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From: LittleDragon17
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  • This was very technically sound for the most part. The voice acting and editing were superior to pretty much any other pilot I've seen. The main problem is, a lot of the dialog is very bland and what few jokes there were weren't that great.

    Still, as far as pilots go this was a full notch above, and with a little more tooling on the scripting, you definitely have the potential.

    Later days, dude.

  • @Dealortruth Yeah, to be honest I do better acting out the comedy than writing it. As for the dialogue, I went with the original and tweaked it up a bit.

    But thanks for the critique and hopefully I'll get better.

  • Love the Final Fantasy VII track at 2:20. This video reminded me of the video game version of the 2002 film 'Kung-Pow: Enter The Fist'.

  • Love the Final Fantasy VII track at 2:20. This video reminded me of the video game version of the 2002 film 'Kung-Pow: Enter The Fist'.

  • LOl ! this was epic XD

  • @neechu1 -Stars in my eyes- Epic? Awesome! I got my first "Epic" Thanks, friend. ^O^

  • @LittleDragon17 your welcome :D that was very cool ! this needs more views XD

  • HADOKEN ! this was better then mine man lol and i lol at the fact we both made landee a nerd, that was simply epic 

  • @DubmasterBlank Thanks, friend. ^O^. By the way, the Escape from the City Parody was awesome too.

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