i think i know what happened. mr. mitchell was the old guy she was cheating with, that's why the house maid said 'you look good for your age' cuz the old guy was the man who rented the room. the killer wasn't mr mitchell, but he was probs the woman's husband, and he effectively framed the guy she was cheating with.
@dcopley51 but the maid thinks the murderer is mr. mitchell when it sounds like mr. mitchell was really the old dude having an affair with his wife (go back to the last two minutes when the wife says she has to get home to "bren" and the killer says "good luck mr. mitchell")
why is the maid so nosy? i mean, it's great that she's trying to help. it's the right thing to do. but she sounds comfortable talking to him. i expected her to just sit there and distract him long enough for something else to happen.
Wow! I really liked this. Bob, congratulations on directing such a cleverly-written screenplay. The actor does resemble Mr. Affleck quite a lot, but that doesn't take away from his memorable performance. All-in-all, I thought it was great!!!
But he hangs her in the noose off screen. Conceivably, the noose is too low originally because he is interrupted while hanging it but then he adjust after he's killed her.
I how it would probably be really hard to do a short film and I know I couldn't do better but its a shame about the echo in the hotel room, still great movie
This is good! I like how it makes you question whether he was there to hurt himself or whether he had that end in mind all along. Nicely written. I love these writing shorts that VFS students do. They haven't been updating their channel with any new short film material though :(
i think i know what happened. mr. mitchell was the old guy she was cheating with, that's why the house maid said 'you look good for your age' cuz the old guy was the man who rented the room. the killer wasn't mr mitchell, but he was probs the woman's husband, and he effectively framed the guy she was cheating with.
MrJosh112358 1 year ago 2
great job! :)
Tinschenn 1 year ago
that's pretty damn rewatchable. 5*
cane63106 2 years ago
fantastic!
OLYMPUS7MONS7OFFICAL 2 years ago
hahaha i think the cake on the icing is the credits rolling over her dangling feet
ZiggyShiv 2 years ago
that was unexpected... nice twist of the plot
MicroDoubleU 2 years ago
nice
aliceinneverending 2 years ago
WOWOWOWOW
peacefulshades 2 years ago
loved it!
LilMissMorbid 2 years ago
The maid will make a great witness at your trial.
dcopley51 2 years ago
@dcopley51 but the maid thinks the murderer is mr. mitchell when it sounds like mr. mitchell was really the old dude having an affair with his wife (go back to the last two minutes when the wife says she has to get home to "bren" and the killer says "good luck mr. mitchell")
michelewilla 2 years ago
why is the maid so nosy? i mean, it's great that she's trying to help. it's the right thing to do. but she sounds comfortable talking to him. i expected her to just sit there and distract him long enough for something else to happen.
lilypad57 2 years ago
great story and great actors :)
i love it.
Lennitiller 2 years ago
just great or ...
maybe more :D
5*
swffilms 2 years ago
gorgeous fillm, beautifully done, great actors, clear plot, simply a gorgeous film
sobeit42 2 years ago
wow finally something great from vfc. its been a minute. this was great.
2low2rl 2 years ago
Wow! I really liked this. Bob, congratulations on directing such a cleverly-written screenplay. The actor does resemble Mr. Affleck quite a lot, but that doesn't take away from his memorable performance. All-in-all, I thought it was great!!!
san87 2 years ago 2
Awesome video, great story. Realistically, my only issue is the height of the noose.
fuzzfur 2 years ago 2
But he hangs her in the noose off screen. Conceivably, the noose is too low originally because he is interrupted while hanging it but then he adjust after he's killed her.
bas1004 2 years ago
Thanks, I totally get it now. Great work!
fuzzfur 2 years ago
i wonder how it feels to cheat someone. do they feel good?
UAEDisaster 2 years ago
this guy is kinda ben affleck
dannnissucks 2 years ago 2
acting wasn't drop-dead amazing but honestly the story had my whole attention anyways, awesome job.
Mef51 2 years ago
ohhh snap
CrossEyedLarry 2 years ago
I how it would probably be really hard to do a short film and I know I couldn't do better but its a shame about the echo in the hotel room, still great movie
snaphappy7530 2 years ago
This is good! I like how it makes you question whether he was there to hurt himself or whether he had that end in mind all along. Nicely written. I love these writing shorts that VFS students do. They haven't been updating their channel with any new short film material though :(
And yes, he does look a lot like Ben Affleck!
popaddict 2 years ago 2
I think the professional director should have considered head room. I like the idea of the story though
IsaacGolle 2 years ago
I love this institution
goranification 2 years ago
She's a real swinger ! YEA
ToadsWarts 2 years ago 2
@ToadsWarts
omg thats so bad! haha
sizzle666123 2 years ago
lol XD
TinyChubbyBuddies 2 years ago
kill that cheating bitch! yea!
Revel1011 2 years ago
I really liked the story line.
saruhara 2 years ago
interesting plot story. i think the actress kind of kills it though. she's not really good.
karadudz 2 years ago
someone has a foot fetish
loved it
SeikoPsycho 2 years ago
sry but the light is always to strong that make it unnatural
napolihuhn 2 years ago
needs more light and more "cowbell".
hellracer0 2 years ago
what ?
napolihuhn 2 years ago
ow! great end :)
zloiser 2 years ago
Love it! and he looks like Ben Affleck and she looks like the girl from baby mama except brown hair...! lol
KAYLAatTHEdisco 2 years ago
@KAYLAatTHEdisco I thought she looks like Amy Poehler too!
iTellyoueveryting 2 years ago
Nice Work!
Tyannalyn 2 years ago
5/5
BustedAA 2 years ago
great film
Protoworks 2 years ago
ooh.. twisty..
Joshes88 2 years ago
:) Awesome
Lizzilime 2 years ago
Wow
Tyannalyn 2 years ago
Wow what.
Lizzilime 2 years ago
Love it
HairManisEddie 2 years ago