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  • this is creepy yet mystical at the same time i love it

  • Your voice is really GOOD and I like the echo. Could you tell me where you got the pictures?

  • this is really good

  • I honestly thoght it was the actor. You're REALLY good!

  • I've read the poem, but I've never seen the words "here in my garden of magic." I remember it always being "here in my garden of shadows" both times it was used in the poem. Hocus Pocus simply changed "Shadows" to "Magic" to fit the theme of witches and spells.

  • @UndecidedRPGplayer I know, put i think it sounds great with magic, so i decided to go with it =)

  • @UndecidedRPGplayer No no no "shadows" Was never menchend in this song! Atleast of what i heard!

  • @babbalouie23 The song that was used in Hocus Pocus changed the word "shadows" to "magic" to fit with the themes of sorcery in the film. The original poem upon which the song was based on, however, used these lines:

    Here in my garden

    Of Shadows

  • @UndecidedRPGplayer Ooohhh! I didnt know that! Thanxx for telling me! Now i know! Thank You (:

  • very nice and nice voice

  • Good job guys, you did great. :) I can't wait to hear your next song.

  • its pretty but the back singr is off! BUT GREAT JOB!

  • Hmmm....not to bad but you guys are a little nervus sounding....

  • you sound really tight loosen up a little bit you will sound a lot better but it still sounds good

  • you have a nice voice, and the back up vocals adds a creepiness to the clean singing, i love it!!

    but you seem breathless...

  • i love your voice can i have it :D????

  • XD XD

  • Good job

  • I love the mystical effect it has even if it was an accident :) really dove depp in me with that accidental effect :)

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  • The back up singer is off. the main singer is doing a good job.

  • The audio is weird at some points (whether that was on purpose or not). You sound kind of "choppy." But you seem to have a good voice :)

  • awful

  • i like it !!

  • I dont like this but its only my opinion

  • oh and by the way. i think you did really good. it sounds a little scary with the echo wich is good (since its surposed to be a scary song) if you have a backup of that vid maybe you should try and reupload it.

    you used movie maker when you recorded right?

    i recognized the *dot* sound in the end of the song.

    id recoment you use another recording program to avoid that sound.

    good job but it still needs a little work on the edge! ^^ i would give it 3 out of 5 points.

  • pitiful

  • The echo is really creepy D:

  • hehe i like it XD

  • The echo adds a nice effect.

  • Your singing stinks please stop.

  • very creative.. thats all you can say?

    did you even read the little comment she wrote saying "i dont know why but when i uploaded the song something happened to the sound" ?

    be a little more creative when you give a comment kay?

  • Oh shut your freakin' face.

    Least she had the guts to do it.

    And, she has a good voice.

    Now get a life, and stop being so mean.

    I think its creative, the whole echo thing. Spiffy.

  • LMFAO that echo is so funny. i lmfao imaginig the ppl recording this. u really shouldnt had some bak up music. ur alright though.

  • shut the fuck up you even cant sing this is a nice voice se could make it

  • i gave it a 100/100 ~w~

  • ur really good. 2 thumbs up :) ;)

  • u have a pretty good voice keep on singing :P it sounds creepy in a good way but u should of had like really soft music

  • your voice is beautiful, kinda of creep but perfect for this song

  • your really good i wish i could sing but i sound like a dying donkey haha

  • the echo makes it sound creepy sorta it was cool :)

  • i agree its really creepy but good at the same time

  • i like your voice but to be honest, i hate the echoing. no offence

  • Even though you didnt mean to do it, the echo is amazing. I loved it

  • Oh, you missunderstodd, i intended the echo, its joust that the sound have changed after sending it back and forth =)

  • its pretty good:P<33

  • I like the effect, it reminds me a little of how it sounds when you play a record back wards and hear different words, only ofcoarse easier to understand. It has the same sort of creepy, labored feel to it though.

  • good voice but the echo wasnt all the great but good try

  • on the way your on your way to make a good song of your own style

  • I think the attempt was good but you should practice a littlemore. but A for effort

  • 1. Not by Poe.

    2. Don't like the the echo. At all.

    3. You have a good voice. Keep working.

  • it was written by him. read up on your sources, dumbass

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  • Actually, no one can find it in any of his works. Also, it doesn't fit his style or use of metaphors.

    No one truly knows who the author is.

  • There is no credible source that supports the idea that he wrote it. If you find one, by all means send me the lijnk dipshit

  • obviously you havent looked up on your sources on poets or authors. that makes me wonder why the hell youre posting you comment on here...but sure...ill send you the LINK(S)

  • I promise I have. Im an English major. I dont mean to be rude but no one has given me hard evidence that he did in fact write it. still waiting for the links ; )

  • I have no idea who wrote it, I like the Echo, sounds more haunting, nice voice I like it.

  • edger allen poe wrote it

  • YOU TWO FUCKING SUCK

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  • Fuck you. Get your own fucking opinions. natalieegiggles? slut

  • This was NOT writen by POE!!!!

  • its so beautiful, as if the mother goddess is singing. how beautiful

  • I think the echos are cool.. makes it more.. idk... eerie

  • no offense but it kinda sounds like you have a sis helping you and shes way off beat, that or shes trying to hard. still good though

  • good voice but dont put the echo

  • lol how did you make it echo?

  • I recorded it and then i sang a second version while listening to the first for efekts =)

  • kool!!!

  • all correct except 11. i took your word for it

  • you should stop repeatin the stuff you say

  • this is an edgar allan poe poem....

  • that was nice here:

    Come Little Children, I'll Take Thee Away, Into A Land Of Enchantment. Come Little Children, The Time's Come To Play Here In My Garden Of Magic.

    Follow Sweet Children, I'll Show Thee The Way

    Through All The Pain And The Sorrows. Weep Not Poor Children For Life Is This Way,

    Murdering Beauty And Passions.

    Hush Now Dear Children, It Must Be This Way

    To Weary Of Life And Deceptions. Rest Now My Children For Soon We'll Away into The Calm And The Quiet.

  • I really love your voice and you did amazing on this song!

  • Ty=)

  • Your welcome ^-^

  • can you tell me where did you found the poem? thanks

  • the poem is by the insane man Edgar Allen Poe

  • Poe is the BEST! =)

    I didn't know this was a POEm until after I first heard it, but it definitely explains why I liked the song so much.

  • Yeah, poe is awsome=) I do often read his shortstorys and poems=)

  • Well, as Mitoko said it is maid by Poe =) But the first time i heard it was in the movie Hokus Pokus=)

  • LOL, OMG.

  • Stefano, may i joust ask whye you keap saying lol and omg?

  • you sing good but theres that occasional background noise that seems to be there and you seem to have an accent of some kind that makes it sound a little bit off but the accent isn't the problem

  • Thanks for the comment=) .Well, i am aware of both those things. The background nosies are my family, and the accent is swedish. =)

  • LOL, OMG, FUNNY.

  • this is kool i like what you did to it makes it creepy and great movie

  • very pretty voice :) i love this song in the movie :)

  • Thanks for the comments guys=D

  • Nice singing Eira :)

  • Nice Vid Ony!!!!!

    Atty =D

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