Untitled YouTube Rap Song Preview!

[mehquig]

It's catchy...

[darlynn12]

pretty darn good for a rough cut, with your voice higher it will be great. like someone else said though be sure to protect your rights to it when your done.

[captainfury2007]

Fucking sweet as hell!  I love it!

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[schmumpkin]

I think it's cool, partially becasuse of the courage it takes to just do something like this, but I like it for its simplicity and general free-spiritedness.

Not much in the way of critique there, huh?

I'm just a dorkmungus. :)

[1DRock37167]

Just an opinion, your vocals could be sharper and more forceful. The tune and beat are perfect:-)

[LuckyStrike502]

Yeah, they will be. This was just a preview, and not even the official recording. I recorded this portion in my garage. Haha. The final recording will probably be done in my bathroom or something, that way I can rap louder without creating a bunch of echoes. :-)

[boobtubious]

You might want to bring up the voice track a bit and lower the clapping, otherwise it sounds pretty cool!

[LuckyStrike502]

Oh yeah, this was just a rough idea of what I am doing. The finished project will sound much better. :-)

[OhCurt]

I love the rickroll reference.

Sounds like you have a healthy start.

Did we ever determine what in blazes I should do for my part? I'm so lost. LOL

[LuckyStrike502]

Haha - Thanks. I knew you'd like that part. I actually sent you a message on here about that. You might wanna go through your inbox and see. If it's not there, let me know and I will email you about it.

[OhCurt]

That inbox is currently a nightmare. Yeah, skip that route any chance you get. You have my regular email address, right?

(not putting it HERE though, obviously)

[LuckyStrike502]

I think I still have it. I'll check and see if it's still in my contacts, after the horrible laptop issue I had.

[wickedBABZ]

I like it!

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks! Are you gonna send me a short clip? :-)

[wickedBABZ]

I dunno... doing what? Like dancing or something?

[LuckyStrike502]

Whatever you'd like! Each clip I receive is going to be cut down to approx. 5 seconds or less, give or take a sec or two, so just make it short! Maybe you could dance, and look kind of thuggish and sag your pants or something, I dunno. LOL

[GramsandPapi]

Cool!! Blessings, Ang

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[BounceBananaCS]

Wow, how cool!

You CAN rap. I mean if this is no rappin' 3/4 of nowadays top 100 artists would have no job!

I am so curious!

Grtz! Dennis

[LuckyStrike502]

Good way to put it. A lot of those rappers out there nowadays say absolutely nothing but nonsense in their "music"! Haha

[Sugartalker]

Good job man! I look forward to the final!

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks! I hope it turns out like I want it to. I've never made a music video before!

[devotions4U]

U R very talented ;o)

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[Startwister]

Sounds very cool so far!

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[princessshortie29]

lol cant wait to hear the finished product

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[Grimace]

Sounds like it is coming along good I will send the clip to you on Sunday night

[LuckyStrike502]

Cool! I'll be looking forward to it!

[DILLIGAF333]

LMFAO that's dope. This is gonna be epic.

[LuckyStrike502]

LOL - Thanks. I'll make sure to include your honkey-ass in there somewhere!

[colorina1980]

Super cool!

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[IrishEyez01]

ha!..throwin my hands up in tha air! u sing good!

[LuckyStrike502]

Haha - Thanks!

[chevy77rracer]

sweet

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[occfan2008]

i like it Lucky

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[annikee59]

This is great!!!!!!!!!!

You gotta worldwide mike

You're the real Lucky Strike!

[LuckyStrike502]

Haha - Thanks! Did you get the webcam going yet?

[annikee59]

Not today, trying to get ground barriers for the homeless made & done! But tomorrow's agenda is WEBCAM!

[LuckyStrike502]

Cool! Good luck getting it going!

[amiddleagedlady]

woo hoo...sounds good

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[Menn019]

Hmm, the burb wasn't really needed...

[LuckyStrike502]

Oh, don't worry. I'll find a place for it!

[Menn019]

me sendin' ya a somtin' what iz PEHAPZ betta in ma opinion...

[929amaterasu]

and awesome song can't wait until the full song =)

[LuckyStrike502]

Thanks!

[929amaterasu]

=) can't wait for your rap song 5/5