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how did i miss this one? that was an excellent observation of N.Y =)..
elviradark6 2 years ago
I like your opening. Hello YouTube. Very chirpy.
Most enjoyable.
happy2oblige 3 years ago
That was really lovely !
AlicesPalette 3 years ago
I adore the imagery of this. Living in New York, I can see every bit of this, but you portray it so well for even outsiders. The last 4 verses and the line about devouring the McMuffin are my favourite parts :)
:) peacee
AhimsaShadow 3 years ago
I hope you don't mind me saying, but I believe this to be a good start to a collection of prose.
MsWriteNow 3 years ago
I agree. When I sit down to write I never know how it's going to turn out. The only thing I know for sure is that I love to write. I want to describe the world around me and share my thoughts and ideas.
Then I want to stand in front of an audience and have my words ring out crisp and clear. Is this ok?
Regards, Peter
nordicsky 3 years ago
No - I think it's wonderful that you share your writing.
MsWriteNow 3 years ago