Think Again Award - Senior - Mobile Phone & Communication_P1

[application888]

In general your clip is really a nice one but frankly your english is not that up to standard. there're loads of grammatical mistakes. Worse still your accent, the chinglish accent. So would you be polite and stop messing around, leaving rude comments on others' video? Your hard work are paid off man. don't be naive. Insulting otheres won't help upgrading yourself go. and just one last thing , i think you mix up the two words- consult and insult.

[HKMoo]

Well steve's comment in "The Health Connection" brought me here.

Overall it's a nice video, yet it can be improved by:

Fine-tune the balance between narrator's voice and background music;

Revision in the script for errors;

Better pronunciation;

More insights from your group;

Cut scenes so that it fits into the 10min limit more.

And also, it would be nice for you not to post a rude comment in others' video, even if that's what you think =]

My video's in my profile. Feel free to watch it.