Great job. Editing and camera angle usage was top rate. It blew my mind to hear Miles Davis--I used this same music in one of my But Jesus Didn't Come videos. If anyone cares to I'd appreciate any feedback someone wants to share on my work. I hope to return to school in the spring and work on film study; my videos are a sort of storyboard for a film I'd love to make someday.
i liked the twist at the end. The wife hired her first. good twist.
eagle9768 3 years ago
Great job. Editing and camera angle usage was top rate. It blew my mind to hear Miles Davis--I used this same music in one of my But Jesus Didn't Come videos. If anyone cares to I'd appreciate any feedback someone wants to share on my work. I hope to return to school in the spring and work on film study; my videos are a sort of storyboard for a film I'd love to make someday.
Frank Granger
frankgranger357 3 years ago
What a delicious ending! I thought the writing was clever (beware of rent-a-cop security guards) and the Miles Davis was a great choice!
Well Done!
jillyflower88 4 years ago
but he is soooooo lame!
gibsonrules14 4 years ago
that gal is hot
gibsonrules14 4 years ago
yeah - nice surprise ending!
sillymonkey27 4 years ago
I think it was more due to the acting - the direction and cinematography was excellent
pbdennis36 4 years ago
some of the writing was a little cheesy but liked how it ended.
blondie7791 4 years ago