Really a gorgeous original song, with a simple but interesting chord progression, nice melody and poetic lyrics. You also sing and play guitar very well. Your poetry appears in these verses, when you say (e.g):
I got lost in your eyes
(...)
You're my compass when i'm lost,
That sense of guidance I know and trust.
*****X10^6,
Ritacos
P.S.: Thanks sistermoonshine13 for sharing with me this talented job.
oh i so enjoy your performances OZ! You got that unmistakable sound that makes me want to hear more. great write and song. love the way you and your guitar get along. best friends. heheh. me n mine too. You just sound wonderful hun. Keep On!! much respect. Happy Christmas to you and the family OZZY!
this is my favourite thing in the whole entire world ever. i listened to the little clip of it stefan put on his facebook and have been nagging him to find me the full version ever since :')
ozzy sorry to hear you have been ill...never worry about replying...lovely message though thank you ...;0) lovely post....see your really enjoying it here...;))
I saw you earlier in the week, and had to dash, so am glad friend Mikee(monello sir) reminded me back to your posts,today! .....you indeed are very talented,.writing super original material!: -) I applaud!...Excellent, and subbed!5*****.Sincerely, Laurie
Awesome, Oz. Great tempo that is a real toe-tapper. The hammer fills of the interludes add a nice dimension and when the cease as the vocals come in it propels the song.
Really like the Fsus prior to the chorus and I love the double F hammer just after the chorus.
This song has hit written all over it. Bass, percussion and some guitar licks in the second half of each verse and this is a top 40 song, easy.
Open end is nice, but the verse makes it. Would have prefered you ended there,
Wow. You are a great writer. A great natural talent. Everyone on Youtube has sent me this but I would have come to check you out anyway. I am a fan. Always do your own thing. I get a feeling there is a whole lot more in the tank. Good for us.
sick!
SVSFP 6 months ago
This is beautiful
thanks for making my day better
nouvelledaze 1 year ago
Ozzy!!!! It's Amy from college, you might not remember me but just though id say how freaking awesome you are!!!! keep up the good work!!!! x
amyandjadey 1 year ago
you are just amazing, love all your videos! this is one of my favourite songs :D love it
keenrach 1 year ago
your amazing :)
AlexatticAcoustic 2 years ago
cool!
RazorShaw 2 years ago
cheers :)
and actually its neither a takamini nore a tanglewood (weill it is tanglewood) its my baby :) lol i call her ellenor :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
great job man 5***** =) \/m rock it man.
chazdaspazman 2 years ago
cheers man :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Very well done~~~~~
slmwv34 2 years ago
You are a very good guitar player and singings as well A milllion stars for ya'
Rolf:)
RudolphSteweart 2 years ago
cheers :)
thanks so much for the stars:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
cool
YrendenQ 2 years ago
great song dude, keep rockin!!
check out 'fall at your feet' by neil finn - worth a search.. its one of my fav covers we do as a band. lovely song..thats a world wide hit.
Bryce
brycewastney 2 years ago
Thanks for share sistermoonshine13
Great Song !
Brilliant !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
Good song, I like the way you sing and play the guitar. Five stars.
alberzeta 2 years ago
Really good original song well done mate...5 *****
SPACEFACE70 2 years ago
Nice job...
MzIsis08 2 years ago
really excellent bro..great tight guitar playing...i envy your ability, that one hammeron...shows great skill
stealurface1976 2 years ago
thank you so much:)
im glad you enjoy my works lol:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Really a gorgeous original song, with a simple but interesting chord progression, nice melody and poetic lyrics. You also sing and play guitar very well. Your poetry appears in these verses, when you say (e.g):
I got lost in your eyes
(...)
You're my compass when i'm lost,
That sense of guidance I know and trust.
*****X10^6,
Ritacos
P.S.: Thanks sistermoonshine13 for sharing with me this talented job.
ritacos 2 years ago
I knew by listening to the intro that you have a feeling, and i must say a good feeling!
Peace
Jak
RUBYMAIPRODUCTIONSJM 2 years ago
Good job!Nice!
musicmaestropleasify 2 years ago
Great job!
williamdouglasb 2 years ago
very good!
franpanama 2 years ago
WOW 5 * unbelivable
Kutahyali95 2 years ago
AWESOME!!!!!!
pearljamgirl08 2 years ago
cheers :)
good to know i have the support of a fellow pearljam fan :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Great job man! Sounds great!
craigridgeway 2 years ago
excellent 5*****
az1421 2 years ago
he sings well love his voice.... and the song :) yep, 5 stars
LauraRizzotto 2 years ago
Love the riff...not a bad song either! 5 stars!
MrSoftshoe 2 years ago
lol thanks :)
cheers for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
i love it
kiwua1963 2 years ago
Excellent ....:)
drumsjillu 2 years ago
Love that groove you got going on the guitar. Excellent song! 5* from me.
MariahVerHoef 2 years ago
BRAVO !!!
5*
alrofril 2 years ago
Cool dear nice one thanks for sharing regards
jadugarbhandari 2 years ago
really good song.. well done..
xlisvangelis 2 years ago
Excellent. You are very talented. Thank you for sharing Sister.***** Nadine
williedb47 2 years ago
Thanking Sis Moonshine for sharing your talent with us!! Your original is definately one that resonates in all of us!!
*****
Paula
imafishgod 2 years ago
nice
haykym 2 years ago
very good performance
sabbia12 2 years ago
hey dude!....this is a very good song!...great voice and playing guitar/!..well done!..and the lyrics is very good too!
DABCDanilloAfonso 2 years ago
you play very well
p1ppylongstockings 2 years ago
You are very talented my friend ..Thanks to Sis for sharing
Rocket
Ottawarocket 2 years ago
Very nice mate, great song keep up the good work...
korkeycat 2 years ago
its a tanglewood
korkeycat 2 years ago
Ms. Sistermoonshine13 sent me and I'm so glad she did. Wow!
Great video & music ☆ Well done~ Awesome ☆ Outstanding ☆ Cool Beans ☆ ☆☆☆☆☆♣♣♣♣♣ 5+ Paws Up ♣♣♣♣♣☆☆☆☆☆
J. Austin~
Gizmowon 2 years ago
thanks im very flattered :)
lol cool beans
cheers for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Great playing and singing.
jamesnorthernva 2 years ago
thanks sis for sharing.
great song, very well written
enjoyed the groove in this
endless starz
mommarox2 2 years ago
cool yo
pigmydmm 2 years ago
Great sound. You're a very good musician, singer...artist!
SNL0907 2 years ago
Ah, nice song. Toe-tappingly good. Great performance - you need to record it with a good sound system or something - its a great song!
SaraKaikk 2 years ago
Great :)
CourtneyJanssen 2 years ago
Very Good!
videoclipsmiami 2 years ago
great playing and vocals
nice tune !!!!!!!!!!
RITERAMETAL 2 years ago
nice you have a good feel for music
nice tempo
keep it up
tim
yea78861 2 years ago
cool
Cu1t06 2 years ago
Wow~ Great song young man! I truly enjoyed it.!
TrishKingMaine 2 years ago
thank you so much :)
good to hear you did
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
need to get a mic on the table mate, the audio quality is bad but the performance is good and solid.
Lonelyschizophrenic 2 years ago
good job salute
natobaden 2 years ago
awesome job Guy !!
applause and five stars from me...
tks Sister for sharing..
1959leonardo 2 years ago
Great original. I like it!
It has a feeling that we can all relate to.
~CHEERS~
B.Champagne
Buchoass 2 years ago
thanks im glad you liked it
CHEERS TO YOU !!! :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Awesome job & great song !!!! Thanks sistermoonshine for the share !!!!
Pensygirl54 2 years ago
Very nice song and performance. Thanx for sharing sis.
Jannen100 2 years ago
Great song and great performing!!
flaviorventura 2 years ago
NICE SONG THANKS FOR SHAREING FRIENDS
jimmymccombs 2 years ago
Great stuff my friend. You need to get into a recording studio and build the supporting sound to this top 20 tune.
Thanks for the share SIS.
2minstral 2 years ago
id love to but im poor lol
im hoping to get some work soon to get some money for my music.
thanks :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Great Song Man.
TDM
TheDigitalMafia 2 years ago
TOTALLY AWSUM!
Mooz
moomay11649 2 years ago
wonderful, awsome, fantastic,thx for sharing, have wonderful time :-)
10****************
Setaiesh 2 years ago
Excellent!!!
Grandma mary
Fr3derick 2 years ago
thanks gran :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Sounds very nice.
Thank you very much for sharing Sis.
Friendly greetings,
Michael
michaelplaying 2 years ago
fantastic...sis you know how to pick em...great sound and lyrics awesome....stars all round.....thanks for sharing....
KATLINRIMER08 2 years ago
Hello Dude,
That was a great song very powerful lyric
well put together song, I loved it 5 Stars
thanks for sharing this awesome song.. and thank you my Beautiful Loveing precious SIS ~Jerry~ *****
YShattered 2 years ago
cheers dude :)
im glad you enjoyed it
thanks again jerry
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
really good playing and singin!! 5 stars
rockguitarrabit 2 years ago
Loved it.....5* thanks Sis.
Mellomel 2 years ago
Very good performance , awesome job ! :>)
GContelli 2 years ago
good performance young fella ! jim
anden4fr 2 years ago
you are really good and thanks sis for sharing this with me
drnorris56 2 years ago
Wonderful performance - 5 stars:)
SparkyGerbil 2 years ago
thanks :)
cheers for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
WOW!!! really good :) thank you sis. for sharing.
brittanyleeann04 2 years ago
very nice!
Jolie028 2 years ago
VERY INSPIRING MOOD, JUST BEAUTIFUL.
bbuteo 2 years ago
Thanks Sis , Very good young man :o)tm *****
uncledave10 2 years ago
oh i so enjoy your performances OZ! You got that unmistakable sound that makes me want to hear more. great write and song. love the way you and your guitar get along. best friends. heheh. me n mine too. You just sound wonderful hun. Keep On!! much respect. Happy Christmas to you and the family OZZY!
xxx~Lisa
mindovermatter2009 2 years ago
thank you so much :)
lol i couldnt live without my guitar lol
cheers (sorry for the late reply)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Fantastic performance and excellent song and great lyrics !
Brilliant !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
this is my favourite thing in the whole entire world ever. i listened to the little clip of it stefan put on his facebook and have been nagging him to find me the full version ever since :')
gemmashort1234 2 years ago
lol im glad you like it :)
once i get an e.p ill give stefan a copy to give to you
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Another top tune Oz, not only a great song but great performance, loved the lyrics too.
withnailus 2 years ago
cheers :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
do you have a tab for this by anychance?
quietYit 2 years ago
ozzy sorry to hear you have been ill...never worry about replying...lovely message though thank you ...;0) lovely post....see your really enjoying it here...;))
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
inousch...
took the words right out of my mouth! : )
*****
streetspiritlive 2 years ago
cheers im glad you liked it :)
thanks for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Great song and gitar playing
inousch 2 years ago
thanks :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
great to listen to again..xxx
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
Didnt take me much persausion to watch again......awesome!!!
baldyholly79 2 years ago
nice melody and catchy chords. Chorus really enhanced the words. Enjoyed it a lot! ~ Raz
mishrathium 2 years ago
thanks raz
im so glad you enjoyed it :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
sounds great
TheTwinsofEvil 2 years ago
great song & playing!
ivebeenthere1 2 years ago
cheers:)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Very Good. I like it. Thank you Ozzy.
SebastienDeChantilly 2 years ago
thank you Sebastien for watching this..
he is good isn't he...
the one thing he has that none of has is youth...
being young, as we all know, is wasted on the young...
but, he expresses the joy, frustration and confusion of youth better we ever did.............
well better than i ever did anyway...
mikee
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
thanks Sebastien :)
glad you liked it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
I've been very busy lately trying to catch up tonight this is a real gem !!!
*****
Keep up the great work.
alma
almassweetcookiejar 2 years ago
thanks alma :)
your to kind.
ill do my best lol
thanks for the stars :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
This is a great song!
SmokeyNelsonMusic 2 years ago
Great song and a sweet performance
tps607 2 years ago
thanks tom
glad you enjoyed it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
I saw you earlier in the week, and had to dash, so am glad friend Mikee(monello sir) reminded me back to your posts,today! .....you indeed are very talented,.writing super original material!: -) I applaud!...Excellent, and subbed!5*****.Sincerely, Laurie
cinderellalifestyle 2 years ago
cheers laurie,
im very flattered :)
thank you so much for the sub an stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
you're really talented
rutlegirl 2 years ago
;0)
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
very good...
very passionate...
5stars indeed.
HellbillyRon 2 years ago
thank you very much :)
cheers for the stars
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Mate, you are definetly a class act
baldyholly79 2 years ago
cheers jamie
glad you liked it :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Awesome, Oz. Great tempo that is a real toe-tapper. The hammer fills of the interludes add a nice dimension and when the cease as the vocals come in it propels the song.
Really like the Fsus prior to the chorus and I love the double F hammer just after the chorus.
This song has hit written all over it. Bass, percussion and some guitar licks in the second half of each verse and this is a top 40 song, easy.
Open end is nice, but the verse makes it. Would have prefered you ended there,
Oswlek 2 years ago
dude u made an album yet? glass half full or empty? :P
Aintboverd 2 years ago
no i aint yet lol its filling slowly lol
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Haha awesome get it done I'll be one of ur first customers!!!
Aintboverd 2 years ago
One of the greatest talents to emerge this year. Get a good manager...someone with experience...oh hang on lol
kentishbloke 2 years ago
Shameless Promoter (and THAT is what it takes!) Go for it...you have the heart!
tps607 2 years ago
thanks tim your far to kind :)
lol mikee says to say im man of kent,
invicta lol
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Wow. You are a great writer. A great natural talent. Everyone on Youtube has sent me this but I would have come to check you out anyway. I am a fan. Always do your own thing. I get a feeling there is a whole lot more in the tank. Good for us.
Toracube 2 years ago
you are very very generous im extremely flattered .
im so glad you liked it :)
thank you for the kind words.
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
nice! you gotta put more stuff up :)
missb9871 2 years ago
lol im workin on it
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Really nice Oz, glad sproutcentral sent me over to watch this. Lots of feeling and soul on this one. Mark
Maysey1 2 years ago
thanks mark
glad you liked it
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Back here.
I just love these words.
see you soon.
:)
Jules
roadbiketraveller 2 years ago
cool lyrics and a good strong backbeat,
,like it ,
are you thinkin of bringing in a drummer n electric axe,bass n all this stuff will jump of the page ,,go for it bro,,,Alan
TINMANschannel 2 years ago
cheers alan:)
ermm i do mainly play electric an it'd be nice to unleash on it but at the moment im jus stickin with the acoustic lol
but while im at college ill be doin backing tracks an stuff so ill see wat i come up with an go from there lol
Oz
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
wtg Oz!!
BigLoveZone 2 years ago
Fantastic posting. Thanks to you, Mikee and Dave who both shared. 5***** ☺
weeyin1155 2 years ago
Well done Ozzy.
I think this one's the single.
5*****
Dave.
sproutcentral 2 years ago
it is indeed singular....
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
better to come
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
cheers dave
lol if you wanna pay for recording your more then welcome lol jk
thanks for the stars
Oz
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Nice song and playing OZ.
faaradar 2 years ago
Class song and performance Ozzy! Excellence man! Most enjoyed! Cheers!
EdMuirton 2 years ago
cheers ! :)
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Cover the Dead Boys!
KidnapDeath 2 years ago
with 6 feet of earth?
monello198 2 years ago
Upon you comment I checked out
The Dead Boys
Ha ha ha
A total cabaret cliché , all the way down to Sids white jacket!!!
Im amazed they dont have a go on
Americas Got NO Talent!!
Have a good weekend Matt and always remember.
If illegal its worth a go..
Mon
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
I don't know what the fuck you're talking about mon
It's not about talent, it never was. It's fucking punk man
Also the Dead Boys were there before the Sex Pistols craze (those posers were british BTW)
I can't try having a nice weekend, but I'll try trying. Thanks for giving a shit.
Bestest lovingz
Matt
KidnapDeath 2 years ago
Stiv Bators touched my leg at the Camden Palace..........
monello198 2 years ago
May he rest in peace.
KidnapDeath 2 years ago
Wow that's pretty awesome. Thanks for the share mon!
mo4forum 2 years ago
my pleasure
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
in this context awesome is a completely acceptable word as it's usage is justified.....
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
cheers matt!
OZ
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
goodness how many your posting your ona roll now ozzy.....what a great original.....love your guitar it the make tanglewood..?? ;0)
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
lol if im on a roll i should change my name to Butter haha
im glad your enjoyin my songs :)
an yea its a tanglewood, it was a gift from a guy who lives next door to me
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
This is top class again Ozzy. Love ur style and ur lyrics are somethin anyone would be proud of.. keep it up mate... 5*****
ronb15 2 years ago
cheers rob glad your getting into it
thanks for the stars man!
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago
Well done Ozzy.......
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
He's pretty bloody good mate!
EdMuirton 2 years ago
i know...
;-}~
monello198 2 years ago
Most excellent lyrics.
Such a wonderful song.
Well done OZZY
much love
Jules.x.
roadbiketraveller 2 years ago
hey aunt julie:)
thanks your always far too kind
cheers
Oz
THEOZZYGUITAR 2 years ago