Another thing, and please just take this as creative critiscism, but make sure to let more rattle into your voice, you're speaking very clear for a girl with blood in her lungs. But, a lot better then some stuff I've seen, and you look like a young Anna Paquin. Very pretty.
Yeah, hate to be mean, but the doctor did kind of ruin it. Also, get some better sound equipment, so you don't have to act over the background. Be much softer, you're on your deathbed. Pretty good, love your "Broken" cover vid too.
fail
amandacorbin2010 7 months ago
sad
ringcross5 10 months ago
awesome i love it sorry about your wife though :,(
kaseyinkase 1 year ago
wats this song called?
YeenaXiong 2 years ago
Very good! Thanks for posting!
AbiH31 2 years ago
This is bad
tara6478 3 years ago 2
I think you have a malpractice suite here. A dildo for 20 minutes a day would have been the proper treatment and she would have lived.
britney1669 3 years ago
Is this ironic?
andoruJapan 3 years ago 2
sounded more like whooping cough
jackbollocks12345 4 years ago
LMFAO! There has been a terribe-uh spirit in the land. OMG soo funny that doctor kills me XD
DessDess 4 years ago 3
I also agree. Would love a remake without that doctor. Sometimes you can touch up the part where you can tell u cut off the camera.
mylifeisdance327 4 years ago
Another thing, and please just take this as creative critiscism, but make sure to let more rattle into your voice, you're speaking very clear for a girl with blood in her lungs. But, a lot better then some stuff I've seen, and you look like a young Anna Paquin. Very pretty.
Halo4Lyf 5 years ago
Yeah, hate to be mean, but the doctor did kind of ruin it. Also, get some better sound equipment, so you don't have to act over the background. Be much softer, you're on your deathbed. Pretty good, love your "Broken" cover vid too.
Halo4Lyf 5 years ago
Great acting but the doctor sucked. Other than that it was good.
ArT2Oo0 5 years ago