Untitled Longing... Chapter 228

[TwinDusks]

what song is this???

[yankeegurl176]

nicholas..stay away from Auden..i have a feeling you'll cheat on Summer with Auden...BACK AWAY!!!

[xoxogg77]

HOLY F I LOVE WHEN U THROUGH UNEXPECTED AND YET EXTREMELY AWESOME TWISTS AT US!!!! who is she? i need to know!! are her and summer sisters? friends? cousins? does this somehow tie into summer's bad relationship with her mom which idk if u've explained yet?! gah! my hands r like shaking right now!!!!! god i had waaaay 2 much cake.... xD

[brothersjonasluver2]

Oh wow, amazing , Aw nick dont cry its gonna be ok

[Summiewhoo123]

sorry it took me so long to post on ur stories. ive been really bust with school and everthing but great chapter. i wonder if she knows something bout summer dat she's not telling nick.

[ewizzle06]

woot woot!

[KatieMcD93]

Wait a minute Auden like Autumn? Like Summer then Autumn? Never mind I have no idea what I'm talking about...

[watchedallofitfade]

hahahahaha oooh the irony

[Shay081793]

Psh. Cheat on Summer? Where would you get such a ridiculous idea? >:)

[kevinjonaslover123]

i hate it when nick is sad!!

[Shay081793]

Why don't you like Nick comparing Auden to Summer? I've been wondering ;)

[rinthyilove]

wtf... is she like her sister or cousin or something... like really who is she???? i'm really concerned :D great chapter

[xxlillianxx19]

auden seems really suspiciouss loved it anywayss

[emmedog89]

dude post now!!!

[cecesingergrrl]

I think she's Preston's sister or at least an old friend from Summer's past, who's also cleaned up her act and they remained friends. I loved the chapter and Nick is right, her name is really pretty. :) Loved the chapter, please post more when you can :D

[danceforlife87]

i think auden must summer sister and what she meant by you dont know me is that she was upset that summer didnt tell him about her

[musicismylife500]

How in the world does she know about Summer? Is she a friend of Summers? Is she like some mysterious long lost sister? So many questions!!!

[JonasLuvr5376]

what does this chick have to do with summer?

[23jellyfingers]

wow...who is she?

please post soon so we can find out!

xxx

[luckiducki321]

who is this?!?!?!?!

i think i kno who bt.....

[nvbrox16]

I'm not really sure if I like this Auden person....but anyways. post soon pleeease :]

[njerryjonas14]

oh dang!! please post soon!!

[hottiechik598]

i think she's like her sister too or sumet

[kellyx2211]

oooo suspicious!

GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

[erickaandemily]

post more please bring summer back

[snowfoxangel1996]

love it! thx for posting! post more when ya can

[charmedangel95]

"Were no—"

"Don't lie to me, Nick." <--- Those would be my words exactly.

Auden needs to needs to finish this story!

[alohaxahola]

oh my, this chapter was just soo....i dont know how to describe it really, but it was a really good chapter! i was really getting into it then you stopped it =P lol

loved it x

[MusicsINmySTRONGsoul]

i bet its her sister!!!!!

[SophieLovesNick]

ooohh i really wanna no who that girl is.. lol

[CarysLOVESjonas]

still thinking Auden's summers sister or something..

[JonasBrothersLove320]

Who the hell is Auden?!

[Briiarnaa]

holy jonas almighty!

whats going to happen next?

i think it would be cool if auden

was related to summer : D

post asap.

(:

[EliANDLilmel]

who IS SHE???? he cousin or something? long lost sister? they're not twins, nick would have died... you're driving me crazy right now!!

[sarahsmoothie123]

pleez find Summer, and Joy.. soon!

[OMFGitscatherine13]

hmm i wonder her Auden is...? maybe one of summer's friends or sisters. anywayy great chapter:D

[Dodgersfan505]

Auden almost sounds like autumn. Do all girls that look like summer have names that have to do with the seasons? Lol. It's just funny. You should name a character Whintera, like winter, or maybe Springhelia, for spring. I just made those names up. But very good writing. Love the story.

[coeyjbfan93]

okay, i really need to know about Auden, like how she knows about the kidnapping...please don't keep it from us too long!!

[ssz411]

post! more! bring summer back.

[cubscutie928]

HMMMMMMM... who is this "Auden"????

[hshorsegirl1]

omg is it her mom!??? haha or sister???? omg omg omg omg awesome btw! lol love it! u are amazing

[sambethpilon]

oh man!!!!

post man!!!

[ngynjonaslover]

i'm sooooo confused.....maybe its her sister??? cause why else would she have the same face features and summer would tell her...either way, please post soon!!!

[kookoobb]

This chapter was amazing. I've missed this story so much these past couple of days.  I'm so anxious to see what is going to happen and I hope you get more inspiration because I can't wait to read more. :)

[BrendaCastaneda97]

oh my gosh soooooo good I wonder what she knows and i dont remember her from a previous episode was she in one?post more you are an amazing writer keep it up!!

[lazylaura94]

lol auden is like jacob lol

[Whiteflowereddress]

I'm soooo confused right now....

[xXMsLittleSunshineXx]

im stumped.

this is the first time ever that i have no idea what is happening!!

i want to know!!!!!

post as soon as you can!!

loved it, like always!

xoxoAri

[ramansidhu007]

OMG i was so into this ahahah

i thinks its her sister =)

[lydiaxo33]

it summer sister

[bobbillybert]

summers twin?????????????

[madison50364]

This chapter was so wonderfully lightening in a way. I'm glad this inspiration suddenly hit you. This chapter was amazing.

That is a pretty name actually. And wow, I can't believe she knows Summer and Nick. I wonder what she knows. If she has good information, this could really help them find Summer and Joy and bring them back to safety.

Loved it. Wonderful. I'm glad Nick has found this mystery girl. I really am.

[kookoobb]

That was such a nice comment. I would be so happy to read this feedback if I had written this. How nice of you :)

[madison50364]

Well, thanks. :)

[zefronbleu101]

SO GOOD!

[xxDasweetiexx]

:O

maybe it's like a family member or something? Lol

post more!

[iHope121]

OH EM FREAKIN' JONAS! POST!!!! =)..... Please?

[melissaxxnicole]

i bet it's like her sister or something! cause when she said "you don't know me" i get it! it was like more of a question/statement kinda. like he should know her cause she and summer are related :0 or bffs. i'm going with related (: thank you for posting(: i'm super sick and this just made me feel so much better! post soon :D

[ajT15JoBros]

AMAZING!!!!!!

[iloveconnor14]

wow totally didn't expect that. amazing as always though!