Its good, especially the dialogue, it flows naturally, well written, my only advice would be to get the main actor guy to tone it down a bit, he's a little bit too jumpy and all "huh!" way too often, Overall GREAT JOB, this is really funny and well done - good idea!
"... in the... place". All in all pretty sweet, I liked the opening sequence a lot... with the happy go lucky music. the only thing that I didn't like was how many times you crossed the line in the conversation with Chelsea and George. Other than that... AWESOME!
That was awesome. Very original and extremely clever (I love satire). When George told me he lost some weight, I didn't expect to see him that lean...very nice, Jorge! Loved the cameo of Mr. Cahill as well lol
Very funny satire! Loved the Fiske Guide and the allusion to a place starting with "Va" where the people like community service and partying...." (Or do I read too much into the text?) I look forward to the third film!
I love how you even credited Bob the bug...
theonlycuregirl 3 years ago
Its good, especially the dialogue, it flows naturally, well written, my only advice would be to get the main actor guy to tone it down a bit, he's a little bit too jumpy and all "huh!" way too often, Overall GREAT JOB, this is really funny and well done - good idea!
ryanchanfilms 3 years ago
the first shot of the sky makes me smile. it is so simple...yet so beautiful. great eye
HusseydayProductions 3 years ago
"... in the... place". All in all pretty sweet, I liked the opening sequence a lot... with the happy go lucky music. the only thing that I didn't like was how many times you crossed the line in the conversation with Chelsea and George. Other than that... AWESOME!
meeeeeeewith7es 4 years ago
That was awesome. Very original and extremely clever (I love satire). When George told me he lost some weight, I didn't expect to see him that lean...very nice, Jorge! Loved the cameo of Mr. Cahill as well lol
Shuto301 4 years ago
Jivesh and I made sure the bug was still alive! He's kept the bug as a pet I think :P
hannahgrace90 4 years ago
Very funny satire! Loved the Fiske Guide and the allusion to a place starting with "Va" where the people like community service and partying...." (Or do I read too much into the text?) I look forward to the third film!
gregdiamondutube 4 years ago
I'm glad you noticed all that. it was there! Hehe :)
hannahgrace90 4 years ago