[RuneScape Movie] Heroes Chapter 1 - Lie

[ozukill]

I think I need to get ma ears checked

[ozukill]

Y does bicker bad hve a kid voice in beginning?

[xekomonhon1989]

who noticed when they had conversation to kill the dude said withoot hesitation

[rs2revison]

it wud be better without voices

[DarknessWeaver]

I seen Mithzan and I'm like sweeeet! Then I see Kazac1 and I'm like hell yeah!

[naimop]

kzlcxjvscvhzjxkhvbczcvzxbhv mithzan and kazac1 <3

[hmmipwn1]

Hey can i be runescape actor and voice for you if i can add me my name is Skys The min mk so send me pm or send me friend request on skype name is imdawinna

[TheDarkLord191]

great suspense!

[lordwout10]

Lol google translate

[CelestialHei]

ahah just watching this two years later, awesome editing dude :P

[moreepty1]

also my name is N0Limit99

[moreepty1]

may i be in ur next movie plzs im 23 cb and hit 68 at max

[wizoman2]

sweet! i love that you included colluci btw

[RomHacker263]

3:35 greec?

cus i read about it when i had class.

[jrewt123]

The plot sucks

[manmiko24]

lol the kid who was laughing creeped me out

[Basjje555]

@manmiko24 :O really?

[Dmenace94]

great storyline and editing but bickerbad voice is just terrible lol

[kimimaro109]

@Dmenace94 sorry if my mexican accent sucks ¬¬

[ERobert123]

Cool Video Man ;)

[Lugiarulz233]

poob?

[LLschoolJ2]

DOOD WHERE YOU FROM YOU SOUND LIKE A MIX OF ROCKEY AND SCARFACE AND THE GOD FATHER IM SO JELOS

[XxServalcat24xX]

nice vid u deseverve more views

[astermakin1]

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

[kronotikus]

metal gear solid theme ftw:)

[neshvadshahin]

dude can u reply to me the story so far plzzzzzzz

[kimimaro109]

@neshvadshahin Sorry, but you can only know the story by reading the description of the 2 chapters already released, sorry :/

[VidShocker]

WHAT PROGRAM IS THAT?!?

[hardcorechamp1]

ty since u add rain can i add fire or no

[kimimaro109]

@hardcorechamp1 Only if you colour the rain to red or something like that lol

[hardcorechamp1]

im trying to make 1 got any tips because this was good and i want to be as good so if u can help me thanks =)

[kimimaro109]

@hardcorechamp1 Well, some tips, first, take your time to make it, try to consider every detail in the video, also, when you record, make sure all the text you type fits on the screen, dont make the video most talk and less fight, neither less talk and most fight, try to make it balanced as you can. That's all I can think right now lol, also.. don't give up. :D

[TheNoobCopper]

I hope that you know "Heroes" is a real TV show...

[kimimaro109]

@TheNoobCopper Yes I do

[Battleaxe98]

sweet video i cant believe you got cavemanfilms and mithzan in there awesome

[romeomarlowe]

voices..

[thersappvids]

lol 6:03

[24taco24]

Good vid but to much inn it 4/5

[dannycool59x]

good vid but, i had alittle trouble with the voices not so god 8/10

[arja3333]

lol nice vid!

[JaysnakeTV]

What Program Do You use to make it rain?

[kimimaro109]

Sony Vegas, there are some tutorials of how to make rain with it ;)

[dantunes112]

wanna make some vids with me ?

im pretty evil

[vyrewatch12321]

thank you mickeymouse

it's buckerbad!

lololololoolololol

[godenman]

yay breaking benjamin ftw!

[marco1231151231]

go away im doing ur mom!.....i have no mom hahahh rofl

[UglynEvil]

hm! very nice! looks like youve been making vids for a while :l. it reminds me of a series me and my friends are working on, called Dark Days (you can see the promo under my vids, but all the episodes are posted on Devkiller5's channel). All the runescape machinima series vids are all comedy, so we decided to make a serious one, and it looks like you had the same thoughts :D! good job, i subscribed, and i cant wait till the next ep comes out :3.

[octokiller7]

wow! Jagex elect this a candidate for the machinima contest

[JesseParkour]

Beautifully done. That's all I can say.

[Adnan23001]

Holy motherf- This movie is awswomne ic ant wait for next part!!!

[KissMassTv]

Whens 2 coming out?

[kimimaro109]

Just wait for it.

[kimimaro109]

Guess it..

[varrock200]

at 8:38 were we meant to be able to read the note?

[kimimaro109]

If you can then yes.

[varrock200]

nice movie.....*heheheh bickerbad is wearing high heels*

[flobros]

epic video!! free money or i report noobs, reported like this i will become a mod in 1 hour! LMAO

[jmconeown]

i dont get it......

[TehFarmerNub]

Nice editing, keep up the good work :D

[TheAlphaBrothers]

wow man looking forward to chapter 2! :D sub'd

[YouVidProject]

lalalalalalalala

[TehNubMasters]

nice effects

[guthixownyou]

oh okay... but nice video btw

[guthixownyou]

uhhh 1 question how is it raining inside the house

[kimimaro109]

uhh... it was not raining inside... <_<.. can u understand it, camera was ouutisde the house, you need to see inside the house, so ye, it look like it is raining inside but it is not, got it?.. ok.. thank you ^-^

[wilmacandfriends]

theres a way to make it so theres only rain outside the house, just use a mask(if you use vegas pro8), its worked for me. just a tip incase you need it

[SailorShinobi]

The Akatsuki song totally pwns with the situation! Good job!

My RS name is Prof_Snape6, don't hesitate to leave me a message sometimes xD

[Moeh14]

Loved it, but next time don't put your mouth to close to the mic cause I hear breathing and puh puh puh from your lips a lot :P

[MsDbTonik]

You cuteeee lil' thing. You're so talented! :3. Love the video so much xoxo. <3.

[kimimaro109]

o-O

[PewndPenguin]

dude your so lucky! AMG ;D

[0gorgasali0]

Editted with Vegas! Nice 5/5

[grimonog]

5 lb here

awesome

great editing an good story!

5/5

[runesaga]

Ooh metal gear solid, (my best game since i was 5, or less i think)

niice :) looking forward to another episode.

[thenoobwar]

One word...Stunning.

[RSBorisov]

This was really well done. I'm always impressed to see originality from any RS video directors and seeing it on such a large scale is great. I'd echo what Luigi says about trying to cut episodes down to around 5 minutes as it holds most people's attention better. On the whole it was brilliantly cut and very few mistakes throughout. 5/5.

- Boris

[CelestialHei]

Holy CRAP! Youre the best editor ever. Wow, it looked freakin awesome. :D

Cant wait to see the next. :P

[milliam30]

rofl i like the part with bestest

[kattlinyakno]

wayyyyyyyy to awesome!!!! cant wait til next one!!!

[imambro001]

do chapters shorter..around 4 minutes maybe?

[karzon70]

epic just epic!!! cant waitfor the secend chapter

[Dwerfds1]

kinda long but good

[Luigi1o3]

Seeing all these guys back into a series makes me want to make a new series myself :P. (I'm secretly working on one for this school year.)

[Luigi1o3]

Well this is quite an interesting story. Nice how you used music in the background. I remember when I used to do that . Anyways, like Colucci said earlier, it did seem a little sketchy. I'd take his advice on artificial text. (make it in paint not in Sony vegas) Also, one major flaw it seemed that caught me was this episode was very long. Long videos tend to get boring after awhile. You may want to cut it at 5 mins to keep viewer's attention. This hasn't hooked me in yet. Good luck mate!

[seawo0lf]

lol the wrong bar! lol

[lawrie90]

That was really good! No... It was Amazing!!

I can not wait for chapter 2!

I can't think of anything you need to improve but would you care to share how you do that rain effect?

Keep it up! =D

~Lawrie

[kimimaro109]

There is a tutorial in: dafusebox channel, you can check it there :D and tyvm, I read all the comments :3

[Omars510]

they are some tutorials for rain effect it's not that hard.

[Kkcomics]

Big Mac! Great editing and sound effects, keep it up!

[tublife]

Overall it was good, but it was lacking a few things...

Some things you can work on is putting more enthusiasm into the voicing (to give more life into the movie). You can also make close up pans just close up recordings (by which I mean film the characters close up, not just pan them close up. It looks much nicer, clearer and more professional).

However, I really give you props on your work with sound effects, very nice. =)

[TheJhonGuy]

nice

[TakiMM]

MGS music rofl nice xD!

[josshinator]

Very nice editing, but can I sugest somthing:

1) Next time, lower the music volume or increase the voices

2) try and get your actors/actress's to speak more clearly

3) get the names to fade out quicker,

4) and don't slow down the music it sounds too distorted

Other than that, outstanding! 5/5 faved :)

[ouTxTuo]

nice

[jib4321]

AWESOME CAN'T WAIT FOR MOE =P

[yubpn]

nicceee 5/5

[iisherenow]

v/ nice, been waiting for this long time,

rofl at kazac

[Cece248]

u did really good on the effects n stuff but i was kinda lost as to what this was about and the storyline was kinda confusing for me? i guess thats just me tho. (i know u said it in the description that it is a bit confusing) lol 5/5 tho for the effort and i loved the effects and u did really good on the sound effects. ill look forward to ur next videos and ill try to catch up on the storyline/what its about or w/e ;)

[bballa96rs]

the storyline was that he didnt tell everyone a specific bar, so they all went to their closest one.

[Ryanxownage]

colucci sounds like dan cook lol

[bobbie922]

z0mg that looks really good

[opens11]

good editing just a strung out video 4/5

[hopking123]

yo bicker. is there any room for me to join or to late?

[kimimaro109]

I have some roles filled, but if I need people I will post a request video or something :)

[hopking123]

alright. haha ill be the awesome dude that come in the end and kicks u and u die lol

[ReaperKnight72]

holy witackers! I want to be in it. :D

[orath11]

wow, wicked sweet-ness =D

[PartyHatFever]

Epiicccccccccc

[Monkeybulb1RS]

Dude wtf, i'm not in credits?

[kimimaro109]

read description :o

[stephanieinez10]

i wonder why that chicks voice sounds so epic... :P

[fbvillian]

A good start overall, i'm not hooked yet, but i'm sure your scripting will get better as we move on. reading and looking at other peoples stories and how they create story lines may help you. I'm hoping the story will develop, it started to get a bit mysterious near the end, but the whole episode needs to be consistent. Best of luck

~Fb

[fbvillian]

It's different. I think you as a main character, have to speak a bit louder and clear, so it's easy to hear. No offense but your mumbling a bit so you gotta make sure you can hear the tone, but the voice is still understandable. The video style is different, and the scripting is ok, nothing special, but that's how everyone starts off, colucci, no offense at all man :p, didn't start off an expert, he worked towards that. I'm sure you can do the same, but you gotta keep practising and read more

[wilmacandfriends]

lol, a bit unclear, but Epicness! And Arrow, Bestest and Cave are in it! W00t!

[XoFrostyoX]

fuckin EPIC! :D Gj

[SolidPwnage]

Wow that was awesome! Nice editing. Look foward to the next chapter :)

[Omars510]

This is like matrix 1 confusing But it was epicly cool and the intro is so off this world keep on editing like that. man i love master cheef voice XD it's epic :D be ready for part 2 :)

[krazyguitarguy]

omfg wootnizzz

[sittonolla123]

3:16 its not peace of cake ;D its piece of cake lulz :[]

-Pure Mirivel

[colucciskiller]

Hahah Bicker bad, you got owned at 3:36

the letter reads:

Colucci- predicts future

Mithzan- levitation

Bestest- Manipulate

Arrow- Intimidate

Aqua- strenght

Caveman- velocity

Amazed at my deciphering skills? :P

[funondabayou13max]

lmfao owned him X[)

[kimimaro109]

lololololololol nicely done .. ready for next quizz? :P ... u R ... watcher o.o

[dvm20]

zz0mg how'd You Know That!@!@ Bahah Nice =P

[AsTheDeath]

Well both you and Bickerbad should get back to your Greek homework lol... mitezan, strenget...

[colucciskiller]

What language is in the first letter? I could make some of it out. I know the first row is our names, mithzan, colucci etc, but I'm trying to decipher what's after it.

[Guardaviewer]

I would recommend annotating the words to help us comprehend the words.

[funondabayou13max]

Dude, this was amazing as hell! You got very good at editing, and this movie will have a great story line, I can tell! Gl with the rest of the movie dude :D

--Mithzan

[arrowgun99]

Very good job, can't wait for part 2 ;)

[PewndPenguin]

!!!! Finally! Its Out W00T! Lol and if it took 17 hours, 08 minutes and 56 seconds to render my computer who have shot its self. Lol i love it! Good job 5/5

-PewndPenguin

[RuneRaawr]

Amg! So awesome that it made me say amg for my first time :DDD . Your voice is so l337 that I'm going to eat a pretzel from the sewers!

[colucciskiller]

I watched it all, and it was amazing. Here are a few points I want to state though.

Try raising the volume of the voices at certain parts. I tend to render my videos in little parts to see what I have to redo before I upload it.

Also, try to learn artificial texting, it'll make your life much easier and the video won't look as sketchy. Like for example you're in a scene talking to someone and right away the NPCS in the scene are in different places.

Last, loved how you used the mask I gave u

[kimimaro109]

Ty, and yes, I forgot to raise the volume on those parts, and yes, I really need to use Artifficial Text, I'm sure I will use it in next chapter, oh and about the little guy, actually is a secret too :o

[colucciskiller]

Sweet mate, but I have school atm, so I'll watch it when I get back

[Kazac1]

Wow that was simply awesome! Nice use of effects and music to back it up! I cant believe it took 17 hours to reder though lol :)