love the lyrics from Rain/ he could be the next household name/ up on the charts/ like lil wayne/ he speeks from his heart/ got a lot on his brain/ makes my flows sound like a fart/ but he flows like a train/ cuz from the very start/ his rhymes keep on track/ his words aint half price/ like yo local walmart/ whatever he's got i lack/ he sounds very nice/ got better lines than halmark/ makes it seem/ like a walk in the park/ but i can only dream/ to have that kind of bark/ n make my fuckin mark!
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4 stars man this shit is awesome, lyrics and flow. Reason for missing star is that you use other people's beats and i think if you would start making your own beats you would be a god damn legend bro.
goooood shitt. im american an usually when i hear ppl wht accents rap it sounds shitty lol no offence to u or anyone else its just my preference but i think you flow real nice you shouldnt b afraid to say shit real loud or emphasize shit you think is important sounds really good tho keep it up
@ArT2Oo0 thats the dumbest thing i ever heard, this is nothing compared to eminem, im not hating on this guy, im just saying eminem would shit down his throat
one of the most powerful things I've ever heard. "and so for hours from my tower, I get showered with sour flowers" this is a beautiful line. some more which stood out to me were : "I cant give another fucking smile or a nod it just aint in me" and "But disguise just layers of anecdotes and stolen quotes so inside i can hide" I love your rhymes, and think that your flow is improving too, it went perfectly with this beat. this is the best so far to me. Make more!
pretty good man, rode the beat well, but you should try to think of some lines that are really poignant, the lyrics were good but not many lines really stood out to me, its hard i know but u wanna try to say something that hasnt been said or say it in a different and maybe better way na mean, sorry to be critical but hopefully u value honest feedback, know i do, keep at it, peace
U killed my ears u r that bad
LaMotteSwag 4 months ago
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ur good but not a good voice :/ and bit to fast
MGxiCarbonzz 4 months ago
ur good but not a good voice :/
MGxiCarbonzz 4 months ago
You are a genius. Make more!
PaperRosesx 6 months ago 2
get a mic and re-record it. sounds beast
tombeals69 8 months ago
yo
iamtinyt 8 months ago
keep it up bro gd stuff
balzein 11 months ago
love the lyrics from Rain/ he could be the next household name/ up on the charts/ like lil wayne/ he speeks from his heart/ got a lot on his brain/ makes my flows sound like a fart/ but he flows like a train/ cuz from the very start/ his rhymes keep on track/ his words aint half price/ like yo local walmart/ whatever he's got i lack/ he sounds very nice/ got better lines than halmark/ makes it seem/ like a walk in the park/ but i can only dream/ to have that kind of bark/ n make my fuckin mark!
nickatnight287 1 year ago
ha 2 Justin BIEVER fans ha try listenin to REAL muzic maybe !! if ya kno what that is ! prolly not ha
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JamesDeansGirl1 1 year ago 2
Exelent job for this song.
MJibs26 1 year ago
@MJibs26 you peace of shit
Nuclear793 1 year ago
BAAADD
Kuschberg 1 year ago
THIS IS AWESOME AND UR CUTE THUMBS UP FOR YOU
xoxo Nina
TheUsgirlzpictures 1 year ago 4
dam, your rap was DOPE!
PASALOBIEN402 1 year ago
nice song and good voice but not the right music
apocalypticsoldier1 1 year ago 2
you must to be a rapper:D
Espeedy7 1 year ago
Good job. This is a good song.
manfredicomposer 1 year ago 2
its aight but i really think you should work on your delivery
Brendank420 1 year ago 2
dam, ur cute
Exogenesix19 1 year ago 11
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GAY AS FUCK< FUCKING BRITISH FAGGOT!
RocHardMusik 1 year ago
Nice cut.
kailabreece 1 year ago
Nice job, I feel this way a lot to.
PWBMusic 1 year ago
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YoundWones 1 year ago
4 stars man this shit is awesome, lyrics and flow. Reason for missing star is that you use other people's beats and i think if you would start making your own beats you would be a god damn legend bro.
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TheNick2222 1 year ago
oi blad this is absolutely sick ima download this shit lolz wicked blad safe
1234567loading 1 year ago
goooood shitt. im american an usually when i hear ppl wht accents rap it sounds shitty lol no offence to u or anyone else its just my preference but i think you flow real nice you shouldnt b afraid to say shit real loud or emphasize shit you think is important sounds really good tho keep it up
sk8r3733t 1 year ago
why is this better then eminem... take it to a studio dude you got potential
ArT2Oo0 1 year ago 2
@ArT2Oo0 thats the dumbest thing i ever heard, this is nothing compared to eminem, im not hating on this guy, im just saying eminem would shit down his throat
ZsoltKovacs3 1 year ago
one of the most powerful things I've ever heard. "and so for hours from my tower, I get showered with sour flowers" this is a beautiful line. some more which stood out to me were : "I cant give another fucking smile or a nod it just aint in me" and "But disguise just layers of anecdotes and stolen quotes so inside i can hide" I love your rhymes, and think that your flow is improving too, it went perfectly with this beat. this is the best so far to me. Make more!
thecoreysforever 1 year ago 4
@thecoreysforever you need to listen to more stuff man if that was one of the most powerful things youve ever had
Somuchbetter123 1 year ago
pretty good
TapatioGnome 1 year ago
pretty good man, rode the beat well, but you should try to think of some lines that are really poignant, the lyrics were good but not many lines really stood out to me, its hard i know but u wanna try to say something that hasnt been said or say it in a different and maybe better way na mean, sorry to be critical but hopefully u value honest feedback, know i do, keep at it, peace
Forge11108 1 year ago