If I had all the money in the world, I would get a hold of Sarah Jessica Parker (assuming it was really her voice in the movie) and John Debney and James Horner and have them compose a full extended version of this song properly with full lyrics. This song was so hauntingly beautiful in the movie and it deserves to be a full completed song instead of just a short small portion that was composed for this short scene. Lets start an internet campaign to put that together.. whos with me..???
I've read the poem, but I've never seen the words "here in my garden of magic." I remember it always being "here in my garden of shadows" both times it was used in the poem. Hocus Pocus simply changed "Shadows" to "Magic" to fit the theme of witches and spells.
@babbalouie23 The song that was used in Hocus Pocus changed the word "shadows" to "magic" to fit with the themes of sorcery in the film. The original poem upon which the song was based on, however, used these lines:
oh and by the way. i think you did really good. it sounds a little scary with the echo wich is good (since its surposed to be a scary song) if you have a backup of that vid maybe you should try and reupload it.
you used movie maker when you recorded right?
i recognized the *dot* sound in the end of the song.
id recoment you use another recording program to avoid that sound.
good job but it still needs a little work on the edge! ^^ i would give it 3 out of 5 points.
I like the effect, it reminds me a little of how it sounds when you play a record back wards and hear different words, only ofcoarse easier to understand. It has the same sort of creepy, labored feel to it though.
obviously you havent looked up on your sources on poets or authors. that makes me wonder why the hell youre posting you comment on here...but sure...ill send you the LINK(S)
I promise I have. Im an English major. I dont mean to be rude but no one has given me hard evidence that he did in fact write it. still waiting for the links ; )
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you sing good but theres that occasional background noise that seems to be there and you seem to have an accent of some kind that makes it sound a little bit off but the accent isn't the problem
this is creepy yet mystical at the same time i love it
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If I had all the money in the world, I would get a hold of Sarah Jessica Parker (assuming it was really her voice in the movie) and John Debney and James Horner and have them compose a full extended version of this song properly with full lyrics. This song was so hauntingly beautiful in the movie and it deserves to be a full completed song instead of just a short small portion that was composed for this short scene. Lets start an internet campaign to put that together.. whos with me..???
lander77477 1 year ago
Your voice is really GOOD and I like the echo. Could you tell me where you got the pictures?
oscurocaerangel 1 year ago
this is really good
wolfcubvicky 1 year ago
I honestly thoght it was the actor. You're REALLY good!
ilovebeastboy28 1 year ago
I've read the poem, but I've never seen the words "here in my garden of magic." I remember it always being "here in my garden of shadows" both times it was used in the poem. Hocus Pocus simply changed "Shadows" to "Magic" to fit the theme of witches and spells.
UndecidedRPGplayer 1 year ago
@UndecidedRPGplayer I know, put i think it sounds great with magic, so i decided to go with it =)
LariLaEvil 1 year ago
@UndecidedRPGplayer No no no "shadows" Was never menchend in this song! Atleast of what i heard!
babbalouie23 1 year ago
@babbalouie23 The song that was used in Hocus Pocus changed the word "shadows" to "magic" to fit with the themes of sorcery in the film. The original poem upon which the song was based on, however, used these lines:
Here in my garden
Of Shadows
UndecidedRPGplayer 1 year ago
@UndecidedRPGplayer Ooohhh! I didnt know that! Thanxx for telling me! Now i know! Thank You (:
babbalouie23 1 year ago
very nice and nice voice
yukiosaro 1 year ago
Good job guys, you did great. :) I can't wait to hear your next song.
TheDorkVariety 1 year ago
its pretty but the back singr is off! BUT GREAT JOB!
lisaloverful 1 year ago
Hmmm....not to bad but you guys are a little nervus sounding....
jackolantyrn356 1 year ago
you sound really tight loosen up a little bit you will sound a lot better but it still sounds good
mtdewguy123 2 years ago 4
you have a nice voice, and the back up vocals adds a creepiness to the clean singing, i love it!!
but you seem breathless...
laughquietlytomyself 2 years ago
i love your voice can i have it :D????
micoandrico 2 years ago 2
XD XD
bluetube1o1 2 years ago
Good job
coolanimegirls 2 years ago
I love the mystical effect it has even if it was an accident :) really dove depp in me with that accidental effect :)
twigdtd 2 years ago
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twigdtd 2 years ago
The back up singer is off. the main singer is doing a good job.
umbrella05 2 years ago
The audio is weird at some points (whether that was on purpose or not). You sound kind of "choppy." But you seem to have a good voice :)
WritersCoven 2 years ago
awful
livinonaplayer 2 years ago
i like it !!
purpledeadfairy 2 years ago 5
I dont like this but its only my opinion
bogini59 2 years ago 2
oh and by the way. i think you did really good. it sounds a little scary with the echo wich is good (since its surposed to be a scary song) if you have a backup of that vid maybe you should try and reupload it.
you used movie maker when you recorded right?
i recognized the *dot* sound in the end of the song.
id recoment you use another recording program to avoid that sound.
good job but it still needs a little work on the edge! ^^ i would give it 3 out of 5 points.
AdrianFireDemon 2 years ago 4
pitiful
gofamilyguy01 2 years ago
The echo is really creepy D:
kisskissbeckyd 2 years ago 5
hehe i like it XD
egenin 2 years ago
The echo adds a nice effect.
warjikin 2 years ago 2
Your singing stinks please stop.
jazqu 2 years ago
very creative.. thats all you can say?
did you even read the little comment she wrote saying "i dont know why but when i uploaded the song something happened to the sound" ?
be a little more creative when you give a comment kay?
AdrianFireDemon 2 years ago 4
Oh shut your freakin' face.
Least she had the guts to do it.
And, she has a good voice.
Now get a life, and stop being so mean.
I think its creative, the whole echo thing. Spiffy.
kaylaCORE 2 years ago 5
LMFAO that echo is so funny. i lmfao imaginig the ppl recording this. u really shouldnt had some bak up music. ur alright though.
YerDatsMe953 2 years ago
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you cant sing stop right now whatever the idiot people here tell you you are awful just stop singing
enterprise729 2 years ago
shut the fuck up you even cant sing this is a nice voice se could make it
ademajp 2 years ago
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I agree why is it always the people that cant sing try to sing this song
mrcliff34 2 years ago
i gave it a 100/100 ~w~
xxxangleixxx 2 years ago
ur really good. 2 thumbs up :) ;)
MissVampiresKiss 2 years ago
u have a pretty good voice keep on singing :P it sounds creepy in a good way but u should of had like really soft music
Aliniachan 2 years ago 3
your voice is beautiful, kinda of creep but perfect for this song
haleyellis12 2 years ago 2
your really good i wish i could sing but i sound like a dying donkey haha
free2speak94 2 years ago
the echo makes it sound creepy sorta it was cool :)
intergirl09 2 years ago
i agree its really creepy but good at the same time
Mixmancory 2 years ago
i like your voice but to be honest, i hate the echoing. no offence
willsgal12 2 years ago 2
Even though you didnt mean to do it, the echo is amazing. I loved it
THEbrittnayXP 2 years ago 7
Oh, you missunderstodd, i intended the echo, its joust that the sound have changed after sending it back and forth =)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
its pretty good:P<33
SaraggonaDeath 2 years ago 3
I like the effect, it reminds me a little of how it sounds when you play a record back wards and hear different words, only ofcoarse easier to understand. It has the same sort of creepy, labored feel to it though.
ajkl27 2 years ago 2
good voice but the echo wasnt all the great but good try
lalaerika03 2 years ago 3
on the way your on your way to make a good song of your own style
zannadootothetenth 2 years ago
I think the attempt was good but you should practice a littlemore. but A for effort
yeahxrightx 2 years ago
1. Not by Poe.
2. Don't like the the echo. At all.
3. You have a good voice. Keep working.
Squiggles1109 2 years ago 3
it was written by him. read up on your sources, dumbass
trisarahtops909 2 years ago
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Squiggles1109 2 years ago
Actually, no one can find it in any of his works. Also, it doesn't fit his style or use of metaphors.
No one truly knows who the author is.
Squiggles1109 2 years ago
There is no credible source that supports the idea that he wrote it. If you find one, by all means send me the lijnk dipshit
Outfld22 2 years ago
obviously you havent looked up on your sources on poets or authors. that makes me wonder why the hell youre posting you comment on here...but sure...ill send you the LINK(S)
trisarahtops909 2 years ago
I promise I have. Im an English major. I dont mean to be rude but no one has given me hard evidence that he did in fact write it. still waiting for the links ; )
Outfld22 2 years ago
I have no idea who wrote it, I like the Echo, sounds more haunting, nice voice I like it.
Eriksgirl66 2 years ago 2
edger allen poe wrote it
willsgal12 2 years ago
YOU TWO FUCKING SUCK
JennaaDude 2 years ago
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natalieegiggles 2 years ago
Fuck you. Get your own fucking opinions. natalieegiggles? slut
JennaaDude 2 years ago
This was NOT writen by POE!!!!
taallman 2 years ago
its so beautiful, as if the mother goddess is singing. how beautiful
AstroMen2911 2 years ago
I think the echos are cool.. makes it more.. idk... eerie
EreDaimon 2 years ago
no offense but it kinda sounds like you have a sis helping you and shes way off beat, that or shes trying to hard. still good though
demonheart13 2 years ago
good voice but dont put the echo
EbruGundesClub 2 years ago 3
lol how did you make it echo?
Babyphattrick101 2 years ago 3
I recorded it and then i sang a second version while listening to the first for efekts =)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
kool!!!
soulsisters3285 2 years ago
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soulsisters3285 2 years ago
all correct except 11. i took your word for it
LadyLuria 2 years ago
you should stop repeatin the stuff you say
bam61599 2 years ago 3
this is an edgar allan poe poem....
MarissaJanaye09 2 years ago
that was nice here:
Come Little Children, I'll Take Thee Away, Into A Land Of Enchantment. Come Little Children, The Time's Come To Play Here In My Garden Of Magic.
Follow Sweet Children, I'll Show Thee The Way
Through All The Pain And The Sorrows. Weep Not Poor Children For Life Is This Way,
Murdering Beauty And Passions.
Hush Now Dear Children, It Must Be This Way
To Weary Of Life And Deceptions. Rest Now My Children For Soon We'll Away into The Calm And The Quiet.
princessdede08 2 years ago 5
I really love your voice and you did amazing on this song!
wolfprincess4ever 2 years ago 8
Ty=)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
Your welcome ^-^
wolfprincess4ever 2 years ago 3
can you tell me where did you found the poem? thanks
mortibarne 2 years ago 4
the poem is by the insane man Edgar Allen Poe
Mitokoko 2 years ago 2
Poe is the BEST! =)
I didn't know this was a POEm until after I first heard it, but it definitely explains why I liked the song so much.
switchfootrelientk 2 years ago 5
Yeah, poe is awsome=) I do often read his shortstorys and poems=)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
Well, as Mitoko said it is maid by Poe =) But the first time i heard it was in the movie Hokus Pokus=)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
LOL, OMG.
StefanoFan27 2 years ago 4
Stefano, may i joust ask whye you keap saying lol and omg?
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
you sing good but theres that occasional background noise that seems to be there and you seem to have an accent of some kind that makes it sound a little bit off but the accent isn't the problem
realwarpet 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment=) .Well, i am aware of both those things. The background nosies are my family, and the accent is swedish. =)
LariLaEvil 2 years ago
LOL, OMG, FUNNY.
StefanoFan27 3 years ago
this is kool i like what you did to it makes it creepy and great movie
RagDollSam 3 years ago
very pretty voice :) i love this song in the movie :)
TheFlintSisters 3 years ago
Thanks for the comments guys=D
LariLaEvil 3 years ago
Nice singing Eira :)
mads1993 3 years ago
Nice Vid Ony!!!!!
Atty =D
alexj245 3 years ago