@YoungDirector100 They are alright for 14 years old, but I found them a bit boring. Try and make your scenes nice and clean, cut the wind and the audio out where there shouldn't be, make the camera nice & still and speak up loud. Try and make an interesting plot to it, not just a story if that makes sense. Keep making films, you should be able to make a career out of it if you keep practicing.
It's more effective to be more subtle with the music/sounds and go loud at key times to add intensity to a part and then break back to quiet. . Rather than to have it blasting all the way through.
this is really good, it would of been just a bit better if you had a storyline of some sort. I loved how you used the camera and also when you ran... i will use that technique:)
great video all the tecniques were sweet you just need some sort of story line but other than that great video im in the process of making a scary movie trailer i wrote. also good acting thats my problem in my movie is actors this will be practice for something bigger
ah, i got a project about techniques right now, and it's really tough!!!! i'm learning from ur video ^__^ so it's ok if u didnt develop ur story, the editing was nice...my nose is bleeding right now!!!!
btw, what did u use to edit this? premiere or vegas? or something else? :P
Its quite good, shame there isn't really any story line. The camera work was impressive, love the sounds but maybe a bit wierd at the end. It did get boring as it was kinda just a person walking with a sudden thing at the end, but overall i give it a 4 star, pretty good. Just work on story line, but brilliant start and end with the credits
There were many nice filming techniques but i didnt at all understand if there was a story and if there was wat it was about except and baby (i assume because i heard crying)
You have some very good pan shots in here. All in all, this is pretty awesome. However, the only drawback I can see is the lighting. I like the dark, but it's a little too dark at times.
Check out my video called 'horror movie' on my page. I spent a long time working out the lighting and I still fucked it up. Lighting is the biggest bitch of them all.
I definately have to agree with everyone saying that it was creepy. The sound/music helped a lot, the angles were very ominous as well. I would like to see more of a plot on your next one. Nice work though.
and yeah, thats my brother. if i remember correctly, i think he wore it so that you can see his head lol since it was so dark and such, it gave some contrast.
I like this short, the use of sound is very good and vital to a piece with no dialogue, angle wise I like the opener and the garden sequences, youve created a creep atmosphere thats for sure. My only minor gripe was the headwear and the sequence upstairs, the B&W mode couldnt deal with the light and I thought the white was too intense in places to be effective. Full marks for credits and for sound!! Good job mate!
Excellent fades, effects, camera angles, zooms in/outs, sound placement....I loved it. I see what you were going for, you got it, and I get it. Well done.
OK, wow anthony that scared the bejeebers out of me. My room mate was just listening to the sound and it freaked her out. Honestly I think this was done really well, the sound, the black and white, everything. It literally sent shivers down my spine and my room mate says she's going to have nightmares from the baby crying. Honestly you freaked us out.
at first i thought the kid was supposed to be a ninja running from cops
DeadlyLizard98 1 year ago
I dont get it. Whats the story line?
bunnygirl755 1 year ago
@bunnygirl755 there isnt one really. lol
basically, the kids being chased by something. but thats it. haha
TonyFizzle 1 year ago
@TonyFizzle hahaha ok i get it now thaxs :)
bunnygirl755 1 year ago
look at my short films on my channel.They say i have skills for a 14 year old
YoungDirector100 1 year ago
@YoungDirector100 They are alright for 14 years old, but I found them a bit boring. Try and make your scenes nice and clean, cut the wind and the audio out where there shouldn't be, make the camera nice & still and speak up loud. Try and make an interesting plot to it, not just a story if that makes sense. Keep making films, you should be able to make a career out of it if you keep practicing.
98nfsmw98 8 months ago
It's more effective to be more subtle with the music/sounds and go loud at key times to add intensity to a part and then break back to quiet. . Rather than to have it blasting all the way through.
dannyg120 1 year ago
this is really good, it would of been just a bit better if you had a storyline of some sort. I loved how you used the camera and also when you ran... i will use that technique:)
dani9babe 1 year ago
@dani9babe
thanks! yeah i agree, we were just shooting for techniques. didnt really use a story line lol
TonyFizzle 1 year ago
wow man nice vid!! keep it coming :)
DadeMorton 1 year ago
good camera angles
1Filmproducer 1 year ago
hey this guy has hair like mine haha well check out my video its kind of like silent hill it is called
waking dead short film by indyjonesfan
em23xl 1 year ago
check out my vids!
WorkshedProduction 1 year ago
very creative, much sound effects....but interesting to see whats NEXT!!!!
jichokwavijana 1 year ago
Good one!
Check out mine!
JBHfilmProduction 1 year ago
what song?
BARFMCBUFIS 1 year ago
great video all the tecniques were sweet you just need some sort of story line but other than that great video im in the process of making a scary movie trailer i wrote. also good acting thats my problem in my movie is actors this will be practice for something bigger
HSCircus 2 years ago
I cried
Latincitizen 2 years ago
Kinda cool, needs a storyline of some sort to make all that good camerawork effective.Make more wth a bit more planning.
ltjplanet 2 years ago
GREAT FILM! 5/5!
MrBlomu 2 years ago
thats was mad and scary too
cheekiilebo 2 years ago
lol you really a gree with me...? You guys are kindof cute
magicllydelicious 2 years ago
I don't know what this video is.. but I love it.
:) Great stuff
TheStuartCarson 2 years ago
luv this video dude please make more!
is it ok if you can tell me the name of the song? or did you make the song yourself?
Destroyer3012 2 years ago
i think the first song is from saw, the rest i cut up from other sources to make The track lol
TonyFizzle 2 years ago
cool video
mormaninc315 2 years ago
It was aight
magicllydelicious 2 years ago
yeah i agree. lol
TonyFizzle 2 years ago
Nice atmosphere. Want more story.
paleopathologist 2 years ago
are u filipinos? nice cinematography, but, hmm, not so sure with the story line....it's a great short still...keep it up...
catcherintherai 2 years ago
yeah we are. haha
half, and half italian.
yeah i know theres no story, it was more of a video for technique than story. next time we will work a story into it.
thanks!
TonyFizzle 2 years ago
oh c00l, mixed...
ah, i got a project about techniques right now, and it's really tough!!!! i'm learning from ur video ^__^ so it's ok if u didnt develop ur story, the editing was nice...my nose is bleeding right now!!!!
btw, what did u use to edit this? premiere or vegas? or something else? :P
catcherintherai 2 years ago
used sony vegas 7 i think =]
ha and im honored you are learning from my video lol
good luck!
TonyFizzle 2 years ago
Its quite good, shame there isn't really any story line. The camera work was impressive, love the sounds but maybe a bit wierd at the end. It did get boring as it was kinda just a person walking with a sudden thing at the end, but overall i give it a 4 star, pretty good. Just work on story line, but brilliant start and end with the credits
crazyguy0505 2 years ago
Hehe we seem to have made the same kind of ending for our amateur horror movies (cf: the legs sliding in a room)...
five stars!
hobstad 2 years ago
some of these shots but there is no storyline which makes the movie boring
thegreatbrandony 2 years ago
How do you get all the scary sound fx? Website, CD, What?
lethimlive 2 years ago
that was crap. it had no story and its very bad editing. die, or redo it!
JordanOMEN 2 years ago
Hey! That was kewl! =P
cooliodude554 2 years ago
There were many nice filming techniques but i didnt at all understand if there was a story and if there was wat it was about except and baby (i assume because i heard crying)
Missgonnabe07 3 years ago
eh, it was alright. lighting made it hard to see. and it was very confusing of what was happening
okokokokok23 3 years ago
this is awesome
msc375 3 years ago
I'm absolutely impressed!!! That was really amazing - you have an amazing talent. Great work !!!
AMON240379 3 years ago
That was great! (:
AbsolutelyDee 3 years ago
It looks like you were trying every film technique all at once. Tell a story next time.
RetardedMyth 3 years ago
Nice! very unnerving.
I liked it. I agree with FixxerAce
MannyKimchi 3 years ago
You have some very good pan shots in here. All in all, this is pretty awesome. However, the only drawback I can see is the lighting. I like the dark, but it's a little too dark at times.
Check out my video called 'horror movie' on my page. I spent a long time working out the lighting and I still fucked it up. Lighting is the biggest bitch of them all.
Keep going with this!
Blarb2 3 years ago
I didn't get it...
what was that? o.o
kbloX360 3 years ago
Really Nice Job ! When's the next one ?
vaiodesony 3 years ago
I definately have to agree with everyone saying that it was creepy. The sound/music helped a lot, the angles were very ominous as well. I would like to see more of a plot on your next one. Nice work though.
filmstr 3 years ago
very cool....great job guys...
equil1984 3 years ago
wow lol you did good! it makes me feel scared, i agree with that othe rguy take that thing off your head!
Munti93 3 years ago
well all i can say is best i have seen so far ...only thing i can say i didnt like was what u had on your head u should of took that off..
lildontknow 3 years ago
ha really? you liked it? ha thanks!
and yeah, thats my brother. if i remember correctly, i think he wore it so that you can see his head lol since it was so dark and such, it gave some contrast.
TonyFizzle 3 years ago
I like this short, the use of sound is very good and vital to a piece with no dialogue, angle wise I like the opener and the garden sequences, youve created a creep atmosphere thats for sure. My only minor gripe was the headwear and the sequence upstairs, the B&W mode couldnt deal with the light and I thought the white was too intense in places to be effective. Full marks for credits and for sound!! Good job mate!
FixxerAce 3 years ago
nice! made me jump! =3
zombiekapper 3 years ago
Not bad at all. If I were to be a little nit-picky I'd say lose the headband, but other than that GREAT JOB!
Nightrider1367 3 years ago
Hey! I'm just writing a movie called run!!
;D
Good work!
gagagagn3 3 years ago
awsome!!! i watched this with lights off at about 2 in the morning with headphones,pretty damm freeky...nice try good luck woth any other films
emojman 3 years ago
damn good.
whats the songs?
VinceEmoRocker 3 years ago
very cool, that was scary for our first shoot, congrats
Jakemightus 3 years ago
Excellent fades, effects, camera angles, zooms in/outs, sound placement....I loved it. I see what you were going for, you got it, and I get it. Well done.
wmshannonireland 3 years ago
first shot was nice
sanderjames 3 years ago
somewhat good but hard to understand
cheeseandcrackers6 3 years ago
dude! i loveeeeeee this effects it was wiked will be gr8 if u make a storyline n everything..
where did u get the music from? if u dnt mind telling me! where it zooms in on the dog!
oh and loving the camera angels where u pan across the rooms! gr8 stuff!!
xlukeybabeyx 3 years ago
Good shit man. Not lying. I want to become like you. lol. I'm just starting to get into film making.
boardernerd228 4 years ago
OK, wow anthony that scared the bejeebers out of me. My room mate was just listening to the sound and it freaked her out. Honestly I think this was done really well, the sound, the black and white, everything. It literally sent shivers down my spine and my room mate says she's going to have nightmares from the baby crying. Honestly you freaked us out.
punkwc 4 years ago
ha thanks Amanda!! =] im glad it actually did scare you guys hahaha i was affraid it wasnt really going to! =]
hahaha im sorry your roommate is going to have nightmares now though lol but thanks =D hahaha it served its purpose i guess lol
TonyFizzle 4 years ago
awesome!
yep.
JUSINJUSIN 4 years ago
oh my freeaaaaking goooooosh!!!!!
that was AMAZING!!
SO PRO. WOW..:speechless:.
haha that's kinda scared me a bit.
the editing and they way u filmed it was perfect.
good job to u and vince!
make more! =DD
love it.
dorkiipnay 4 years ago
haha thanks! yeah we will be making more! maybe next time you will come outside and film WITH US lol =]
TonyFizzle 4 years ago