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From: JackMoranRain
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  • U killed my ears u r that bad

  • ur good but not a good voice :/

  • You are a genius. Make more!

  • get a mic and re-record it. sounds beast

  • yo

  • keep it up bro gd stuff

  • love the lyrics from Rain/ he could be the next household name/ up on the charts/ like lil wayne/ he speeks from his heart/ got a lot on his brain/ makes my flows sound like a fart/ but he flows like a train/ cuz from the very start/ his rhymes keep on track/ his words aint half price/ like yo local walmart/ whatever he's got i lack/ he sounds very nice/ got better lines than halmark/ makes it seem/ like a walk in the park/ but i can only dream/ to have that kind of bark/ n make my fuckin mark!

  • ha 2 Justin BIEVER fans ha try listenin to REAL muzic maybe !! if ya kno what that is ! prolly not ha

    dont let the gagas let ya down, FLAG ALL JB VIDZ!!!

  • Exelent job for this song.

  • @MJibs26 you peace of shit

  • BAAADD

  • THIS IS AWESOME AND UR CUTE THUMBS UP FOR YOU

    xoxo Nina

  • dam, your rap was DOPE!

  • nice song and good voice but not the right music

  • you must to be a rapper:D

  • Good job. This is a good song. 

  • its aight but i really think you should work on your delivery

  • dam, ur cute

  • Nice cut.

  • Nice job, I feel this way a lot to.

  • 4 stars man this shit is awesome, lyrics and flow. Reason for missing star is that you use other people's beats and i think if you would start making your own beats you would be a god damn legend bro.

  • IF U LIKE THIS CHECK OUT ZDSA159

  • oi blad this is absolutely sick ima download this shit lolz wicked blad safe

  • goooood shitt. im american an usually when i hear ppl wht accents rap it sounds shitty lol no offence to u or anyone else its just my preference but i think you flow real nice you shouldnt b afraid to say shit real loud or emphasize shit you think is important sounds really good tho keep it up

  • why is this better then eminem... take it to a studio dude you got potential

  • @ArT2Oo0 thats the dumbest thing i ever heard, this is nothing compared to eminem, im not hating on this guy, im just saying eminem would shit down his throat

  • one of the most powerful things I've ever heard. "and so for hours from my tower, I get showered with sour flowers" this is a beautiful line. some more which stood out to me were : "I cant give another fucking smile or a nod it just aint in me" and "But disguise just layers of anecdotes and stolen quotes so inside i can hide" I love your rhymes, and think that your flow is improving too, it went perfectly with this beat. this is the best so far to me. Make more!

  • @thecoreysforever you need to listen to more stuff man if that was one of the most powerful things youve ever had

  • pretty good

  • pretty good man, rode the beat well, but you should try to think of some lines that are really poignant, the lyrics were good but not many lines really stood out to me, its hard i know but u wanna try to say something that hasnt been said or say it in a different and maybe better way na mean, sorry to be critical but hopefully u value honest feedback, know i do, keep at it, peace

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