Score is louder than dialogue (bad) Focus is off too often. Not understanding the story at all, it just jumps around at some points. The "scary"parts have bad lighting which make the scene pointless to watch. Although, it looks like an homage to Chainsaw Massacre in away. Audio and editing is poor
All this said, it's decent for a home film. I wouldn't expect much different. Keep shooting and try to improve. Manipulate the light, keep audio in mind, and cut on actions... keep going though.
Sorry, but disappointed over all. The acting was kind of stiff and there were some editing errors such as when the kid at the end is getting up, then it jumps to him on the ground completely getting up again, but in the other direction.
I don't get the ending. Were you trying to make it look as if you don't know if he stabbed the guy or not? If so, it was obvious that he missed and stabbed the ground.
Hmm... horror films are the hardest to make, if you aren't "damn good" they end up being comedies. I commend you for your attempt at making a movie in the hardest genre of all.
"Hello, somebody here" "yeah im in the kitchen, want a sandwich"
0DDB0X 1 month ago
the editing is something crap
jamie3862 2 months ago
I knew the nerdy lookin kid would survive:)
bobbythemilkman123 2 months ago
hahahah funiest movie ive ever seen !!! hahahhahahaha :L
check my chanel out
KarolinaBorcz 2 months ago
watch my short film too thnx
ProPcKidz 3 months ago
Needs more shots. Make it more dramatic.
LoST2467 3 months ago
acting could be better but the idea was great
pickuptruck2000 4 months ago
nice
TheYogeshactor 4 months ago
i thought the last guy was going to get killed by that old man lol i loved the part where he stabbed the guy with the kifne
NYMidhudsonTSA 6 months ago
please dont encourage them. modern horror sucks enough as it is.
victorchanux 6 months ago
The vocal acting is inspired by Resident Evil 1, alright... lmao
holysmoke84 6 months ago
Its an Awesome Movie Man..! Just Loved it. You Guys are awesome, Best Screenplay, Direction, Acting..
BOXERVAIBHAV 8 months ago
leav them alone they were trying
justinbieberbabe261 1 year ago
bad angle
ahsuknat 1 year ago
Fucking retarted bullshit
FlyerOctopus 1 year ago
My trailer is kinda better then this sorry...
Famewithnofortune 1 year ago
Score is louder than dialogue (bad) Focus is off too often. Not understanding the story at all, it just jumps around at some points. The "scary"parts have bad lighting which make the scene pointless to watch. Although, it looks like an homage to Chainsaw Massacre in away. Audio and editing is poor
All this said, it's decent for a home film. I wouldn't expect much different. Keep shooting and try to improve. Manipulate the light, keep audio in mind, and cut on actions... keep going though.
MST3Killa 1 year ago
it is cool. but you need to take very very more time. you have to create suspense. And you should make not so many cuts in it.
sry for my english^^
vivustemporis 1 year ago
Sorry, but disappointed over all. The acting was kind of stiff and there were some editing errors such as when the kid at the end is getting up, then it jumps to him on the ground completely getting up again, but in the other direction.
DesMuttYS 1 year ago
nice one...keep up the good work..
alfazg 2 years ago
great idea and a good story. any effects are sad, but good work´guys. hold on!
ricowosnitzka 2 years ago
Nice Horror short movie .. I liked it !
Boudiboytm 2 years ago
Oh my got! Perfect...SUPER
HOLD ON MAN
darkcooper4 2 years ago
reminds me of hostel
pearldrums666 2 years ago
Very nice job. A lot of good creepy shots.
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago
Christian-horror with a psycho cannibal, THE LAST SUPPER(now in YOUTUBE),
click on my name normenarule and view in my favourites.
Stars DAN SHOR(X-files, Star Trek, TRON)
normenarule 3 years ago
I don't get the ending. Were you trying to make it look as if you don't know if he stabbed the guy or not? If so, it was obvious that he missed and stabbed the ground.
HauntedGProductions 3 years ago
true true. horror is pretty hard to make and direct. especially the acting.
this was alright. acting needs to be more realistic.
lol. thats what happens when u tresspass in a strangers house..especially if he kills ppl for a living. LOl!
:D
shapman87 3 years ago
i liked it. it's simple and done by kids. good work
fredslow 3 years ago
trailer at 17
belrock1 3 years ago
Congradulations, you just wasted 6:03 of my life.
Thanks alot.
smallproductions 3 years ago
nice vid
horror movies are hard to make...
good job
3.9
daydax 3 years ago
Hmm... horror films are the hardest to make, if you aren't "damn good" they end up being comedies. I commend you for your attempt at making a movie in the hardest genre of all.
eyethesuicide 3 years ago
nice
themagiccard 4 years ago
siete dei burini che vi mettete i commenti da soli però il video era figo sul serio....bravi....
06121951 4 years ago
hey, not bad! keep working! There's a youtube director contest!
medienraum 4 years ago
the video is ok...
but the guy with the red shirt who dies at the begining is really a good actor...
5 star for him...!!!!!!!!!
gossipman 4 years ago
i actually liked the driver more. he talks more and in a correct english! the killer us not bad, too!
lentife 4 years ago
nice video man !!! the music was very good too !
i liked it
bye
alexandermain 4 years ago
cool, well done!
lentife 4 years ago