Poetic Justice

[samOFblorx]

That was amazing! I like the end, '"Call a medic! Send for a scholar!" he moaned, As he lay on pulpit stairs. But from hill to dale, not one was found. And all he had was prayers.'

Very nicely done.

[samOFblorx]

5* and favorite, btw.

[18Porchmonkey]

Wow, as a guy who has taken creative writing courses at university for the last three years i got to say well done. I've tried my hand at poetry and you have completely out done my attempts. Good work sir.

[MMA]

Your poem is quite good. These days, we are bombarded by lazy, spliced-up sentences masquerading as poetry. I'm glad that talented poets like you still exist.

[6stringbadger]

I've watched this video 3 times in a row and now it's in my Favorites. I don't know much about poetry, but I know what I like. You should write more of these.

[dashpoet]

Extended limerick? That sounded like a proper poem. My favourite lines:

"Wise work, my flock!" he cawed to gathered folk,

"To turn the sinners into kindling!"

Fierce, in a funny way..

[aZeroGodist]

nice job, but why would he call for a doctor to save his life, if his going to join jesus-god in heavenland. Shouldn't his flock gather around and wish him bon-voyage.

[WizardJim]

Hypocrisy among the faithful? Egads, no!

[infernalikeness]

I really have such a hard time with satire, but you are a brilliant master of the art. Wonderful work!

[dawnofreason]

Great!

[mconn2112]

Fucking brilliant Jim!

[thunderpants10]

Righteous!

[Bleatmop]

WizardJim is great.

Poetic virtuoso

That is he

[WizardJim]

Haiku skills are great,

Much may be said in three lines,

But I like more room.

[joebot1]

THAT WAS FUCKING ACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

SERIOUSLY!!!!!, awesome man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

I only wish you could sing, I woudl have use for you as a lyricist in my band lol.

[WizardJim]

I was in a male-voice choir for a while, but I doubt your band would benefit from a resounding Welsh Baritone.

[joebot1]

"Ahem" sounds great "ehem".

Joking, that actually sounds really interesting, would you possibly be up for some kind of collaboration in the future?

Interesting you should mention that, I herd Christopher Lee singing recently, he has a really interesting voice, with the accent and all. He is a baritone, you would think he is a bass, but most of the time, he sounds like a bass, then he pulls of a Pavarotti style high a or something lol

[ivarbt]

applause!

[PursuitOfReality]

Cool poem.

[DansBLACKFLAG]

Poem was nice

Nice use of Tank! by The Seatbelts

I love Yoko Kanno

[buzzausa]

Sweet.....poetic....just....

Well done Wizard....well done.

[thatgaybloke]

Very good. I'll go and check out Rowan's channel again - I thought I was subscribed to him.

[RowanFortuneWood]

That was brilliantly hilarious. Thanks for the poem and for supporting artistic freedom.

[WizardJim]

Cheers!

[Bobbiethejean]

Very poignant.

[angryislander56]

Not rusty at all!

Love the hep cat closing.

[ReginmundEsq]

Samuel Johnson much? Excellent, 5*

[WizardJim]

Thank you, though the only comparison I would admit to is that I too may one day develop gout.

[SkitISTkreig]

Very good.