Missing Child (An Irish Tragedy)

[TheEddie1951]

one is the lonliness number

[theirishbloke]

jaysus ....bit serious ,,better to write a poem about having the craic ,,girl looks like she cud do with a pint .

[GabiDubrocDotCom]

i hate this

[ailish086]

Whats the story here? What happened to a child in Ireland..?

[rhyfelur]

Good effort

[MrCandyman316]

ur beautiful. keep up the good work. holla at me.

[shoa31]

Are you Muslim? lol

[rpVerlaine]

only occasionally

[shoa31]

That's nice. I like your video.

[twohawksfucking]

@rpVerlaine I love this response, rp!

[aishasgoat]

I liked this Video very much.

Thank you for posting this.

5 Stars***** ( Rated and FAV )

[DamazinJason]

i hate poems ARGGG

[rpVerlaine]

me too

[krjcook]

but didn't upload the video.

[mexseiko]

Los zapatitos me aprietan,

Las medias me dan calor,

Y cuando miro al cielo,

Veo un rayito de sol!

[rpVerlaine]

estoy seguro

que la luz siempre esta

in the sombra de tella

gracias

rp

[nt0xik8ed]

i miss tella, beautiful lady.

[rpVerlaine]

she will be back very soon

the best

rp

[burnbrother3]

Cry me a river. I'm so sick of women and their body doubles feeling sorry for themselves I could puke. Decide what you want. If you want equality then shut up. If not, then act as such. Believe me when I say that any man with more than a minimal exposure to how the woman's mind works is not buying your program although I'm sure many of your sisters will. Sell it somewhere else.

[rpVerlaine]

if i weren't a man i'd be offended. lol listen a little closer next time

the best

rp

[DUKEXIV]

The deserts and the forest are full of scorpion types

and every city has so many- hookers queers and hypes

it's all a filthy disgusting shark infested cesspool,that we find so new

when closely viewed, in retrospect offers nothing for me to do

I'd rather find my pleasure, in more erotic ports

away from the killers, and all the scorpion

sorts

where spiders work to spin a web

to comfort my tired and sleepy head

[DARKDRAGONOVERLORD]

kool best poem ever 5/5 stars

[rplayin]

Nice verse done in  Iambic Pentameter!

Great job!

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much

[YurAllStupid]

Women are unbelievable. Trying to be sexy no matter what the topic. No shame.

[rpVerlaine]

ou can't separate the sexiness from the protagonist of the poem who used it to get what she thought she wanted...but found different.

the best

rp

[FriderikD]

The Tomb yawns for you.

[rpVerlaine]

the crypt keeper is a subscriber!

[kuei1248]

tingesterin

[CDExtra]

I really liked it, but I think it would be o so slightly better if the words were at the bottom of the screen with the spoken.

[VentrueAccolyte]

a most excellent and conscise response to the sociological effects of anarchism.

[aldgunencarrothers]

why all the sexy shots?

[rpVerlaine]

those were the best shots i had at the time and i think it sorta goes with the idea of protagonist being young, careless and reckless.

the best

rp

[UberEvilRaptorTroll]

jewish ninja furries from mars rule!

[rpVerlaine]

not always and not during the sabbath...ask sandy koufax

the best

rp

[hyrohero1]

yes raptortroll... yes, they certainly do.... :)

[Greenstonetiki]

Great movie. 2.5 because your a hot girl and another 2.5 you give a religious message.

[rpVerlaine]

glad you liked it

the best

rp

[Ezkimo998]

strong words

[rpVerlaine]

I try and the ladies make it easier

the best

rp

[Greenstonetiki]

Fair enough.

[rpVerlaine]

thanks-we try

my videos hitchhkiker and the scorpions sister might be worth a view

the best

rp

[lexrex3]

Moving poem. I have never heard one exactly like this before. I'll have to watch it several times to let it sink in. Good one!

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much or the kind words

hope you have time to check at least two others- hitchhiker & beyound hallucinations.

the best

rp

[ilalfisto]

RP is back on the edge.

The word "murdered" was a little... unambiguous, but perhaps that was the point.

Made me think.

Made me feel.

As you always do.

[rpVerlaine]

thanks for the kind words

everyone worked hard on this one

the best

rp

[twohawksfucking]

Powerful... "we know what happened to your missing child". Tough, tough stuff. 5*****

Roy

[Greenstonetiki]

Are you that girl's boyfriend?

[rpVerlaine]

in a way we all are

the best

rp

[watulookinatcrew]

awsome words!! 5 *****!!

[Falcon1499]

Your work is always a treat rp! Superb!

[rpVerlaine]

your words are always too kind

the best

rp

[encinitasmel]

Powerful, effective, provoking, emotional..

Super work rp.

mel

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much for the kind words, after five weeks on this project, they were much needed.

the best

rp

[MadBadVoodo]

Five Stars!!!

[rpVerlaine]

those are five stars much appreciated

the best

rp

[hallcarol1]

damned good. 5 *****

[rpVerlaine]

bless you

the best

rp

[Greenstonetiki]

God bless you. I would tell my girlfriend NOT TO GET PREGNANT!

[rpVerlaine]

wise if that is what she wants

the best

rp

[Greenstonetiki]

Yeah. I guess.