I woke up dreaming of you, my original "song"... alternative title: ♥♫

[ZaibatsuVoc]

Shania Twain? I thought she was country singer.

[ZaibatsuVoc]

I really enjoyed that. But you certainly need some editing with music - it's a bit sharp for my ear. Nevertheless, the lyrics were likable, although I still want to hear them, no matter how terrible you sing.

There is a sincerity in here. Maybe a bit working on some lines will do - but then again it's just an opinion of someone who never finished a single song.

[tubingfromtimetotime]

Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it.

I appreciate your opinion, and I'll spend some time improving the audio

I'm sure that the "lyrics" can get better, but this is how they came out. If this will get to be a song, it will probably suffer some artistic changes :)

With all do respect :), you don't know what you're asking for: I'm not a singer, I don't want to be one, I shouldn't be one, so... everyone, including me, is better off without my "singing voice" here, although I get what you're saying

[ZaibatsuVoc]

Well, at least you can find someone to sing it. Many people have friends who have been taught at music school or something.

If you post another version of the song, I hope you would let me know about it. I really look forward to seeing it. Or - which is better - to listening to it.

[tubingfromtimetotime]

Ok, I'll do that... I also hope that you will tell me immediately if you know any of Shania Twain's closest friends, or (which is better) herself, thanks. :)