Songtime Theatre Arts - A Chorus Line - Dance Ten Looks Three

[isosteric]

So awful Donkers that you keep watching it! You're such a cheese.

[AnnabelJone]

@isosteric Ignore their bad comments. I liked it! Do you know the performer? I like her version. She did an exceptional job!

[Donkers2010]

Dumb bitch! Hope sheila kicks your ass! with the help of Connie and Paul! and secretly from Zach backstage! Dumb whore!

[SongsJerome]

@Donkers2010 What is your problem?

[msflybye]

i've seen this done, and honestly this girl didnt do bad, her acting is good, her singing if she trained more her voice would be good.

[Donkers2010]

This sucks!!!!!!! 

[Zombiton]

The acting and dancing and general physical stuff was great. I'd say work on your monologue, it was a little oddly timed (and timing is everything). Laugh a little. Be a snarky bitch. Other than that, you're doing really well.

[SarahBlowface]

Her breath control is atrocious....

[superscooter578]

well i loved it not the best I've seen but defiantly no were near the worst 

[TheLadyWhoLunches]

I would say that Evelyn Sweeney (Todd?!) got the part because of her dancing & her looks. Her acting is pretty good, but not exceptional. Her singing is mediocre & needs a great deal of work. During the performance, I got the feeling that she had to concentrate hard while singing (to remember the lyrics, to hit the right notes, to time the words with the movement), felt relaxed while acting (which was enjoyable; it just could have been better), and thoroughly enjoyed herself while dancing.

[TheLadyWhoLunches]

She certainly looks the part, and she's a pretty good actor. The accent surprised me, but I like it. This was a fresh take on the monologue. The singing, however, needs a lot of work. She is clearly stretching on the higher notes, which aren't even high. The lower notes (which aren't low) seem difficult for her, too. She's not a strong singer, even in her comfort range. The voice itself is average. It is very odd that no one is laughing... Good sense of rhythm. Moves well. Pretty good dancer.

[isosteric]

Salamiqueen (stupid name for a queen- Oh I get it now- you're a queen who likes salami. Except that's not funny either). Easy to criticise a girl of 17 singing a tough song. Well done. Be proud of yourself for that one.

[salamiqueen]

@isosteric I just got this.

I was giving a critique. Age has NOTHING to do with it. Sorry that you can't see that. Maybe the audience was dead...she's not bad (you? not sure) but being flat or sharp is a basic thing.

[salamiqueen]

You're flat....as in, you're off pitch. Watch out for that. Also, why is no one laughing? This is SUPPOSED to be a funny song.

[nancylp1111]

If these aren't professionals I think it's pretty good, she's a very good singer

[xsublimeguy16x]

GREAT JOB HUN! :) I loved it! You did so great!!!!!!!

[tinngrinn]

I thought that was really good! Sure, I the high notes could've been sung a bit atronger, but it was still a great performance. =-)

[bradleydeath]

A chrous line - wow um are you sure this it it? This song is spose to be humrous. each song that the characters sings brings its personal lives onto stage. You need to pull it off if you do it. Its called STRONG ACTING. Actors need to act. it annoys me when they dont. not to say she didnt do a bad job. i leaved it on to see if it finished good. but (it went down) leave the back people out of her story and song. its spose to be on her. how did pauls mono go? i wanna see.

[frecklesyippy]

uh...

[BOOMitsCharlotte]

Merry christmas bit was weak...She shudve Made it longer and higher..

[tapdancegirl88]

love to see her tap dance