Yea, I think that's fair. I've had a lot of trouble doing the vocal arrangement for the second half of this song. I think this is probably the best it's been, but it has a long way to go. It wants to be expansive...and cool. Have trouble making that happen at the same time.
I love the first half of the song (up to around 2:45), but I don't like the harmony on the chorus. It sounds vaguely like country music, which doesn't fit the tone with the first half of the piece. In fact, the second half seems really "rocked out" compared to the first half and doesn't seem to fit very well...
Okay, I'll stop critiquing now and just say that I love your music, and I'm looking forward to seeing it on Broadway some day. Good luck!
my life is over is cut! this is the replacement song, we wanted something a bit more "pop" as opposed to musical theatre, and also something more male. :)
I would love to see this show performed. You kids rock!
mercuryisme 1 year ago
i don't know that i've ever related more to a musical. thank you.
trevorforever 2 years ago 7
@trevorforever I couldn't agree more. I'm so obsessed.
LaurenLeanne 1 year ago
...and i´m smoking a cigarette...this line is just so cool!!! I´d really love, if someday this show would come to germany...
yriaswife 2 years ago 4
is there any chance of TFTBY coming to the East Coast again?
Giarc1126 2 years ago
Omigod i wish i could have seen them do this show! its so good!! does anybody know if its playing somewhere??
kasually289 2 years ago
It's playing in Mountain View, California at the end of August. :3 I'm going.
CalandGG 2 years ago
Oh wow. As a 26 year old, this definitely sums up my life right now... Well done!
jennifuh1212 2 years ago
omg thats my friend cousin!!!
TBY4everandalways 3 years ago
I love the line "life's an indie hit, without all the quirky". :P
louisawhat 3 years ago 2
i really like this - and I liked my life is over. can't one of them be a reprise - repeating the theme of the bad years?
thbolt2 3 years ago
I'm really a fan of this song. The second half is rather "We Didn't Start the Fire"- I enjoy it.
yourlocalmaniac 3 years ago
I saw Dennis Moeanch as Dennis in the All Shook Up tour! He was amazing!
sketch093 3 years ago
Yea, I think that's fair. I've had a lot of trouble doing the vocal arrangement for the second half of this song. I think this is probably the best it's been, but it has a long way to go. It wants to be expansive...and cool. Have trouble making that happen at the same time.
kerriganlowdermilk 3 years ago
I actually really enjoy this arrangement. But I like rock and the "rocked out" aspect of it makes it better for me.
dancingrainbows 3 years ago 6
I love the first half of the song (up to around 2:45), but I don't like the harmony on the chorus. It sounds vaguely like country music, which doesn't fit the tone with the first half of the piece. In fact, the second half seems really "rocked out" compared to the first half and doesn't seem to fit very well...
Okay, I'll stop critiquing now and just say that I love your music, and I'm looking forward to seeing it on Broadway some day. Good luck!
CalandGG 3 years ago
And I have to say I love this WAY WAY WAY more than My Life Is Over! Maybe because this song is more relate-able to me.
geekgirl06 3 years ago
Seriously! When are you guys going to put something on Broadway! Or even Off-Broadway! You guys are way to good!
geekgirl06 3 years ago 2
I like the sound and thanks for the humor, AND the male angle!
PlythonJ 3 years ago
yeah!!!!
sandmang111 3 years ago
my life is over is cut! this is the replacement song, we wanted something a bit more "pop" as opposed to musical theatre, and also something more male. :)
kerriganlowdermilk 3 years ago
BUT i do love this too(:
emptyXwords 3 years ago
I don't know, but i loved My Life is Over
emptyXwords 3 years ago
What happened to My Life is over? Written out?
alyslikesfao 3 years ago
All of these songs are really really good. Was this a one time thing? Or is the show a work in progress? I'd love to see the entire thing!
dancingrainbows 3 years ago