American Patrol

[Saxman1976]

why didn't you put some swing to that?

[xovickyxo]

:P i was reading the notes but the rhythms aren't the same as the proper version because it was in an easy song book.

[KingJoeyJunior]

i no i got a book like that but you were stalling a bit which sounded wrong.

is your book abracadabra sax?

[Broxbourne0rocks]

i have that.

is it bad?

or simplified?

[KingJoeyJunior]

it sounds like ur trying to hard so it sounds 'unproffesional'. I'm not one to complain but i think the rythem sounds all wrong. maybe try reading the notes not just playing what you think's right. But it's still good though, so keep it up!

p.s. that's song quite hard anyway so don't sweat it!

[xovickyxo]

listening back on this it sounds pretty terrible.

and i think the bits where im "trying to hard" are parts where the notes just wouldn't come out of the saxophone, it was a awful instrument and had elastic bands keeping it working.

my new one is far better.