able to completely convince us of the setting being 1940's Hawaii. Great job!
gkingfilms 2 months ago
@gkingfilms Thanks so much that means a lot. I think the underlining goal is to create a world and make it believable though performance and design. Stay tuned gkingfilms i've a bunch more work coming after the holidays.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
It does show how great a video producer you are when you only have around 3,300 views, but almost 800 subscribers already. Truly magnificent. Can't wait to see more.
cpnavy2 2 months ago
@cpnavy2 thanks! :-)
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
Just to let you now that we (serious youtubers) really do appreciate quality videos like this one, I'm glad I subscribed and thank you! Looking forward to see more in the future :)
harryatkins43 2 months ago in playlist More videos from jacobschwarz
This was amazing. I almost felt intimidated by both this and your filmmaking. The music fit perfectly, and it was intense for such a serene style. I would just like to know why didn't the other friend get in trouble. Wasn't she doing it, too? Other than that, this was incredible.
OldSunSims 2 months ago
Well done!
ertzuiop123 2 months ago
This was incredible. You deserve more views. I'm trying to spread this video around as much as possible because I think you deserve a following. Keep up the great work. Proudly subbed.
Mr7h0r 2 months ago
Amazing job. You were able to captivate and intrigue me in such a short time. You have a talent for motion pictures. The ability to captivate an audience and make them care and feel empathy for the main character in such a short period of time is no small task. Bravo. Hope you get to make a longer version of this where we you can show us more of the story. Subscribed, Liked, and Shared
JohnnyX262 2 months ago
Nicely done. Very very pretty, great music, good story. I'm not sure, though, what finally convinced them she was innocent. Did I miss it? It had to have been whatever was written in the note, but we didn't get to read it.
jePetersen 2 months ago
Can't wait to see a full feature from you guys. I agree with @RelentlesslyUnending I wanted more. This is way high quality compared to most of the stuff on YouTube
xoskins 2 months ago
It's beautiful Jacob. You did a fantastic job... It was worth the wait... as impatient as I am.
sfrenza 2 months ago
Great job buddy! Of course it looks fantastic. Can't wait for what's next!
keroslowder 2 months ago
I assume the note was her telling her parents she was pregnant?
MHoskins123 2 months ago
It looked professional, but the story itself didn't evoke enough emotion i guess.
Nurse is at home about to relax.
Taken to government headquarters, and accused of being a spy.
Messsage proves she isn't a spy ( It would have been nice to have known what the message said)
Let free. You see? Nothing there is really touching.Try letting us get to know the character, and understand her, so we can THEN feel for her.Then show more unjust action against her, and suffering. This would bring a good vid
THEgoodSPAI 2 months ago
Oh so glad to know you were the DP for that MI3 clip! So well done as is this!
DynamicPhotog 2 months ago
I think the note is just killing everyone right now. If it was bad enough for them to release her then shouldnt it be better explained in the story?
ChuicyProductions 2 months ago
DAMMIT WHAT DID THE NOTE SAY??? THIS IS GOING TO HAUNT ME FOREVER
TheServingserenity 2 months ago 2
I admire all the hard work you put into this! It had a professional feel to it, excellent communication of emotion, and just looked great. Def got a sub from me. I noticed you were open to suggestions: the only think that really jumped out of me was that the story seemed to have taken place during the day, even though the description and opening scene suggested it was evening (night is prob harder to shoot, but that was just a nit picky thing I noticed). Great decision to not reveal the note!
UnionU10 2 months ago
I must say that was a nice video, but...
1. What did the note say?
2. Did they realy have duckpate that time?
3. Why its not 2h movie that would make my cry?
Biolo2 2 months ago
this is an amazing piece of work you done.. if this was made into a movie i would definitely want it ...love it
R0b3rt066 2 months ago
Great job mi amigo, i really fill that moment when the lady was washing her hands, some how, and i thing that's what the film makers always are trying to obtain from us, god bless.
elduque3311 2 months ago
Nicely done! subbed
adstorey 2 months ago
Will you have more videos to come?
Q8Police777 2 months ago
@Q8Police777 YES! I just posted a a teaser trailer of my next video which i'm hoping to release first of next year, which is a short adaptation of the book ender's game
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
amazing!
iWantMyCookiesBackkk 2 months ago
That sir, was well done! Awesome video! I only wish you had the ability and resources to develop it into a full length feature film because I was left wanting to know so much more of the story! I'm definitely subscribing and I'll for sure be on the lookout for more videos from you! Again, wonderful short film!
RelentlesslyUnending 2 months ago
@RelentlesslyUnending Thank you so much for your kind words. I too wish i could make this into a longer form video as the story is so compelling. Feel free to check out the teaser trailer i just posted for my next video and keep a look out for it.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
please upload more stuff this is really good. i would love to see this story extended or other ones similar. but i also want to know what you can do!
favoured,subscribed and thumbs up.
pigz808 2 months ago
@pigz808 Thanks for sub. I'm hoping to start releasing more videos come the first of next year on a regular basis once every two weeks. All story driven, so if you have any cool short stories you'd like to see come to life please shoot them off to me.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
so, what was in the letter?
yoshihawv 2 months ago
that was so awesome!!! I do have a couple comments though if you're open to it...
The radio voice over sounds quite current. I would have enjoyed hearing an older type accent/speech pattern.
At 1:37, there is no reason for his gun to make any noise, he didnt chamber a round into the gun or anything.
DynamicPhotog 2 months ago
@DynamicPhotog Thanks for your feedback. Keep the feedback coming, i can't become a better filmmaker with out them.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
that earns a subscription
DCTMCG 2 months ago
Amazing video! Subscribed.
Johnny5sWorld 2 months ago
@Johnny5sWorld Glad you liked it.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago
really nice done! great job! & greetings from Germany!
themenreich 2 months ago
@themenreich Thanks for the greetings! Glad you liked it.
jacobschwarz 2 months ago