Re: Sawng Writing Thing (Bridge Lyric Step)

[mandersen45]

actually i think this one would sound really good combined with the idea of uglydrunkwench, where it totally slows down and goes a capella for the bridge. then on the second "belong" come in hard with drums, and everything back on tempo. maybe a sweet solo after. that would make the song a lot more dynamic.

[mandersen45]

i like the melody. i can imagine rivers singing it really well. i'm not crazy about the line "even when i sense it is wrong". i'm referring of course to the bridge, not the crazy stuff afterwards.

[Gimpy24x7]

thats pretty smurfin cool

[vorloxu]

I'm scared now D:

[spilch]

that was one of the most ridiculous things i've ever watched on youtube.

[taylor2d2]

that song freaked me out.

[lisam805]

Man, it REALLY freaked me out! :)