I did this so fast I just realized I use "Don't know" twice in the first verse.
The first "Don't know" I would swap to "No clue" if I could do it over.
Also if in the chorus the "ain't so" part in the last line is too Weezer-cliche - it could be substituted with something like "Makes it (or me?) good to go" for example.
This is good i thought i was the only one who put verse verse chorus verse verse chorus!
jaythepaladin 3 years ago
frenchie - I liked your lyrics - they were pretty cool. the "seems so black and white" hook is so nice
kazpereira 3 years ago
Really really like the last two verses.
warren7722 3 years ago
I did this so fast I just realized I use "Don't know" twice in the first verse.
The first "Don't know" I would swap to "No clue" if I could do it over.
Also if in the chorus the "ain't so" part in the last line is too Weezer-cliche - it could be substituted with something like "Makes it (or me?) good to go" for example.
frenchiethefry 3 years ago