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  • Was the Black Dahlia actually real? I just know it from LA Noire

  • @sonicawesomeness All too real. She was literally slaughtered, even LAPD Detectives were shoked. One of the biggest cases on the west coast of the century and it was never solved. The crime scene and morgue photos are almost too much to view.

  • I dunno, this wasn't that bad, yeah it could use some polishing but it did have an almost genuine "oldschool' thriller/horror feel to it...the sound was a little too crisp and like jason said there were a couple bloopers there but overall compared to some of the crap that makes it to tape and even the big screen this is a diamond in the rough.

  • I've seen "the room", so anything goes.

  • people comment 'shit' while their comment is not helping you improve ..

    SO, try to notice details like the sigaret she's holding isnt lighted

    then the music u need to make it smoothly overlapsing

    and add a bit more film when she get's butchered most people watch horror movies for that

  • OOOOOOH MYYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDD!!

  • Just bad...

  • this is the purest shit of life.

  • horrible

    just stop trying to make films

  • I think the killer is her father because he was a surgeon right?

  • I think it's not bad. Know the story of this crime, they never found the killer... maybe they should make a film about it. I would definately watch it.

  • PLEASE CHANGE YOUR THUMBNAIL PIC!!! THAT AINT HOT!

  • This was disturbing. She was murdered three years before I was born.

  • Good thinking - interesting concept. You have talent off course. Suggestion: If you should make the film again, start with the end of the film, the victims. It sets the tone of the film; then the recreation of the woman killer. The woman you have is ok, but make better use of her details, her hands, fingers, eyes etc. Also make more scenes from city streets, buildings, lights. Music is over powering, too much. Less is more. Music of one Cello would do it. Etc Good Luck

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  • FUCKING NASTY PIC GET IT OFF MY SUGGESTED VIDEOS

  • You have talent. I think this was well made up until the graphic photo. in my opinion I think you shouldve recreated it using special effects

  • Enough internet for today

  • nice music..Logic pro?

  • Was ist das für ein komischer Film?! Hat der einen Sinn?

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  • want to hear about Jesus and salvation??.....1-877-567-8989 or 1-210-491-5100!!.....john 3:3!

  • Somehow, this wound up on a CH. for The Carpenters! IT DOES NOT BELONG THERE! PULL IT OFF THAT CH.

  • what song is the first song?

  • I want to open a holiday camp like butlins there and use the ovens to cook great pizza`s and the gas chambers as sleeping quarters, once a week we will have a hang a jewish banker on the gallows!

  • Prostitution is bad

  • she was making underground porn and she was italian

  • The thumbnail scares the crap out of me

  • Can anyone tell me who this woman is (on the picture) and what this is about?

  • @IndianPeople123

    She was a hollywood actress wannabe ready to sleep with anyone who could help her and died, murdered, by some nut. The only compelling thing about her is that the killer was never found.

    She was a nobody.

  • @IndianPeople123 its about this woman who had a "promiscuous" lifestyle and someone cut off her torso and all her arms and legs and gave her a chelsey smile on her face. look up the black dahlia on wikipedia for full story

  • that's cool. I can dig what you are trying to do here. I just happen to be a fan of the history of L.A.'s biggest unsolved crime. that's all. you being creative is a license unto itself. have at it.

  • This is the shittiest film I ever did see.

  • @proverbialmonkey Gotta start somewhere... 

  • This is what the moslem Obammy is doing to America.

  • KONY 2012

  • what is this is it true if it is some1 went to work on hr boy

  • whot the acctres pls>??

  • L.A Werewolf Got to her... Poor Girl...

  • KONY 12

  • KONY 12

  • these true events happened in 1947. you have her getting into a 1961 Ford Falcon so everything from here on is bogus and means you are a chump. onlly someone young and impresionable would dig your bowel movement.

  • @futurestar586 I notice that too but I think it was suspose to be artistic more then Accuret... Too Tired to wrinte Correctly.... >.<

  • What the hell am I doing here!!!

  • lol im sure they didnt have Polaroid pics in the 1940s..lol

  • fucking retards this is FAKE she was cut in half dipshits

  • @pdawg1370 hahhahahahahaha

  • Ohhh It's My Mom 2:20

  • let me correct myself...they did have fingerprinting at this time which makes one say "hmmm odd how they can identify her but not the killer from all the prints on the envelope....strong smell of coverup".

  • too bad this happened before DNA and fingerprinting....look at all that evidence 1:57

  • whoops, i saw a modern door in the room, and also a BARCODE!!! A 1947 barcode hé?! Hmmm, pretty advanced back than... They even had laser-scanners in the 40's... Pfff, those ufo's and aliens really did a good job back than, in America! It's not fair... I also want advance things of your aliens! I also want a ufo crash in my garden, so the alien is mine!

  • The door in which she exited looks very 1990's

  • Very good video. except in that day and age... hair straighteners werent around

  • Very good except for the 1964 Ford Falcon. The murder occured in the 40's I think

  • Bitch was cut in half when they found her, dayum!

  • I clicked because I saw the scary thumbnail

  • SHE DESERVED IT

  • @johnwaynegacy94 was she a ho?

  • @johnwaynegacy94 woooooooooo be carefull

  • @johnwaynegacy94

    Your a sadistic bastard ,,arent you?

  • @Doamino41 YES. SHE DESERVED IT. B**** WASN'T IN THE KITCHEN.

  • @johnwaynegacy94 - LMAO... You jacked up mutha... marry me 

  • This coulda been creative if it weren't so arrogant.

  • Music from "Garage Band?"

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  • you neeed to STOP making things like this

  • please select a different thumbnail or something.

    I was watching something completely unrelated.... and each time at the end of an episode this horrible thumbnail shows up.

    on the video screen and on the side.

    I DO NOT WISH TO SEE STUFF LIKE THIS.

  • @stonestatue404 for the last 2 months, this video appears in the list of "related clips" on the right, no matter what I'm looking at (music, nature, politics, etc.)

  • @stonestatue404

    aww really?

    go calm your nerves

    theYNC.com

  • @6yka66RUS me and the internet are very well acquainted.

    I know that site and sites like that have always been around.,. think rotten.com.

    Still doesn't mean that I or others have to see that on a daily base by just browings unrelated things on youtube.

    boobs = bawww

    corpses = YAY

    welcome to youtube.

    Personally this just puts me off my tea.

    And i do love tea.

  • @stonestatue404 browsing*

  • I loved how american horror story had her in the show it made me love the show a million times more

  • R.I.P

    

  • STOP FUCKIN PUTTING THESE GRAPHIC PICTURES AS A THUMBNAIL WHEN IM WATCHING SOME OTHER VIDEO UR HIEDOUS CRAP IS ON THE RIGHT MAKING ME PUKE. FUCKING REPORTING THIS

  • @ktkalicka I was showing my kids an old brer rabbit cartoon and this was on the side, I accidently clicked on it before and had to rush to stop the video before my 3 and 5 year old daughters saw it... fucking redic.

  • @srosello84 LOL wait...this video didn't show anything gross until 2:16 and you had to rush to stop it? And your daughters saw what? Don't be such a drama queen...

  • @ktkalicka THIS

  • @ktkalicka Good luck with that. :P

  • geez, what A WUSS..

    that picture was all over the newspapers.

    it's HISTORY.

    (and i think it's intriguing)

    if you don't want to see anything "real",

    then go back to watching sesame street until you think you're grown up enuf to watch it

    @ktkalicka

  • @dudessIsMYnameDammit It's not about being a "wuss" it's unsettling to see a thumbnail of a mutilated woman when I'm trying to watch a completely unrelated video. Nice spelling of "enough" by the way asshole.

  • @pheenixvansparks ur filming skills are horrible and please stop misleading people with that picture.. for god's sake dont make any more movies. the ones presently made are shitty enough lol. too bad the killer didnt chop you in half instead of that innocent girl

  • People say the more you know it the less scarier it GETS, wtf it GETS even More SCARIER!

  • What music was that?!?!

  • a sick muthafucker did it...what else ya need to know

  • The mystery is all but over. That man whose father was a doctor (and therefore was an expert in the art of dissection) wrote a book in which it all but proves it was him. I believe he had also died in prison for another murder.

  • i hate when im in the wierd part of youtube

  • I would like to find out more about what happened.

  • what a waste of time...

  • LA Noire was one of the few games i played where I fucking hated the character you had to use.

  • i m detective phelps badge 1247

  • @jagmag123 LOL

  • The music in the beginning is sampled from Fort Minor - Believe Me.

  • @ig0rCV fort minor sampled it from a preset on garage band.

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  • LA Noire

  • fags werent tipped back then lol plug in the corner

  • So funny! they left a hair straightener on the table!

  • You should read "Black Dahlia Avenger" for no doubt the very best account of this tragic crime,the fact that it was one of many similar crimes at the time and a fascinating expose by an LAPD detective. Awesome book!

  • Well done. How did it do in the festival?

  • Great music- really adds to the tension.

  • @bjshalts

    wasnt this used as a sample by fort minor? guess the songs name was "believe me"...

  • The TRUE Story is a LOT More Frighting, Who knows who the Maniac was?

  • @TheWerewolf64 Garrett Mason

  • @TheWerewolf64 I am betting it was either some married hollywood big shot or polotician. Either way , whoever it was, definately (beyond) hated women due to mommy issues or she had some info on them that enraged them, judging from the crime scene photos. No street level thug mutilates someone like that.

  • @TheWerewolf64 Orson Welles

  • It's not the kind of death I would even wish on my worst enemy, seriously.

  • sirrom835 they did indeed have ways to straighten and curl their hair!

    look up history of cosmetology! :D

  • garageband

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  • what's the name of this song? i really like it ! can anyone please tell me..?

  • the thumbnail is a photo of her face when the police found her

  • This is sad. Music is fucking awesome, though. I love the beat/rhythm/melody.

  • @SleepyDisso the music is just samples from garage band off of a mac -__-

  • @robertjlo so, its still awesome. Music is music.

  • this is fake... oh yeah, FUCK OFF!!

    

  • The film starring Luci Arnaz, "Who is the Black Dahlia", sure left me with a fair idea as to who the killer was.

  • No one can know and no one will even know what really happened to her on her last days. Let her rest in peace.

  • AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRR­RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR­RRRRRRRVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV­VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVYYYYYYYYYYYYY­YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

    

  • the thumbnail would make a perfect popup screamer pic

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  • the real killer is / was the Doctor..down in L.A. many know this...he is deceased now...

  • What Eliot Ness took to his grave we will never know!

  • repetitive music and misunderstanding of what really happened to her., and who was her

  • I hope you didn't get a good grade for this mess. It was so poorly put together, even for an art film. Too choppy

  • LA Noire brought me here

  • random pictures and a woman getting into some clothes,i had to fast forward it coz iw as bored,im not being a cunt,just honest :)

  • lol wtf 999,999 view

  • 1,000,000 view! SUCK IT!

  • @MrCactus42 take away the pic of beaten girl and u got 1000 views XD

  • Anyone else the 999,999th viewer :D ?

  • i'm the 999.999th viewer... nobody cares and neither do i really but it was worth mentioning i think :)

  • Please, please, please, if you want to do crime films, contact me. Th e gay angle does NOT appeal to the audience you want. I understand what you were trying to do, but no straight man would find that chick sexy at all.

  • The person that made this is an uncreative worthless, moron. Pathetic. I know you think you are the next big movie director, but will you please face the fact that you are a moron, with no creativity, and that noone should be subjected to the smears of diarrhea you put onto film. This is not bad, it is shockingly pathetic. Please stop.

  • Swag

    -Don Rubix

  • Reminds of L.A Noire

  • black dahlia by hu

  •  That sucks.

  • This a well done short. Recognize the music too. I've been meaning to read the book based on the investigation, and have been curious about the movie as well. I'm not sure about the whole storu on the Black Dahlia. Off to do some research.

  • @LilithAmadea This is is the absolute biggest waste of filim I have ever seen! and I just watched journey 2: the mysterious island!

  • it was honestly not bad, i do have a few tips for you though;

    if you don't smoke, don't use a cigarette in the movie... you either light it or leave it out... ;)

    And i would watch the music, you restarted it at some point and then put other song in, but you did no fade out-in things with makes the sound really choppy, which does not do your film justice.

    You have a eye for it! I enjoyed it and you gave me a few ideas, so i am more then thankful to you for posting this!

  • Ich galube du hast talent für einen guten Regisseur! Übung macht den Meister! Weiter so!

  • She was a slut. 

  • I like that one part

  • Looks like todays headlines.....looks like not much has changed in the so called "evolution of time"..man will continue to be the same.....no matter what time period it comes from.....

  • A murder mystery novel -The Black Dahlia- speculated that the mystery WAS solved, BUT that the facts were so horrible, the perversion of the murderer so awful, that not only did the revolted detective KILL the man, but destroyed ALL the evidence -and the man's body- by fire, and officially declared the mystery unsolved.

  • note, next you do a short film that takes place in the 1940s, remove all electrical flat irons shit you can only find now. seriously??

  • Elizabeth Short, aka the Black Dahlia was butchered in Jack the Ripper fashion, she was 22. Her 1 true reported love was Army Air Force Major Matt Gordon who died in India on August 10, 1945.

    An aspiring actress it is believed she was a virgin. The coroner found while doing her autopsy that she was incapable of engaging in sexual intercourse because she had the undeveloped genitalia of a 4 year old girl, which may have been the motive for her murder.

  • @Dem0D1ck I just looked on Wikipedia, and it said the infantile genitalia was a one of many rumors from this unsolved case. The most gruesome thing to me, besides her being cut in half, drained of all her blood, then cleansed and arranged, was that her mouth was sliced all the way back to her ears. Whoever did it had nearly a week to torture this poor soul, and there is no telling what she had to endure before death finally came.

  • @GWParadise And this is what we call an "Organized Murder". If he did that and nobody has caught him, he was probably hired to do it from the inside of the law or either he was a very smart guy. She was in the wronging too. Either she pissed someone off or she didn't give up mainly sex or money. And then she was hung with 3-braid rope onto her legs and was fed feces. That's some devastating stuff.

  • @LatinoNinja01 That's horrible, but thanks for the information, it is more than I knew.

  • @GWParadise Try sites other than Wiki. I found one that showed a photocopy of the coroners autopsy report, and he does state in the report that she had the undeveloped genitalia of a child, so I take that as more than rumor.

    None the less, it was a brutal crime, not dissimilar to Jack the Ripper.

  • @Dem0D1ck Thanks, I will dig deeper before I offer my unexpert opinion. It's hard to find much that is really shocking nowadays, thanks to the mind numbing from television and video games, but this is unbelievably brutal.

  • @GWParadise  It's not about finding shocking. Even experienced coroners back in 1947 weren't shocked by much. Murder isn't any different today than it was back then, nor is the brutality of some serial killers. The difference is they didn't know they might be dealing with a serial killer, but we now do.

  • @Dem0D1ck

    so no one had conceived of 'serial killers' before the 2000's???

  • @jcfbell3001 Ever hear of Jack the Ripper. Oh, mentioned him in my first reply. So to answer your question, No, serial killers were conceived of before the 2000's.

  • I used this same Garageband track back in 7th and 8th grade.

  • my name is "Tahlia" :c Im scared

  • I thought the front door looked too modern. But interesting.

  • I didn't lknow they had hair straighteners and curlers back then (; 0:35 lol

  • @sirrom835 Uh, actually they did.

  • @tamonettX500 Lol I know. I read an article about it a few years back.

  • The cinematographer looks amazing!

  • he took advantage of people with addictions and problems so he could get close enough to kill them s:

  • What's with mood music in films...

  • Truly tasteless and stupid thumbnail.  I suggest you change it.

  • LA Noire

  • 1 death is a tragedy...

    1 million is a statistic...

  • @Iforthegood Jeffrey dahmer photos were terrible! I'm interested in crime and murders and was googling him. I went to google images and what I saw made me want to cry. It was awful.