This was very technically sound for the most part. The voice acting and editing were superior to pretty much any other pilot I've seen. The main problem is, a lot of the dialog is very bland and what few jokes there were weren't that great.
Still, as far as pilots go this was a full notch above, and with a little more tooling on the scripting, you definitely have the potential.
@Dealortruth Yeah, to be honest I do better acting out the comedy than writing it. As for the dialogue, I went with the original and tweaked it up a bit.
But thanks for the critique and hopefully I'll get better.
This was very technically sound for the most part. The voice acting and editing were superior to pretty much any other pilot I've seen. The main problem is, a lot of the dialog is very bland and what few jokes there were weren't that great.
Still, as far as pilots go this was a full notch above, and with a little more tooling on the scripting, you definitely have the potential.
Later days, dude.
Dealortruth 8 months ago
@Dealortruth Yeah, to be honest I do better acting out the comedy than writing it. As for the dialogue, I went with the original and tweaked it up a bit.
But thanks for the critique and hopefully I'll get better.
LittleDragon17 8 months ago
Love the Final Fantasy VII track at 2:20. This video reminded me of the video game version of the 2002 film 'Kung-Pow: Enter The Fist'.
HovisSteve 1 year ago
Love the Final Fantasy VII track at 2:20. This video reminded me of the video game version of the 2002 film 'Kung-Pow: Enter The Fist'.
HovisSteve 1 year ago
LOl ! this was epic XD
neechu1 1 year ago
@neechu1 -Stars in my eyes- Epic? Awesome! I got my first "Epic" Thanks, friend. ^O^
LittleDragon17 1 year ago
@LittleDragon17 your welcome :D that was very cool ! this needs more views XD
neechu1 1 year ago
HADOKEN ! this was better then mine man lol and i lol at the fact we both made landee a nerd, that was simply epic
DubmasterBlank 1 year ago
@DubmasterBlank Thanks, friend. ^O^. By the way, the Escape from the City Parody was awesome too.
LittleDragon17 1 year ago