The only thing I would suggest is to tone it down a little bit on the open strings. They're being played so hard and loud that it sort of drowns out the beautiful bass notes.
Great cover! sounds alot like Craig D'andreas stile...if u know who that is....Looking forward for more compositions and just buy a pro mic for the recordings, trust me more people will view.
nice one dud...nice play..i think u should create ur own style ,step,dud u know what i mean...originality dud...if andy got drifting why dont u creat u know surfing something like that ...
Ok. Criticism: csaalert already wrote, that your song consists of several different song-ideas combined (and they ARE nice). The problem I see is that you don't really let them flow into one another but stop the 1st, then start the 2nd. Thus, there's a certain lack of "harmony" between the parts.
Secondly, I feel you didn't write an own song under McKee's influence but something you'd hope Mckee would do similarly.
Just wanna give you something to think about. You can't be perfect at first try.
to me, 2:19 starts a new song, as well as 3:14, and then you combine them all into one at 4:30 following with a brand new style at 5:05...all 5 parts are equally beautiful and deserve to be known by all!
Really awesome man, my only suggestion would be to play the open strings slightly quiter. Keep it up bro :D
bakedbean1232 1 year ago
You're pretty good!
btjohnson96 1 year ago
This is a really great composition man.
The only thing I would suggest is to tone it down a little bit on the open strings. They're being played so hard and loud that it sort of drowns out the beautiful bass notes.
Keep it up, you could go a long way!
CCPfilm 1 year ago
That was a positive surprise. Keep up the good work.
Lionshearth 1 year ago
Nice arms bro... ur ripped!
sdarms111 1 year ago
Great cover! sounds alot like Craig D'andreas stile...if u know who that is....Looking forward for more compositions and just buy a pro mic for the recordings, trust me more people will view.
jolderon2 1 year ago
Looking forward to hear a version with better audio XD.
This was GREAT!!!
bungade 1 year ago
sounds great!
skyke12 1 year ago
Your too good for that guitar.
3245james 1 year ago
Really really good man. Keep it up.
CyrusShadowBlade 1 year ago
congratulations on this btw. i really wasn't expecting anything but you produced something more than just able.
naryanr 1 year ago
i was blown away tbh, awesome stuff
ExodusCandy 1 year ago
I thought it was fantastic. Keep on writing songs.
Pissoutmyasshole 1 year ago
very nice :D that was good :D simple, effective and well executed :D keep on writing :D
Guitareben 1 year ago
my lovely part 4:30 ^^ and yeah...keep it up! :)
MySixSecret 1 year ago
@MySixSecret Thanks...
danielzechim1 1 year ago
Not bad man! I really like your tone as well.
YummyBananaFish 1 year ago
can you please make tabs? please i'd LOVE to learn this!!!!
sublimeloudog86 1 year ago
whats the tuning? this is fantastic!
Greenlandexplorer2 1 year ago
EBDGGD
danielzechim1 1 year ago
@danielzechim1 It really is amazing! I write stuff like this too!
Greenlandexplorer2 1 year ago
Nice!
Not great yet, but sure you'll get there :)
I'm a fan already
Ron451991 1 year ago
your guitar is a fender isn't it ?
Djams78960 1 year ago
@Djams78960 Nu mate, is a F310 Yamaha, is ok, but is not the proper guitar for this kind of job...
Cheers
danielzechim1 1 year ago
@danielzechim1
Ok it seems to be the same sound as my fender.
To much treble, not enough bass.
But in this case maybe it is caused by the quality of your mic.
Nice playing whatever.
Djams78960 1 year ago
nice one dud...nice play..i think u should create ur own style ,step,dud u know what i mean...originality dud...if andy got drifting why dont u creat u know surfing something like that ...
ansong666 1 year ago
Ok. Criticism: csaalert already wrote, that your song consists of several different song-ideas combined (and they ARE nice). The problem I see is that you don't really let them flow into one another but stop the 1st, then start the 2nd. Thus, there's a certain lack of "harmony" between the parts.
Secondly, I feel you didn't write an own song under McKee's influence but something you'd hope Mckee would do similarly.
Just wanna give you something to think about. You can't be perfect at first try.
DanGerMiel 1 year ago
to me, 2:19 starts a new song, as well as 3:14, and then you combine them all into one at 4:30 following with a brand new style at 5:05...all 5 parts are equally beautiful and deserve to be known by all!
csaalert247 1 year ago
very nice playing, man. this is really great
ShatOnATurtle10 1 year ago
fantastic! comparable to craig d' andrea! wonderful! post this on itunes!
Greenlandexplorer2 1 year ago
Putzzzzzz! Mandou muitoooo BEMMM Danielllll!!!!!!
Vou postar no meu twitter @Naybf =DDD
naybf2 1 year ago
that's great man... your skills are absolutely amazing... keep writing good music... greetings from greece... :)
nikonakias1 1 year ago
Incredible guitar playing man, really really nice :)
Favorited, hope it helps a bit to get you there, this vid deserves more views!
Greetings from Holland ^^
dennisHxC 1 year ago
@dennisHxC Cheers mate!!!
danielzechim1 1 year ago
this is great.
jerru91 1 year ago
Great skills dude !
Nice one...I like it :D
Finn666Troll 1 year ago
@Finn666Troll thanks dude...
danielzechim1 1 year ago