Eboyd feat. New Millenium & Trigger The Soldier - Opinions

[synigangsta]

u know, its actually pretty dope recorded via cellphone heh it immediately reminded me of the firm's phone tap

[eboyd32]

thanks! yeah, i redid it in a studio. check the newer version. it came out better.

[laPennello]

Tight!! Hook is catchy. Verses are dope!

[eboyd32]

lol! i was referring to the remastered version! i'll send you the link in a minute. i need to change this one out for that one though.

[cruzjesse117]

Sick With It...

HAHAHA Wait WTF

Dude, People That Like Soulja Boy

Are Not Gonna Like This [Hip Hop]

[eboyd32]

lol! i know, i just thought i'd fuck with 'em and get 'em to come check out my video! BTW, i remade it in better quality. come check it out. just search for it on my page.

[Kibathakat]

sik tune eboyd! cool vibe in the beat, good rhymes and message! keep up the good work guy... KIBA =D

[eboyd32]

thanks!

[IMILLMATIC]

all this need is some better mixing and it'll be perfect!

[eboyd32]

thanks! yeah, i recorded the verse on my CELL PHONE! lol! and i had to send all the stuff across the globe to get it put together.

[IMILLMATIC]

its a shame it had to nbe like that!

if only you could meet trigger in the studio and all that...

[eboyd32]

yeah, unfortunately he lives in Aruba, so that isn't happening. i have a studio now though so i will be remaking the track in better quality.

[DaFunnyGal]

OMG!! Thatz real smooth poetry made into a real sweet rap!!!!!! I LOVE DIZ!!!!

[eboyd32]

why thank you!

[paddywallace33]

This is good shit dood. Original as well. Will make more people discover that HipHop is also poetry...!

[eboyd32]

exactly my point! glad you liked it!

[Nawledge1]

Crap. You did it before me. I was planning to do a poem in a rapping style. O well. One suggestion though. Re-record this because I couldnt catch everything. The parts I DID hear were tight work. One more thing...

GET SIGNED ALREADY!!

[eboyd32]

lol. thanks bro! i actually really only do this as a hobby and since i surround myself with artists it is easier, however i still lack the basic tools like, for example, a microphone (i recorded my verses on the cell phone!). i think you should still do the track though, but remember to focus on meter and such to truly make it a poem. if you want the lyrics, read the description and you can listen and read along. thanks.

[chinita41]

this is great. i always say that we should respect everyones opinions. 5 stars

[1dontlook2]

great =D

[n2cora]

i remember this one! real cool!

[AceKat00o]

You can realy flow brotha

[eboyd32]

thanks.

[rogerrodd]

Proud of you my brotha!! Solid piece, mix and vocals. Keep up the dream.

RR

[eboyd32]

thank you very much!

[kadachy]

Hell yeah i now know the whole words, so i can sing along odd i didnt even know the lyrics was on the side of the thing lol

[terryts2]

snaps and applause... it's been a while. We need a remix!!! you gotta let me write you another verse. Trust me, you won't regret it.

[eboyd32]

damn man! where ya been? anyways, why not. get on it bro. i'll let you spit it though. if you can't get into a studio, just do what i did; spit on your phone!! lol! anyways, yeah that would be cool. maybe i could get someone to flip the beat too and i can see if editing the lyrics a bit wouldn't work. get at me.

[terryts2]

I've been writiing speeches, essays, anayisis, responses, and looking for a job. I found one, but anyway, i'll write a verse for you when i get the time.

[eboyd32]

cool. thanks bro. i have a few spots that need a touch up in here anyways.

[terryts2]

Hey, give me about a week, i gotta balance work and statisics. I got something in mind for you.

[eboyd32]

cool. let me know. i know some people who are good at making beat who may give me one.

[russman175]

...like it.

[manoftku]

Man, you got style!

[UnknownAssailaint]

Nice lyrics and a good beat.

[livnlife012]

awesome

[masterweske]

Bravo! Nice man sweet lyrics

[SnoopG79]

Nice song eboyd. Good lyrics fam.

[GoldenAgeHipHop]

yo eboyd32 its got good lyrics, nice song

[n2cora]

!!NOT BAD--NOT BAD AT ALL, eboyd! you offset the venom with a jazz tune which took reduced the degree of the horrors. i don't know a lot about what you do, but it sounds good enough for me! :)

[DookieBlossumgameIII]

Hey E, ive liked it ever since you sent me the rough draft. I even put it in my iTunes. I like the lyrics in the poetry, they are two contrasting opinions, one negative, one positive. New Millenium did a good job on the beat too, goes well with the laid back poetry. Yes and everyone should respect eachothers opinions, especially if they have a point.

[eboyd32]

thanks bro. BTW, New Millenium is only 15!!!

[MrFlattAndTheJazzHat]

This is really good! The music works so well. I think you could work on a few things like when the words are more stretched out on a line(like fewer words per line) let them flow through more.

But ya I don't listen to rap very often and this was a good one. Keep up the good work;)

[eboyd32]

thank you very much and thank you for the very useful critique. i will try to work that out in the future. i did this in a 16 bar, free verse fashion. i will watch my syllables and meter better next time.

[MiChAlThEKliKKKeR]

nice

[lvskshyne]

it's ok

nothing special

[eboyd32]

that's cool. i respect your opinion. it's like the old saying, what's one man's garbage is another man's masterpiece. this song is more in the lyrics than the beat and flow (although the beat, IMO, is ill. probably just average to you though and that is OK). it isn't your average rap song. think about the lyrics here as a poem, a real poem you would find in a text book, and then you may have a different outlook. either way, i still don't expect you to like it. it just may be a new perspective 4u

[n2cora]

the lyrics is typical of someone who see the environment losing its 'green'. in modern poetry the subject of a dying earth is bought up often. it's a privilege to hear young people engaging in the thought, IMO.

[eboyd32]

yeah. everything from the Romantic period on seems to tackle that subject. if you listen close though, this isn't one of them, although i did set a natural scenery, so i guess you can say this subliminally touched the subject. notice how i go over all of the same details in exact order in both verses, but the first verse is optimistic and the second is pessimistic. i even used a smooth flow in the first and a broken up, uneven flow in the second that sounds almost psycho to set the correct mood.

[triggerthesoldier1]

Big ups to my boy eboyd!!!

ey man send me that vid so i can upload it thru my account as well,and post some bulletins on myspace so that people can check it out,and did u get at new mill?did he hear the finishin cut?

anw get at me about sendin me the vid,i'll help ya promote it...NICE JOB btw man,look at all these people lovin it already man!lol

fuckin nice,stay up..ONE!

[eboyd32]

shit, i do still need to get at New Millenium. anyways, i already have been putting it in bulletins on MySpace, i have it uploaded to my profile and the realhiphop4ever profile here and my profile on MySpace, plus i added it to the group profile on MySpace and i have been sending it to everyone. i want to add it as a track though to the group page but i didn't get a chance to yet. i'll send the video to you in a sec. peace!

[eboyd32]

lol! cool man, i hope to hear it soon.

[jongee2ms]

Hi kool ur video da style reminds me of a rapgroup named jazzmataz feat. guru, never heard of? keep it goin man, it's original!!!!

[eboyd32]

of course. it's not not a group though, just Guru. that was one of my influences. thanks bro.

[wickedlooper]

I was feelin' this. Good flow, off at times. Simple rhyme scheme. Very descriptive lines in there. Keep it up, man. You might wanna get a better mic.

[eboyd32]

lol! i did it on my cell! if i get more into it i definitely will.

[wickedlooper]

Haha that explains it...just check Craiglist I guess.

[DarkoMacedonia2007]

Not bad man! But at moments feels like you're chasing the beat - and then you're ahead of the beat... Not bad but it can be a lot more better if you improve those parts! (Just a constructive criticism)

[eboyd32]

thanks bro. at this point i have little control of that. i don't have the equipment for it. it was Trigger who put it all together and he lives in Aruba so it was hard to get it together with me living in LA and all. thanks man.

[Menace3434]

great great and is ur first time rappin no? i like the track it sounds so fresh wit that sax in the background cool

[eboyd32]

yes it is. thanks, glad you liked it.

[kadachy]

damn nice vid really catchy beat to it and im not sure but iv heard that name ''trigger the soldier''somewhere before

[eboyd32]

Trig is a member of our group Real Hip Hop Forever which isn't an artists group, but a group for people who want the real shit to get a piece of the pie too and are doing something about it. you probably have seen one of his videos here on YouTube under the profile for triggerthesoldier1. he's basically our featured emcee. that was him on the hook and he did all the technical work of finding the producer, putting the vocals on the beat and finalizing the track. thanks bro, i'm glad you liked it.

[kadachy]

ahh now i know where iv seen him his got good skill his style remine's me of Pete rock how its a good flow with a good volcal style,and where does this beat come from or is it just a made up one

[eboyd32]

the guy mentioned in the title New Millenium made the beat. it's all mentioned in the description.

[cjwil3]

wow that was amazing. any doubts of you being a real hip hop head are long gone. this is the debut of something great. peace

[eboyd32]

lol. thanks man! hopefully. we'll see. i still am handling all of my other things now but if it turns out that this is what feels like the right way to go, then so be it. thanks a lot though bro.

[jes102]

eboyd32:) You sound so fresh young on this track! Like with most artists/ rap stars on their debut thier voices sound so alive and pure.

Literally speaking, unfortunately after the ciggarettes and the late nights kick in, with all artists, the voice turns to gravel.

Please carry a tape recorder wherever you go, so that you notice the change. Thxs x

[eboyd32]

lucky for me i am straight edge. i've never been drunk in my life nor have i touched a cigarette to my lips (except those bubble gum ones!) or done any drugs and i do not plan to. thanks for the compliment! if i get enough good feedback on this i will make a real video for it (my uncle's in the photography/filming business) and i will continue writing poems like this so i can make more of these tracks so tell people to watch this video. thanks!

[jes102]

eboyd32:) It's good that you don't dabble in the heavy stuff. If you hear the likes of Nas or Mariah even the late Bob Marley on their debut they sound so young. So I'm wishing for you eboyd32; to preserve that good energy that spark you have. & give us all the breath of fresh air that your audience anticipates from you. Thxs.

[eboyd32]

i agree with you on that. maybe this is why debut's and other early career albums are overwhelmingly favored to late follow ups overall, especially in the hip hop genre. once again, thank you very much for the comment!

[31JoHn13]

nice

[victornewman06]

Thumbsup on this one!!!!

[eboyd32]

thanks Vic! i want you guys to be as blatantly honest as possible though. a little "you should try this" or "this doesn't sound right" goes a lot further than "great job" as long as it's honest.

[AbbottSupreme]

Eboyd32 you doing your thang fam!! great potential..keep practicing! Nice beat/flow/content/..spit everyday..write everyday..but in the end, Do you!! One/Bless

[eboyd32]

i'm not yet sure this is what i want to do forever though. i mean, i love doing it, but if i do it, as of right now, it will only be on the side. i am still trying to go as far as i can with football and school and i am a personal trainer too so i am trying to build my business up right now also. we'll see. i'm not done doing this shit by any means though. i want to revolutionize hip hop if i find the time to do so.

[Melhex]

Good work Fam... Real HipHop!

[eboyd32]

thanks bro.